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I have had another idea and wanted to give it as I recently came across 'Pregnancy Regression' as an idea.

Now, my question is, is it any good as a plot idea or good as a standalone.

Also, cliffhanger at the end, so I would like to hear any continuations of this or theories for it, I tried for not a magic route, but you know those dominant relics.

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Groblek

Posted by Groblek 1 year ago Report

Fun story! This definitely makes a fun standalone story, in my opinion, especially since I’m fond of scenarios that involve unbirth of twins.

For a more ongoing plot, the big question I see would be where to go beyond just a few scenes of regression and unbirth - why the cult/relic is doing this, and whether there’s some sort of goal like bringing their Goddess back into the world or something like that. That’s not necessary if you just want a McGuffin to give an excuse for a couple of scenes, but if you continue it too long, that becomes an important question to answer.

PoserT

Posted by PoserT 1 year ago Report

A very good point, I guess I never really thought several stories through to make a huge story-line apparent, so I would prefer to having someone make a sequel in their own opinion.
I know I would like pictures done for these, but I don't wish to trouble anyone for their time.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 1 year ago Report

Oh, so you’re asking for people to borrow your setting for more stories from the same bar? Hmm, I might give it a try if I come up with a good scenario.

PoserT

Posted by PoserT 1 year ago Report

Thanks, that is all I ask, friend.