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Another day starts for Markus and Isabella, with the two spending time bonding. But Markus is firmly reminded that he has debts to pay. And that he must find a way to deal with those debts, while raising and taking care of Isabella.
Based on the Lamia Daughter Quest once run by The Saint of Ravens. With some inspiration taken from his quest as well as changes and new input from myself.
Please share your thoughts on the story. I would appreciate input so as to improve both as a writer and to make this story more enjoyable.
Posted by ribs 3 years ago Report
Looking forward to where this goes
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Posted by walkingbyself 3 years ago Report
If you don't mind me asking. What about the story has you hooked and looking forwards to more?
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Posted by ribs 3 years ago Report
I do enjoy a good story. So far you have set up a main that has a lot of problems to solve and someone to protect, a world with near unlimited creatures to use in near any setting you want, and best of all the question of just how important to someone that the whole family was wiped out.
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Posted by walkingbyself 3 years ago Report
Thank you, I hope the future chapters keep you looking forward to more.
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Posted by shadow9774 3 years ago Report
Both this and your previous chapter were excellent! Can't wait for the story to continue. :)
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Posted by walkingbyself 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
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