Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report

Poor Joy...though it's pretty funny seeing a character who didn't even really know what vore chess entailed finding herself in this position.

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

And now she has to endure the squirming of eleven people in her belly, until she finally manages to digest them. With no longed-for pile of cash to compensate her for her efforts!

The people in her stomach don't care, though. They're just happy to be there! ;)

Posted by lazylayjay 3 years ago Report

I actually feel a bit sorry for Grace...and it's all my fault! Ha ha. Thank you for writing her, you did a grade A job.

The rest of the story is wonderful too.

I think I know who is into the next round but I'm not completely sure why Elizabeth was eliminated. Did she retire herself?

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

I won't tell Grace that you're the primary cause of her misfortune. ;)

Thanks! There can only be four semi-finalists (by definition), and Melodi is guaranteed a place because she's the defending continental champion. So only the best three winners of the four matches can join her into the semis. Elizabeth didn't do well enough to advance.

Posted by Ladybellylover 3 years ago Report

I appreciate you including my idea for Jamelia. You did a great job bringing her to life. Her introduction was memorable and I know that she would have enjoyed eating all those people but I don't think it will ever give her as much pleasure as eating her daddy's business associates. She can return to her luxurious life as spoilt rich girl. Perhaps her father should find her a husband to keep her occupied, if he can stop her from eating him.

My prediction was three out of four correct. I thought Anisha would beat Elizabeth but I didn't count on them both being eliminated. I also didn't factor in Erika, I don't know whether she is a genuine contender or not because she is paranoid but determined at the same time. Her match with Nelly might be a lot closer than people think. And didn't she come second last time behind Melodi?

I'm glad that Grace has been eliminated. It would be impossible to have another round with her squirming in her seat!

The most interest storyline of all could be Joy's, I can't remember any character's quite like her in an IVC story. A non-pred forced to eat people for money and she has failed. Will there be consequences?

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Yes, maybe Jamelia's dad will want to make her someone else's problem! :)

Well remembered: I don't think anyone else has noted that, but it was indeed mentioned that Erika was the runner-up behind Melodi two years earlier. Which is why she's angry: She thinks she was cheated by the organisers that time.

Grace is probably quite relieved herself that she doesn't have to eat anyone else! I don't think she'd have been able to stay still. And she might have had a bit of an uncontrollable eruption down there.

Posted by passingthroughyou 3 years ago Report

Excellent. There's so many other things happening aside from the vore.

I'm looking forward to Erika's next match because if things don't go in her favour, she will go bonkers.

This is a long story!

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Thanks. I think Erika is going into that match *preparing* to make a scene if anything goes wrong!

Posted by Pabulum 3 years ago Report

It's a real shame that Elizabeth felt bad enough to stop eating. I liked her the most. I don't know who to root for now. Vivee I guess.

Very imaginative with the way the shrunken people become edible chess pieces.

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Elizabeth was several readers' favourite. Just four girls left in the running now, though!

Thanks. I'd done it once before eight years ago: an earlier African qualifier: https://aryion.com/g4/view/207376 . Also, Karbo has drawn vore chess (with unwilling 'pieces'!) in his comic book "Check and mate" ( https://aryion.com/g4/view/235903 ). I used it as inspiration for Ayna's origin story in Felarya: https://aryion.com/g4/view/301684.

Posted by Sleepless 3 years ago Report

Can't wait for the conclusion. These stories are awesome!

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by Diabolique 3 years ago Report

Je ne m'attendais pas à ce qu'Anisha et Elizabeth soient éliminées, mais Erika ne l'est pas!!?? Je suppose que ce sera un match très intéressant contre Nelly, elle trouvera une excuse si elle perd, c'est sûr.
Le niveau de détail est suprême, il donne vraiment vie à l'histoire. J'espère que le reste est déjà disponible à lire!

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Il y avait un ou deux indices suggérant qu'Erika pourrait bien réussir au moins sa première partie. Et oui, je pense qu'elle se prépare déjà à protester si elle perd face à Nelly !

