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The sixth and last part of my "Dreams" series. Will Nohira be able to help the two small humans, Steve and Layla back to earth? And will the alien lizard ever give up on eating Layla?

This last part of the series may reflect upon the fact that "The Dream" originally was meant as a one shot and it has therefore difficult to continue writing with larger segments of vore in it, so I will end the story with this chapter. Please, leave a review and tell me what you think^^

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ifdre

Posted by ifdre 3 years ago Report

So, Nohira and the lizard go to the Earth and eat people at Earth?

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Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

That how it ends, at least for as long as she keeps it. I guess she wanted to live out her naughty fantasy before finally giving him away.

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ifdre

Posted by ifdre 3 years ago Report

I hoped no more people will be dead in here...

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Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

I will leave that part entirely up to your imagination ; )

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ifdre

Posted by ifdre 3 years ago Report

OK. Thank you so much!

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DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 3 years ago Report

It's funny that Nohira seemed to feel so bad about it when she first realized she ate people, and was making so many efforts to make sure the same fate didn't befall Steve and Layla, and yet once that conflict was resolved, she goes straight back to her rampaging giantess mode!

That was a really cool story! Thank you for putting so much effort into the continuing chapters, even when you intended it to be a one shot.

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Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

Thanks, I was unsure how to end this so I eventually decided to make a twisted end. But this time, Nohira will try to be a little more anonymous during her visits to earth. Not that it will help the people she will encounter here...

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DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 3 years ago Report

By Katelyn's reaction, it seems like the people of Earth already know about her existence. How many will believe it is yet to be determined.
Part 7... Lol just kidding!
But at least it seems like the next few days some lovely women - and maybe a few men - are going to have a very good day! How fortunate they won't have to go to work the next day XD

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LM321b

Posted by LM321b 3 years ago Report

Out of curiosity, what's the source of the thumbnail?

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Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

Hi, I forgot to write it in the introduction text, but her name is Dani Mathers.

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Umhuebr

Posted by Umhuebr 3 years ago Report

I know that this was an end to the series, but, think you'll ever consider writing more of Nohira again? She was a most interesting character. Seeing more rampages by her, some day, would be neat!
Speaking of which, she definitely had the best character development in this series, going from reluctant/sad about taking lives, to embracing her predatory side.

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Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report

I am happy to hear you enjoyed the story enough to want to see more^^
Yes, Nohira had some character development through the series, behind the other ones back of course ; ) and I could perhaps be tempted to write an extended epilogue one day to explore her predatory site further. It is reviews like this that encourages me^^

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