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Ukraine worries about where to hide Canada. Canada helps her.
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Posted by VoidInVoid 3 years ago Report
I caught your post asking for comments on your pieces, so I thought I might oblige your request since I always enjoy soft vore writings. Heads up, these comments won't always share a common theme.
Now, it's been many years since I've seen anything related to Hetalia. Are these alternate names for these personified countries ones created by the creator, the Hetalia fandom, or you yourself? Either way, you using them does create good variety. And I don't think you need to explain why Ukraine uses the word "knickers" and that Canada understands her. I'm assuming you're writing these stories with the assumption that your core audience will know the quirks and personalities of these characters already - unless you're making drastic changes. Even then, the explanation does break the flow. All in all, I learned that Ukraine would have no trouble overtaking Canada and that few people would make news of the situation.
Posted by ProudVWriter 3 years ago Report
Their alternate human names are made by the Hetalia fandom.