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Jessica's got a lust for ending up as lumps but her mom wants her to live to adulthood! How Annoying!
Shortest of the shorts for me but fun to make. Took literally an hour yesterday to make this.
Pics here if links fail:
https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=88&t=32934&p=2796307#p2796307
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Posted by 33defence 4 years ago Report
Love it! I'm happy you're back. Do you think you'll be making more posts soon?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report
Yup, a couple of my own then more commissions
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
great story. I would love to see how the "interview" goes as I love sex in a belly.
Posted by Dooot 4 years ago Report
I wish my stories were as good as yours. Could you please give me some advice?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report
I read and listen to a lot of stories. I end up pulling threads of things I like from different sources and mashing them together a lot of the time. To be entirely honest this story was inspired by a facebook meme an old flame posted about a cheating girlfriend.
Another thing I've found that really helps is to put yourself into the character, imagine how they'd think and react. What kind of upbringing did they have? How would that temper their reactions?
Last thing, I don't like to outright have characters make bold statements. Instead of having someone scream "I LOVE YOU" I'd use more subtle signs of affection, like body language. I enjoy subtext greatly. This story is built on that, with every line the mother hears having a second meaning to the person on the other end of the phone. Sometimes it means the reader knows more than the character, sometimes it means the characters know more than the reader.
I'm rambling though, and I've many more manips to make for the next story!
Posted by empatheticapathy 4 years ago Report
It's cool to see something short from you.
Also I'd love to end up watering the neighbor lady's flower bed.
Posted by deej1011 4 years ago Report
Ngl, I kinda feel bad for the mom in this. She's trying sooo hard but it's ultimately for naught, and it's obvious she like, cares a lot ><
Posted by ryanshowseason3 4 years ago Report
Understandable.
Posted by NonBinaryFuta 4 years ago Report
Herms are the best! I love the trickery of these clever girls!
Posted by altreo3 3 years ago Report
would you mind doing a part two where she gets eaten and digested then her mom finds out she is curious about vore?