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I have repeatedly been asked to write a follow up for one of my earliest stories, "The Dream" and here is the continuation or part two, and more will come.
Since I hadn't originally planned on writing a sequel, this one has a slightly different pace and dynamics than the first part, but I hope you will like it still.
However, I will recommend you to read "The Dream" before you read this one in order to understand the setting. You can see it here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/443868
(I got two files posted as "The dream, but it doesn't matter which of them you read since they are the same (I had some technical problems when uploading it so I got two posts))
Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report
Well, since this predator is technically a vegetarian, they should be able to survive in its stomach for so long as their air doesn't run out...
This was a cool chapter! The tentacles down below was a really cool idea, and I love that they get to have sex in something's stomach. This planet of Or is really neat since it's basically the same as our world but with occasional alien tech thrown in. It's a lot like the Fallout universe in a way, which is a whole bunch on 1950s style retro stuff, but with advanced tech thrown in that the 50s thought we'd have in the future.
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Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
Thank you, I am glad you liked it.
Since one of the main characters is technically an alien, I figured out she needed some unearthly traits, and since we all love it, why not the tentacles down there...
I do actually have enough insights in technology and biology to know what is possible and not so plausible when it comes to imagine futuristic/space scenarios, so I therefore wanted to go for something recognizable this time. So yea, almost like Fallout, but probably not nearly as bleak.
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 4 years ago Report
Yeah, tentacles are great ^^
Laws of physics are almost certainly universal, but I believe the laws that govern life on earth stop applying once you leave earth. So the more creative and unearthly the better in my opinion XD
What's scary about the Fallout universe, is that the world was more messed up before the bombs fell.
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Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report
Oh, I suddenly had a question. Why did the gecko-like creature eat Layla and Steve? As it is a vegetarian, it shouldn't eat both of them.
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Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
It will be revealed in the next chapter, things that happens will get an explanation, because they happens for one reason or another.
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Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report
OK. I got it. Thank you for answering my question.
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Posted by shortprey20 4 years ago Report
YES!!!! I have been desperately hoping for a sequel to the Dream (as it is one of my favorite stories on here!) Well done =D
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Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
Thanks, I had no idea this story was one of your favorites^^
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Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Nice!
Fun theme, executed well! And since I went and took a peek at the previous one too, I must say your skill at writing has improved since you wrote the fist part.
For some reason, I'm especially fond of the premise of a giantess obliviously 'dream-eating', and naturally assuming her 'dreams' have no real-world consequences.
Also, the fact that Nohira has naughty tentacles as part of her anatomy is unexpectedly compelling. x3
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Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
Thank you, I never really thought I would continue the story since I became happy with the open end, but since it turned out to be more popular than I though I will try to keep it up and reach a more satisfactory end. The premise of a dream turning out to be real was a strange concept I just had to write back then and I am glad you liked it, but the tentacles was just something I just added to see if I could use them for something even naughtier later, but fun nevertheless^^
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Posted by nomnomfap 4 years ago Report
Love it! Can't wait to find out what happens to those two next.
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Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report
Thanks, I am glad you are excited and I will post the next part as soon as I finish it^^
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