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A warrior returns from the battlefield to a well-deserved welcome from his lover.

I decided to try my hand at something different this time, a fantasy story with a romantic theme.

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Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 11 days ago Report

Huh well that’s certainly an odd tribal scenario that leads them open to ambush... and from what I could tell of the tales of combat, it seems more like the enemies were told to avoid combat and scatter... guess something might happen in there soon

Nuenshi

Posted by Nuenshi 11 days ago Report

Yeah, I admit it's not the most logical practice. I sort of envisioned the villages as an allied community that would cover for each other, so the men of one village would stand guard while the others were unbirthed.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 11 days ago Report

Hmm maybe a sequel where the tribe is captured and fit with chastity devices , to prevent any indecency on the part of the soldiers while the wives are questioned, peacefully, over a period of time, maybe they begin to understand they weren’t there to fight and that there could be peace until another tribe comes in to demand their freedom. A unintentional effect of the protective chastity devices is that they are unable to release the Warriors on their own, which would allow a start of a dialogue maybe letting them see the other side, and help Kura understand why Ako wants to be outside more

merelyatoy

Posted by merelyatoy 10 days ago Report

Great, and really original. I don't think I've seen these the themes used together in this way before - men being 'stored' for use, the woman's hunger to unbirth her lover, taunting him about never being let out, her conviction that men belong inside women, the mutual pleasure, and mass absorption/transfer - but they all work really well together.