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Tags: alcremie cafe Digestion F/F F/M Female Pred Female Prey Male Prey Oral Vore rude undescribed prey Edit

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A shorter story than my other ones, set in Meryl's cafe, where she deals with two cases of customers being rude in different ways. I'd like to give thanks to everyone favouriting my works, really helps with the motivation.

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ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

So, they were eaten because they were rude to her,right?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

I thought it was pretty clear they were. Don't be rude to a pred providing a service, you'll likely get ate.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

So, when a bulge of face appeared, whose face it was?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

She had the couple in their at the time, up to you to decide who's face it was

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

And other blie moon series, there were reformation tag. Like that, will they get reformation?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

it's the Blue Moon's standard system, they'll reform, I didn't include the tag, because the reformation DOESN'T happen in the story itself

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

So, they might not get a reformation?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

Pretty much everyone who gets eaten on the Blue moon reforms, the people will reform, but because that happened OUTSIDE of what I wrote, it isn't in the tags

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

Can you explain more easily?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

The entire inner ring has a massive system of machines (which are partly magical in nature) which reform everyone who gets digested, clothes and all, but, gives them one HELL of a hang over

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

Then,the couple will eventually get reformed?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

probably the morning after, some people in the system get the "fast pass" and get priority and reform nearly instantly, but that is reserved for VIPS and special individuals

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

OK. If they will be resurrected, I'm reassured.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

Oh, and if it takes too many times to get reformed how long should one person wait to get reformed?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

normally people get reformed within at least 6-12 hours after they, reach the critical point of which they are, technically no longer alive during digestion, VIPS and special individuals can expect to reform in 1-2 hours

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

OK. I see. How much part are you planning to make for this series?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

oh, I don't have an ending planned, I'm gonna take it as far as I can

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

OK. Thank you so much!

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

No, thank you for actually asking me questions, you are my first watcher as well, thanks for that as well.

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

I have another question. If people get eaten by an animal like snake, lizard in this series, they will be reformed, too?

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

You get digested in any way, you'll reform
granted, 'standard' animals are, probably not going to show up in my stories

ifdre

Posted by ifdre 1 year ago Report

OK. I got it.

Pkmnguy6262

Posted by Pkmnguy6262 1 year ago Report

Neat story, and first one with alcremie pred so definitely a good story. It's true that it's short but it's still good and I hope to read more stories from you^^ especially ones with underrated or newer preds like alcremie, so keep up the good work.

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the comment, expect more stories based on the newer pokemon coming from me, might be a while though, working on some, non-pokemon related stories right now, but I'll get to them as soon as I can

Pkmnguy6262

Posted by Pkmnguy6262 1 year ago Report

Cool. Definitely looking forward to read the pkmn ones then. Definitely hoping my new favorite pokemon hatterene appears as pred in one XD just don't rush anything and take your time. Rushing things is always a bad thing and should you ever want some help or suggestions or anything for any future pokemon stories you can always shoot me a dm here. Always happy when I can help someone. Sooo keep up the good work<3

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

Funny you mention Hatterene....

Pkmnguy6262

Posted by Pkmnguy6262 1 year ago Report

Hmmm..you saying that makes me believe that it was one of the next mons you planned to write about XD if so then I'm definitely very happy and excited. As I adore hatterene.

trinart

Posted by trinart 1 year ago Report

It is on the list, just a few non-pokemon stories need to be done first.

Pkmnguy6262

Posted by Pkmnguy6262 1 year ago Report

Ok cool, certainly looking forward to it then^^. And depending on what the other ones are I might peek in as well, just mainly focus around pokemon stuff as that's just my preference. But will still probably take a look at the other stories you write