Okay so for one, BB should have bigger breasts like she usually They look small and flat, which makes the pic harder to me to enjoy. Her stomach looks like its just glued onto the skirt so it looks like her whole torso is round like a globe, including her back. She looks taller than she should be because of it.
Its same size vore but her belly doesn't reach her knees or even her thighs, so it looks like there is no real weight to the prey being consumed there. It would be better if her stomach was bulging outward and sagging down, maybe showing a little bit of hips in the process. There is also no hint of a swallow bulge. Arms wouldn't make much compared to a head but her chest is definitely to relaxed for a mid swallow pic.
No comment on her face since that just seems to be your style. Its not a big flaw to point out compared to the other stuff I said. Regardless, I still enjoyed it.
Thank you. It was very helpful.
(I'm not good at English, so I'm sorry if the translation is rude.)
I knew that the character I drew was "There is a mistake in the invisible part of the waist" and "it looks like a ball because the belly bulge is in the center of the body", but I did not know how to cure it well.
The advice, "The bulge of the stomach hangs outward so that you can see the waist a little," is correct. I will study.
Posted by Artist-san 3 years ago Report
Seems a little off but I appreciate the effort! More BB is hype!
Posted by ZELKnotos 3 years ago Report
Thank you!
I'm studying a lot, so I'd like you to say more and more if you have something to say.
Posted by Artist-san 3 years ago Report
Okay so for one, BB should have bigger breasts like she usually They look small and flat, which makes the pic harder to me to enjoy. Her stomach looks like its just glued onto the skirt so it looks like her whole torso is round like a globe, including her back. She looks taller than she should be because of it.
Its same size vore but her belly doesn't reach her knees or even her thighs, so it looks like there is no real weight to the prey being consumed there. It would be better if her stomach was bulging outward and sagging down, maybe showing a little bit of hips in the process. There is also no hint of a swallow bulge. Arms wouldn't make much compared to a head but her chest is definitely to relaxed for a mid swallow pic.
No comment on her face since that just seems to be your style. Its not a big flaw to point out compared to the other stuff I said. Regardless, I still enjoyed it.
Posted by ZELKnotos 3 years ago Report
Thank you. It was very helpful.
(I'm not good at English, so I'm sorry if the translation is rude.)
I knew that the character I drew was "There is a mistake in the invisible part of the waist" and "it looks like a ball because the belly bulge is in the center of the body", but I did not know how to cure it well.
The advice, "The bulge of the stomach hangs outward so that you can see the waist a little," is correct. I will study.
Posted by ZELKnotos 3 years ago Report
I'm honestly glad you praised me. Thank you very much.
I wasn't studying enough to know the Fate characters. I should have known more.
Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report
I love your drawing
I always love BB predatory
Posted by ZELKnotos 3 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by ShadowRayquaza 3 years ago Report
Very good! There isn't nearly enough BB pred in the world.
Posted by ZELKnotos 3 years ago Report
Thank you.
We should increase more.