A few months ago I went back to take a look at this story because I kind forgot about it, and with a few years of hindsight I realized that it could use some improving to say the least.

I've been tinkering away at this ever since, trying to turn what was really just a hastily written smut fanfic into a "real" story, or at least something with a little more depth and detail.

Many of the sections are mostly unchanged beyond some grammatical fixes for consistency and some proper spacing corrections, but many of the more "rp" sections of the it have been rewritten to make it a more flowing story.

Now, I'll just say this to get it out of the way: I'm not all that much of a writer. Compared to how I am now from when I wrote this I can tell you that I've definitely made progress, but still, writing is not a thing I do on a daily basis, so take that into consideration.

I don't know if this will be the end of this, I doubt it. I could easily see myself coming back to this and adding a ton more detail, or maybe even doing some kind of continuation, but for now, this is it.

(Lastly, this was written in WordPad, which has no spellcheck, so while I did my best expect to catch at least a few errors throughout)

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