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Lysithea encounters a seemingly normal merchant at the market one day, but experiences a bewildering loss of reality afterwards. Is it just a coincidence? Or is something sinister being planned?
Contains minor spoilers for Lysithea's backstory and other parts of Three Houses.
Although not explicitly stated in the story, Lysithea is 16 years old at the time, but is seen as a child by the other characters due to her short height and because she gets insecure about being treated like a child, ironically.
This turned out way longer than expected, and I feel I may have dragged out some parts too much. If you think it was too long, please let me know about it, or do likewise if you liked it.
Either way, I hope you enjoy it!
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Posted by Hamxxdude 4 years ago Report
Who is lucia
Posted by InvisibleHand 4 years ago Report
She isn't a character from Three Houses, I made her up for this story. Sorry for the confusion.
Posted by tsukaistarburst 4 years ago Report
Boooo! It was all going so well and then the pred dies at the end!? What a wonderful, detailed story ruined by a terrible ending.
Posted by InvisibleHand 4 years ago Report
Sorry you didn't like the ending, I thought it would be a good way to wrap things up. I'm glad you liked the rest of it though.
Posted by mechaplatypus 3 years ago Report
damn I want more like this, I really love the gradual fattening
Posted by InvisibleHand 3 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad to hear you liked it.
I'll secretly admit that I do plan on writing a sequel/alternate ending, but it will take a while. I take ages to write stuff, especially atm.
Posted by EvilFuzzy9 2 years ago Report
A neat story. Very slow-paced, especially at the start, but that helps with building the suspense, and it gives more time to show the chemistry between Lucia and Lysithea. Definitely had a more dark and tragic feel, with Lysithea succumbing to her sexual needs at the last moment despite trying to cling to her pride.
It honestly felt less like erotica for me than like horror/drama, but in a way that works for the story it's telling. Lucia's ultimate fate felt very cathartic as well, and the only more "just" end for her would have been to cooked alive. But while that might have been hot, and a very exquisite twist with her succumbing to utter despair, it would have probably seemed too contrived in the setting.
Regardless, I liked it. A keenly bittersweet story that highlights the pred's twisted desires and shows more realistic consequences for her actions. My own preference is usually consensual cooking with happy, wanton meat sluts, but I think this was a nice story, and there's definitely something to be said for this darker and more tragic take.