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The Couple By Hawkeye7 -- Report

Sophie and Ben decide to explore each others desires and kinks, leading to some bizarre and incredible discoveries.


Note: this one is a longer more intimate story with a bit more dialogue and character development, so takes awhile to get to the 'action'.
However, there is still the usual juicy elements you all know and love.

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Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

Let me know what you think of this story. I really appreciate comments, and feedback - it keeps me writing more!

MillyObouldra

Posted by MillyObouldra 4 years ago Report

Fantastic story, with a magnificent portrayal of an ideal relationship in an engaging and more than a little arousing manner. The ending is particularly good to me, though that may be personal preference. Overall, fantastic read~

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

Thanks for the comments - glad you liked it. :)

Mestrus

Posted by Mestrus 4 years ago Report

Another amazing, engaging, and well rounded story. Loved the shape shifting aspect. You don't go fantasy overboard and it's refreshing. You're great at this and it's another instant favorite. Thanks!

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

Hey, thanks so much for the kind words, really glad you liked it.

doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

Woah ????. Amazing

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

haha ... thanks again for the support!

doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

Yeah no problem , I was surprised you didn’t have boyfriend struggle more or wake up and realize he was digesting

robopratchett

Posted by robopratchett 4 years ago Report

Probably died from suffocation before digestion even started

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

True... i wanted him to drift off into eternity blissfully, without too much unpleasantness. Although in some of my stories i do take a little artistic license on the whole lack of oxygen front :)

doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

Amazing either way

AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report

I'm not normally a willing enjoyer but this was awesome and please maintain the artistic license on lack of oxygen haha

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 2 years ago Report

Thank you for the kind words… you’ll be happy to know I’ve started writing again, so more stuff coming soon! :)

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 4 years ago Report

Great fic, cute and adorable except maybe for the ending.

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

Thanks, i did ponder a lot on the ending, and it could have gone either way. :0

NewRebellion

Posted by NewRebellion 4 years ago Report

....I know I should find this tragic. I know I should pity her. But, well.....

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! THAT ENDING WAS HILARIOUS!!!!

Nice work! I QUITE enjoyed it!

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report

Hey, thanks for the comments - glad you enjoyed it. The ending could have gone one of two ways....but what a way to go! :)

Zond

Posted by Zond 4 years ago Report

The story is good, I want to continue, an alternative ending please))

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 years ago Report

Maybe, just maybe.... we will have to see. Glad you enjoyed it.

Restrogenic

Posted by Restrogenic 3 years ago Report

Love the story. Absolutely love it. But, me being a fan of Non-Fatal stuff, I’m just going to instead imagine that Ben had made a run for coffee at the local cafe after being too exhausted to make it manually. Still a good read though!

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 years ago Report

Yeah i know it 'splits' people on the non-fatal side... still hope you enjoyed it. I do other stuff which is less darker. :)

Restrogenic

Posted by Restrogenic 3 years ago Report

Guess I’ll have to check out your other works then!

AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report

I don't know if you found what you were looking for but Hawkeye7's treatment series is wonderful and nf

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 2 years ago Report

Why thank you - sorry for the time taken to respond - im now 'back' on here; after such a long time away. It makes me smile that you enjoyed it. :)

Andris

Posted by Andris 3 years ago Report

This is fantastic Hawkeye, I hadn't gotten around to reading it until now I'm ashamed to say. Very well done.

Jawasattack

Posted by Jawasattack 2 years ago Report

Simply a masterpiece! Love your work and this story is one that I have read more than 3 times now. Hope to see another one like it someday <3

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 2 years ago Report

Awwww thank you. It's really nice to hear that you enjoy my work. I have a few more now 'in the works' - so hope you like them. :)