Coincidentally I had fun watching this. The mean gull stuffing his face with the poor little bird was a nice view and the belched up feathers were a nice touch. It just looked to me as if the prey turned around between panel 4 and 5 for no reason but apart deom that I adore it. Especially since he went right to digesting his prey.
I made a mistake with the tail feathers too. Sometimes I get too...excited...during drawing and miss little details that Isee after calming down a bit. Oh, well. Maybe I will go fix it later.
Minute of grammar questions. Why "they"? This word denotes the plural, but also mean he/she/it..? Strange a bit
I mean why not "it wanted" or like this?
Posted by Fischie 4 years ago Report
Coincidentally I had fun watching this. The mean gull stuffing his face with the poor little bird was a nice view and the belched up feathers were a nice touch. It just looked to me as if the prey turned around between panel 4 and 5 for no reason but apart deom that I adore it. Especially since he went right to digesting his prey.
Posted by GBBG 4 years ago Report
I made a mistake with the tail feathers too. Sometimes I get too...excited...during drawing and miss little details that Isee after calming down a bit. Oh, well. Maybe I will go fix it later.
Posted by kobrra99 4 years ago Report
Ah, that's perfect
All in all that little bird kept the promise, right?
Posted by GBBG 4 years ago Report
Whether they wanted to or not!
Posted by kobrra99 4 years ago Report
Minute of grammar questions. Why "they"? This word denotes the plural, but also mean he/she/it..? Strange a bit
I mean why not "it wanted" or like this?
Posted by GBBG 4 years ago Report
I didn't specify a gender for the robin...so used a gender neutral pronoun. I think of her as female, I suppose.
Posted by kobrra99 4 years ago Report
Just trying to improve my English. People often use "they" talking about one person and it scares me. So it's just gender neutral pronoun?
Robin is this little bird?
Posted by GBBG 4 years ago Report
The bird is supposed to be a robin, yes.
Posted by GBBG 4 years ago Report
I didn't specify a gender for the robin...so used a gender neutral pronoun. I think of her as female, I suppose.
Posted by Fallenfox 4 years ago Report
Ooh, panel 8! :O
Posted by GBBG 4 years ago Report
I like how that panel came out.