Posted by Robotdocter 3 years ago Report

the original is actually super hard to read due to the ending, and apparently the commissioner is known for paying for that kinda stuff

Posted by ExistentialRowlet 3 years ago Report

Max123 is the original commissioner i believe.
A lot of the unbirth related commission's he does are borderline kidnapping, usually centred around some random women taking the younger sisters of a some guy and then leaving him to wallow in despair.

Posted by Robotdocter 3 years ago Report

the fact that most if not all of their commissioned stories end with a brother losing almost if not all of his family really makes me sick, not trying to shame anyone here, but im an older brother and i think thats at least some of the reason why i hate the thought so much, i also just hate kidnapping in this scenario aka vore

Posted by ExistentialRowlet 3 years ago Report

i mean vore is a fetish where people can be killed by the thousands, but something about these kidnapping scenarios really rubs me the wrong way. may be because im some what desensitised to death idk

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

Seee I think the reason is because of the relationship the commissioner makes the brother have with the kidnappers and the lack effort he puts in to get them back . It’s like he just gives up and Stockholm Syndrome

Posted by ExistentialRowlet 3 years ago Report

yeah true.

Posted by JacksonTheEmperor 3 years ago Report

Yeah... That's...honestly very disturbing and uncomfortable.

I get that vore is very free to do that, but still.

Pardon my language, but it feels fucked up to me, especially with kidnapping involved...

Posted by Robotdocter 3 years ago Report

i LOVE this ending, the other endings you wrote for the original are great, but i love when justice is achieved in this way, i hate ntr and i hate non-con where they get away with everything, so this is PERFECT.

Posted by BellyLover045 3 years ago Report

It's kind of sad that he doesn't meet his future wife in this ending.