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Tags: aftercare BDSM Casual vore Catgirl Comforting Consensual demon prey Demoness dominant prey F/F Fatal Female Pred Female Prey ghost girl Implied Digestion Lesbian Loving pred loving prey masochism masochistic prey Milf milf prey Neko Neko girl Neko Pred Older Prey Older woman Oral Vore Reluctant Pred romance Romantic vore submissive pred wholesome wholesome lesbian stuff wholesome noms Willing Willing prey Younger pred Yuri
A demon asks out a cute neko employee of hers on a date with one end in mind for how the night will end.
this was very new to me in both style of writing due to trying first person but also the fact that I lightly used bdsm (something I had little to no knowledge in before writing this) so if I got the bdsm angle wrong please inform me and I apologize
also found the idea of a dominant prey and submissive pred to fun a concept but still wanted to keep it at least slightly wholesome.
I tend to use names related to a characters species and the ones are no different.
Taba is named after Taba the catgirl by skylark here on the site.
Kayako is the ghost from the grudge and even shares a similar appearance to her name sake.
Gamori is one of the 72 demons of goetia who has powers over seduction and appears as a beautiful woman.
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Posted by Tahg 3 years ago Report
I haven't read much bdsm but I'm not sure there's a "wrong" way, at least in fiction, and this site has conditioned me to not really find any sort of situation surprising anymore. Someone with more, or actual, experience with it might disagree.
First person was fine, used consistently, and I think it worked well for the story. (I personally only don't like second person, or stories that randomly switch between the 3.)
Posted by nervousvampire 3 years ago Report
well I know there is certainly one way to do it wrong and that would be something like ignoring after care which I made sure to include. Sadly the famous "bdsm book" fifty shades doesn't.
I hope it was at least enjoyable