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Uploaded: 11 months ago

Views: 1,164

File size: 167.00 KiB

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Comments: 6

Favorites: 30

CONTENT WARNING: Kidnapping, Violence, Threats of Violence, Murder, Implied Graphic Digestion, Implied Disposal

Length: 8,633 words

My first submission to the site. About a guy who is obsessed with a rock musician, and intends to make her a part of himself.

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Chameleonette

Posted by Chameleonette 11 months ago Report

Obsessive/possessive preds are great and under-utilized, in my opinion. Your writing is really fantastic and kept me engaged from beginning to end. This was a great read~

Jakester443

Posted by Jakester443 11 months ago Report

Ahhh~ Thank you so much! Love your M/F work, so it's pretty exciting to see you comment on this.

Choco0

Posted by Choco0 11 months ago Report

Nice one !

Jakester443

Posted by Jakester443 10 months ago Report

Ahh thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed. :)

PhantomWolf

Posted by PhantomWolf 8 months ago Report

Not bad at all, I like how you capture that predatory tunnel vision focus that comes with the mentality of a man obsessed. Very "Fatal Attraction esqe". well Done

Jakester443

Posted by Jakester443 8 months ago Report

Thank you! It was definitely a lot of fun to try and get in the headspace of someone dangerously obsessed with something.