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The Fourth Seal, Chapter 5 - Cradle of Bones By Progressive -- Report

Pudgy legs wrapped around the paladin’s, locking her tightly in place, trembling and shaking with ecstatic excitement. Magaera’s weight pressed through the stomach from above, pounding like fists against a locked door, the sensations resonating through the mummy’s entire body. In that moment, Keziah knew they were both fucked.

Delving into the ruins below the baroness’ estate, our protagonists search for a lost artifact, but find a bit more than they bargained for.

This chapter was fun as a hell to write. Also, I, as a writer, finally discovered the Chicago Manual of Style and the proper use of em dashes.

~13k words

Plus-Ultra thanks to  Solmaximuta for edits, proofreading, and feedback. Seriously, this chapter (and the entire series, really) would have been utter shit without his editing vigilance.

According to my notes, we are past the halfway point! (Please send help for my fingers and Sol’s eyes)

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MagicOddEffect

Posted by MagicOddEffect 7 months ago Report

I'm completely hooked on this story and read every chapter as soon as I see it's up.

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

<3 I really look forward to your nice comments after I post each chapter. Thank you so much!

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cloud8745

Posted by cloud8745 7 months ago Report

Even if I'm not particularly into anal vore, you do vore scenes better than anyone else on this site, in my opinion.

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

Awww, you're so sweet! Thank you so much for such high praise!

I'm not really into AV myself (and had never written it before), but I saw the opportunity to try it here. I think I really managed to squeeze enjoyment out of it, though. For the record though, I learned how to write AV from the amazingly talented Brazzel (https://aryion.com/g4/gallery/Brazzel), so definitely go check them out for more written vore greatness.

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