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F/m vore story, includes sex and digestion.

Tom dates sweet and gentle Lydia because she is too short to swallow him.
That gives him protection against other man-eaters.
Of course his perfect plan goes wrong.

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onemantroupe

Posted by onemantroupe 1 year ago Report

Very, Very, very well written.

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Thank you very, very, very much! :P

Stovo

Posted by Stovo 1 year ago Report

Great writing. Loved the character build up.

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Thank you :)

theonlymatt

Posted by theonlymatt 1 year ago Report

Seeing the byline, I just knew it'd be great. You never disappoint!

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

I aim to please! :P

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 1 year ago Report

This was pretty damn good, I tip my hat to you.
The dialog between the two was def on point...
Outstanding <3 <3 <3

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Prey/pred dialog is key to a healthy digestion :P
Happy you liked it!

Tolun

Posted by Tolun 1 year ago Report

Ohhhhhh I love this so much. Excellent work as always!

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Glad you liked it! :)

Fania

Posted by Fania 1 year ago Report

I just realized you are the author of one of my all-time favorites, Elves Aren't Green. I'm so glad you decided to keep contributing!

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

It's been a long time since I wrote a story, that's for sure!
But I wasn't offgrid, I made a vore game and captioned manips. Check them out, it's the same kind of vore:
https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=88&t=11032
https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=52311

I'm very flattered Elves Aren't Green is among your favorites :)

theonlymatt

Posted by theonlymatt 1 year ago Report

Miss Warmdepths is my favourite story, period, but Elves Aren't Green is high up there too/

somedude601

Posted by somedude601 1 year ago Report

Very good story. I've always had a thing for loving preds. Plus the disposal scene was pretty good as well.

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Thank you for commenting! :)

kailan

Posted by kailan 1 year ago Report

thank you for this excellent story. you are one of my favorite author.

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Thank you very much! :)

Soroxas77

Posted by Soroxas77 1 year ago Report

Can we get more stories in this setting?

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Maybe someday. But I am a very slow writer :/

snow_presto

Posted by snow_presto 1 year ago Report

Yes, finally a new story from Sarus! Thank you so much. My favorite is Boobfish but I like all of them so far.

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Hey! That's my weirdest one :P
Glad you liked it!

TableManners

Posted by TableManners 1 year ago Report

What a great story - the dynamic here was so perfect!

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

Sir, you were caught writing far above the authorized pun limit.
I'm gonna need to see some plate and registration :P

TableManners

Posted by TableManners 1 year ago Report

Seems like there's been a misunderstanding, officer. As you can see here, I have a Class O license for oblivious. I can assure you, there was no pun intended.

mouth111

Posted by mouth111 1 year ago Report

Amazing. This story gave me nostalgia as it feels similar to some vore stories on writing.com i read like 13 years ago when i first discovered what vore was.

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 1 year ago Report

You know, I used to post on writing.com a long time ago.
Amusingly, some stories are still up:
https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/998870-Elves-Arent-Green
... that was in 2005, now I feel nostalgic too :P

Too bad the interactives didn't survive, there were some nice ones :(

Luxio512

Posted by Luxio512 5 months ago Report

I would say I'm not a prey, but this story truly makes me hesitant about my place in the world.

Sarus

Posted by Sarus 4 months ago Report

Come, join the dark side :P
Thank you for this encouraging comment!