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A Work In Progress Alt-Ending to:
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Posted by Robotdocter 4 years ago Report
i like this alt. i didnt feel very comfortable at all with how she basically kidnapped two kids who both obviously didnt know this was going to happen, nor that this would have been permanent. cant wait to see the rest! :D
Posted by BreadMaster 4 years ago Report
I'm with Robotdocter. I like this far better than the original. Then again, I hate these types of stories in general. If your that angry with her, knock her out, take her to a hospital and make them do a C-section, this isn't hard. Sure they'll be some legal repercussions, maybe even some jail time, but it's better than doing nothing and losing your family. If Matt and Steel still become an item, fine, but I prefer these stories, cause nobodies a moron. Thank you for your work, and fixing what was broken.
Posted by WillingWombPrey 4 years ago Report
I am honored, you think of my work that way. Thank you.
Posted by threk 4 years ago Report
I recognise that thumbnail, it's Free Cookies! by Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/view/404660