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Tags: adventure Clio Ejderha F/M Fantasy Female Pred Isekai Jeremiah Acacius Male Prey Naga Naga Pred novel Edit

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The Legend of Peran: Acacius is a fantasy story set in Peran starting in the 1990s. It follows the life of Acacius who is an experienced pilot from the U.S. Air Force that stumbles into Peran after getting lost in a storm while chasing an unknown contact over the skies of Alaska. In his efforts to find a way home, he meets Clio Ejderha who is a self-taught witch with incredible power.

This series is not crowd funded, and I intend to write for it as it fancies me, but if you want to support my work in any way you can either give directly by Paypal or find me on Patreon. Unlike my other stories however, I will not accept requests for this one. There is only one other person in the world who has any say in how this story goes, and they prefer to remain anonymous.

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The two always meet on the shores of change.

I was going to wait until I finished work to post this but honestly I'm in a pretty shit mood for reasons not related to this writing and seeing comments about my work makes me feel better.

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JustAHat

Posted by JustAHat 4 years ago Report

Hey nice work, this is going to be a great isekai

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ArcaneSigil

Posted by ArcaneSigil 4 years ago Report

Very nice thus far.

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BurningRuby1909

Posted by BurningRuby1909 4 years ago Report

Yeah i love isekais bht adding vore and demis nake it better hehe

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ig00r

Posted by ig00r 4 years ago Report

I like the character development. While they show behavior you might expect in a pred vs prey situation, they're not acting stereotypical.

"though my favorite is when they crawl in" does Cio imply willing prey here?

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Aces

Posted by Aces 4 years ago Report

Naturally she implies that. :P

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Dashmaster13

Posted by Dashmaster13 4 years ago Report

10/10

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PrismaticAria

Posted by PrismaticAria 3 years ago Report

 I'll be honest, I've never been a fan of the phrase "tailgut." Something about it just sounds... Wrong. Though, I suppose I'm not one to talk, considering I can't think of something else that better depicts the intended meaning. "Stomach" is a generic term that can confuse the reader if the character has more than one, and "Tail" is, similarly, a tad too simple and confusing, as a Lamia's tail is often more complex than just "a stomach."
 Any thoughts? Or perhaps you've never thought it something to ponder?

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