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Concept and characters: Kattu/PaoGordo.
Writing: Brazzel.

Brazzel's page:
 brazzel
https://aryion.com/g4/user/Brazzel

Continuing the same idea of having a story with the prey’s POV (just like Fun in Hotel - https://aryion.com/g4/view/537815), I asked Brazzel to write a story with Gabi unfortunately having to eat her coworkers. Poor Gabi, can’t have a break…


While you're here, check out my other comics!

https://www.e-junkie.com/marketplace/paogordo

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1634618/Gabi2C-Lily2C-Karen-and-Meg---Gunung---Issue-04

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1626491/Gabi-v-Jill3A-Vore-of-Justice---Issue-03

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1549133/Gabi---Fun-in-Eka26230393Bs-Portal

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1590652/Gabi-and-Emily---Busy-days

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1522214/Gabi-and-Emily---Fun-in-vacations

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1583266/Gabi-v-Jill3A-Vore-of-Justice---Issue-01

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1607536/Gabi-v-Jill3A-Vore-of-Justice---Issue-02

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1530885/Gabi-and-Lily---Blind-date

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1598291/Gabi-and-Emily---Fun-in-Halloween

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https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1571585/Gabi2C-Lily2C-Karen-and-Meg---Gunung---Issue-01

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1604442/Gabi2C-Lily2C-Karen-and-Meg---Gunung---Issue-02

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1540315/Lily-and-Samantha---Trust-issues

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1536029/Lily-and-Samantha---The-little-cousin

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1522212/Gabi-and-Emily---Gabi26230393Bs-Revenge21

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1567212/Gabi-and-Emily---Gabi26230393Bs-game

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1616940/Gabi-and-Lily---Fun-in-spa

https://paogordo.e-junkie.com/product/1566137/VoreWorld---Issue-01

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Heartless

Posted by Heartless 4 years ago Report

I love these stories and comics, but for some reason Gabi has just been frustrating me in the last couple. I still enjoy them but more and more I want to see her get comeuppance. But it's weird cause it's not like it's less enjoyable either.

ArrowversePreds

Posted by ArrowversePreds 4 years ago Report

This voices my opinion exactly too. I kinda wanted Edmond to escape, just to know what the consequences would be. Would people believe him?

I still really enjoyed the story though.

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

Well, I get what you are talking about. When Brazzel send me the story, the first thing I said was that Gabi was truly a terrible person. I think it's good to add this nuances to my OC. I like the regular stories where Gabi accidentaly eats someone or getting tricked by Emily, but changing the perspective to the prey shows a whole new side of Gabi.

Heartless

Posted by Heartless 4 years ago Report

She feels a bit more like the dime a dozen generic pred characters then she used too. That's fine if this what you want but it's less interesting to me. But that's just my opinion and in the end its ultimately still enjoyable to read

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

I want to bring different views to my OCs. Some may appeal to you, others don't. That's ok.

Heartless

Posted by Heartless 4 years ago Report

Yeah that's fair. Still fun stories and comics regardless so I'm always looking forward to more

PervyLesbian02

Posted by PervyLesbian02 4 years ago Report

Never grope a pred. Not unless you have a death wish.

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

for you and everybody else

Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 4 years ago Report

This is my new favorite Gabi story. Great job, both you and Brazzel. Infuckingcredible.

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

Thank yoU!!!!

ArrowversePreds

Posted by ArrowversePreds 4 years ago Report

Wow, this is great! I’d love to see a story where someone does get away and she has to catch them.

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

that would be great too, despite being really hard to imagine what could happen.

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 4 years ago Report

Yo this story is terrifying, I got some alien isolation vibes, predators in horror enviornments are awesome!

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

that exactly what I wanted!!

LIamINSecret

Posted by LIamINSecret 4 years ago Report

Man I was accually rooting for the employees on this one. Seems gaby is becoming more of a serial killer than a victim.

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

I think she was always something like a serial killer

LIamINSecret

Posted by LIamINSecret 4 years ago Report

Fair enough but the perspective of the victims is without a doubt reinforcing that fact as opposed to her POV.

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

yeah, that's true

ArrowversePreds

Posted by ArrowversePreds 4 years ago Report

I just looked again at the thumbnail for this image. Is there art for this that I’ve missed?

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

it's something that didn't came out yet

ArrowversePreds

Posted by ArrowversePreds 4 years ago Report

Ah, okay. Thanks!

algog8

Posted by algog8 4 years ago Report

Looks like she needs a new job. Preferably at a larger company.

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

Larger company = larger belly XD

algog8

Posted by algog8 4 years ago Report

A very large company, then.

Jakstuped

Posted by Jakstuped 4 years ago Report

This has got to be the best written thing ever LOL. Please make more.

Jakstuped

Posted by Jakstuped 4 years ago Report

This has got to be the best written thing ever LOL. Please make more.

kattu

Posted by kattu 4 years ago Report

Thanks! I'll do more