Merci ! :) Il faudra attendre un peu avant la suite, par contre.

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

Pardonnez-moi si j'ai été impoli, je sais que c'est une question qui n'a rien à voir avec cette histoire.
J'ai juste besoin de savoir,si katrika est actuellement en vie
Je suis désolé si je t'ai offensé

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

I always love your stories you are a great French Snack writer, but you can answer a question please.
The Naga Katrika this Dead Canonical ?
Katrika is my most favorite character of all felarya, and I am worried about a conversation of its creator in your story Story 37 - A Moment and Forever, said this:

If I may interject-Katrika has recently had her preys experiances brought home to her. It's shaken her badly.

I don't understand, katrika is she dead?
is she currently alive?
I thank you if you answer me, be honest even if it hurts.

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Hi. I've only just seen your messages; I've been very busy with work in real life.

Katrika's creator (Zoekin) stopped writing, and Katrika's situation is unknown. The last time we saw her (chronologically) in one of Zoekin's stories, she had been transformed into a slimoid. As a slimoid, she then separated into two beings, one of whom was eaten by the slug-girl Velvet. The surviving slimoid may only have had incomplete memories of being Katrika. Zoekin then deleted that story, however, along with all his other stories.

No-one writes about Katrina any more, partly because no-one knows what her situation is supposed to be.

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

First of all thank you very much for answering me and your time.
I just registered a few days ago, but I have known Felarya for many years and I love her characters and stories.
I thought it was okay because his comment:
If I may interject-Katrika has recently had her preys experiances brought home to her. It's shaken her badly.
Two years later in a drawing he wrote this:
Usually as food although she has adopted a baby slug girl recently.
I wanted to be sure.
You will see Katrika is my most favorite character of all and I love it (I don't know if, I'm glad she is alive, but).
Could you answer some questions for me:
Do you think there is hope that this slimoid will become katrika again?
because its author does not write anything for years has abandoned.
could you write your about it to avoid that fate?
If you have erased all your stories it would be like starting from scratch, right?
I would be very grateful if you spend some time with my comment.
Thank you very much and sorry for the inconvenience.

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Since her fate was never resolved, and probably never will be, I'd say you're free to imagine whatever you choose. So if you want her to be OK, it's fine for you to decide that that's what's happened. :)

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

I even imagine that it never becomes a slimoid?
(forgive me if I'm being heavy) you are a very kind person.

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

please this is the last question

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

I even imagine that it never becomes a slimoid?
(forgive me if I'm being heavy) you are a very kind person.
Please, this is the last question and I don't bother you anymore with this topic (it is to clarify my stupid doubts)

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Please don't post the same question multiple times. Especially on a page which is for reacting to an IVC story. Yes, you can imagine whatever you like.

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

My apologies will not happen again and thank you very much for everything. I'm thinking of writing felarya stories and publishing them, and the first story where I leave zoekin with katrika I imagine this:

Katrika recovers her form (with the help of Vivian I suppose), she does not remember Anna but she feels that she is a very important person to her.
When Velvet eats her other half, she dreams in a dream that Katrika is with Anna and plans to kill her (because she thinks it is important to Katrika).
Katrika confronts Velvet to save Anna and defeats her but this death wound and confesses that she loves Anna, Anna tries to do everything possible to keep her alive until Temi arrives and saves her.
What do you think, will people like it?

I will keep commenting on the stories you post and sometimes I ask you for some advice to make good stories.
Well thank you very much for everything and I am very sorry for the inconvenience that I have caused you. I wish you the best of luck and you are a very kind person. :)

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

Please answer me, forgive me if I have made you angry.
say something.

Posted by HappyBlanket 3 years ago Report

This made me happy :)
But now I'm sad because there is no more :(

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Thanks. But yes, patience is needed now...

Posted by HomoErectus 3 years ago Report

Is there more of this story?

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

There will be. Perhaps within the next two or three days, even.