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Emily [Road Trip] By DustInMiEye -- Report

An Emily story based on last picture.

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TW

Posted by TW 1 year ago Report

Well done. Fantastic pacing and great story telling.

DustInMiEye

Posted by DustInMiEye 1 year ago Report

Thank you :) means a lot. If you have any ideas to upgrade my amateur writing please feel free to share :)

TW

Posted by TW 1 year ago Report

I shall do so. :)

Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 1 year ago Report

Oh, this was great. I was sort of wondering how it was going to end once the conversation between Emily and Charlotte turned from awkwardness to relief, and it was a rather welcome surprise that it was just a hefty denouement slice-of-life rather than the usual trope of converting someone to become a predator.

I enjoyed the pacing of this immensely. It feels frankly wholesome, as everyone came out of the story's central conflict better from it.

Well, everyone that matters, I s'pose. ;)

DustInMiEye

Posted by DustInMiEye 1 year ago Report

Hahaha yeah almost everyone ;)

Thank you letting me know what you think of the story. And if you have any form of critique please feel free to do so :)

DustInMiEye

Posted by DustInMiEye 1 year ago Report

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