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Part tres of the Neighbor Kyle series
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Posted by DanceMovesFutanariverse 4 years ago Report
AAAHH! I love this soo much! <3
Posted by AustinDR 4 years ago Report
Thanks.
Posted by HMDVore 4 years ago Report
love how kyyle treats the kids no differently than a burger and fries
Posted by Pokémon 3 years ago Report
I mean, whats the difference:)
Posted by SpokleArt 4 years ago Report
Good story! Gonna assume though you meant Kyle was nearing 2000 pounds, not the 200 pounds you listed
Posted by AustinDR 4 years ago Report
Maaaaaybe.
Posted by SpokleArt 4 years ago Report
Lol I actually saw in some of the earlier stories how it's been a steady progression from around 190 pounds. I THINK you may not be familiar with imperial weights, as 200 pounds is around an average US male weight with a little chub (I'm significantly more than 200 but I get around fine).
It's a funny but honest misunderstanding/mistake. I guarantee though no one would look at 200 pounds as abnormal (much less swallow cannibalism capable) so you may want to review/revise? Keep up the good work regardless.
Posted by AustinDR 4 years ago Report
Alright.
Posted by AustinDR 4 years ago Report
But otherwise, glad for the comments. Love your work.