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Got carried away with a little something... This alternative universe is way better than our universe, for reasons you will find out soon!

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Thumbnail is a cropped version of this (because the face doesn't fit):
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/571483

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NOTE: I also created a personality test for this story! It's somewhat funny.
https://www.allthetests.com/quiz37/quiz/1581356057/Which-SuperFlavorMan-are-you

Please comment which SuperFlavorMan you are according to this test~

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BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 months ago Report

I loved this so much, thank you so much for writing it <3

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 months ago Report

<3 Thank you for the compliment! It is very much appreciated!

zobabu

Posted by zobabu 3 months ago Report

Nette Idee und interessante Geschichte :3

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 months ago Report

Danke :3 Woher wusstest du das? Du hast das Testergebnis vergessen!

zobabu

Posted by zobabu 3 months ago Report

Was genau meinst du? ^^;
Achja und ich bin der... minzige Wind Mann!

Ich kann den anderen hier übrigens nur zustimmen: Du bringst dieses Feminismus Ding ziemlich gut rüber in deinen Stories. Finde die ganze Debatte im real life teilweise etwas nervig aber in Verbindung mit vore ist es sehr nice :3

ckeekyzekey

Posted by ckeekyzekey 3 months ago Report

I just love these femdom universes where women have a ‘men are food’ mentality.

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 months ago Report

Exactly... They are way ahead of us in terms of equality and feminism! We have a lot of work to do :p
Did you do the personality test thingy too?

ckeekyzekey

Posted by ckeekyzekey 3 months ago Report

Yep. I got Minty Wind. I was hoping to get the Water Type, but this is cool too.

cycloneshadow

Posted by cycloneshadow 3 months ago Report

this is really good! btw what did you use for the thumbnail?

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 months ago Report

I linked the thumbnail in the description now. It's Asuka but I had to crop her face because her top hair style and eyes don't look like I imagined the protagonist of this story!

ErRynArya

Posted by ErRynArya 3 months ago Report

I know this thumbnail, as well as it's much better alt-version where she got a dick cuz her face just makes the pic perfect x3c

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 months ago Report

Yes I saw it too! By the way don't forget to do the personality test, Minty Winds Man >:-)

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 3 months ago Report

Muy buena historia, amo este universo!
Me hubiera gustado leer como stella digiere su comida

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 months ago Report

I don't understand Spanish but I think you want to see how little Stella treats her Minty Wind's Man!

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 3 months ago Report

Si!

Circle0Trick

Posted by Circle0Trick 1 month ago Report

This was fun to read. I would have preferred more description in eating, or digesting, or disposing, or something of that nature. That said, I do enjoy the universe and seeing people's interactions.

You built Faye as a character well; she seems like such a person. she makes sense. You built the setting smoothly as well. The whole story flowed smoother than Kale out Faye's butt.

Also, I got 30% three way tie for Lemon, Mint, and Chocolate♡
I approve~

Thank you for writing and posting.

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 1 month ago Report

Thank you for your elaborate critique I appreciate it! And nice test result... They stand for pee, fart and poo :^)

Circle0Trick

Posted by Circle0Trick 1 month ago Report

They match my interests expertly