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Dinner of Champions [OV] By wolfSnack -- Report

You've finished your first day as a professor, but your mind keeps coming back to the gentle, sweet raccoon-girl sitting in the front row...

Connie is working hard to gain some muscle tone before the soccer season starts, and maybe she'll be willing to eat you as part of her protein-rich bulk-up regimen!

But as you two get to know each other before practice, will you remain as JUST her food...

Or will a little pre-dinner romance bloom? :3

See art for this story here!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/707952
https://aryion.com/g4/view/703829










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Connie is a total sweetheart, and she appreciates your contribution to her athletic regimen!

The blue section of the opening is shared with Ashley's OV story (albeit revised), but the story takes a different path afterwards :)

This is a scene I've been very excited to write, after the THREE *awesome* art pieces that  MarkusFreeman320 has made for Connie:

https://aryion.com/g4/view/625701 and https://aryion.com/g4/view/623466 and https://aryion.com/g4/view/627585

Go give his art some favorites! :D

Another story in the Graduation universe, extending  MarkusFreeman320's interactive story and  vixingirl's stories. The original Graduation game can be found here: https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=51509

This is Connie's first scene, but she'll be showing up again~

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TheSoulessGem

Posted by TheSoulessGem 1 year ago Report

Fantastic, first as well.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

Glad you like it so much :3 Thank you for beta reading!

FDdragon

Posted by FDdragon 1 year ago Report

Damn. What a great story. I'm more and more hyped up for the full interactive...

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

That’s so sweet of you to say! Connie wants me to ask if you taste just as sweet as your words~

What did you like in particular? :D What should I emphasize when writing similar stories?

FDdragon

Posted by FDdragon 1 year ago Report

Keep doing what you are doing right now honestly. Everything needs balance.

MarkusFreeman320

Posted by MarkusFreeman320 1 year ago Report

I know I say this every time you write an especially hawt story, but this is the hawtest story you've written yet! :3

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

As always, this is the highest praise to hear :3

AFox196

Posted by AFox196 1 year ago Report

Great job! I really love how this story came out

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

Thank you!! I love how your shading adds to the art, and I can't wait to see your take on the other two art pieces here :3

techtician

Posted by techtician 1 year ago Report

Wow this one just hit everything and actually made me feel a bit. Really good job. Also reminding me I have a thing for Raccoons...

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

Thank you :3 Raccoons are hawtttt <3

And I'm glad this pressed the right buttons for you~ What specific aspects were pleasing for you?

techtician

Posted by techtician 1 year ago Report

Well there was the previously mentioned raccoon but the disposal, POV as prey (I'm rarely in a prey mood but this did it), the detailing was amazing, the story got me invested in the characters, the disposal and sex bits were great! In general just an awesome job.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

Thank you, I'm very pleased that I got you into the prey POV :3

Have you read the other stuff I've published in this universe? Especially the Ashley scene (https://aryion.com/g4/view/608263), which I think might push a lot of the same buttons~

techtician

Posted by techtician 1 year ago Report

I'm not sure if I've read that one but I do know the jackal ones and the fox one in the bar really got me too. Such good writing.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

Thank you! The jackal ones are some of my favorites as well -- Bella is a really fun character to write -- and I'll be writing more fox vore soon! Vicky's older scenes need a rewrite :)

somedude601

Posted by somedude601 1 year ago Report

I love it. Kind preds are something that just makes me melt, and it's unfortunately not very present in this universe. It's great to see one.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

Kind preds aren't very present in this universe? I've gotta fix that ASAP! ;) I'm glad you liked it though!

Pharo

Posted by Pharo 1 year ago Report

For some reason, I imagine the coach sounding like Jane Lynch...

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

Heh, I could see it~

Evelyn will show up in other scenes, don't worry!

Yurinya1900

Posted by Yurinya1900 11 months ago Report

This story was amazing! I'd kill to be able to write like this, haha.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 11 months ago Report

Thank you! What did you like about it?

I've only been doing any kind of fiction writing for maybe 18 months, the only way to learn to write like this is practice :)

Yurinya1900

Posted by Yurinya1900 11 months ago Report

What I liked about it.. That's a tough question, If I had to say it was that it felt properly sorted in how the actions, characters, and wording was used, Whenever I try writing I feel I use the same words over and over again and end up being not as descriptive as I should when necessary.
I've tried writing by turning RP logs with friends into stories, but I feel I never got those right either, I could really use any tips for a beginner if you've got any!

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 11 months ago Report

Hmm. My first couple stories were adapted from RP logs, but even in the best case that rarely provides more than the dialog and direction for the story :) What I'd recommend is that at each "important" moment, you write down the various sensations that the "narrator" character is experiencing, and try to get the reader immersed by engaging all their senses in that moment. Moreover, it's important to show characterization at bit indirectly, by making your characters lovable/engaging through their relatable reactions to the situations :)

Yurinya1900

Posted by Yurinya1900 11 months ago Report

Haha yeah, that's something I noticed where sometimes It's more dialogue than actions, It's weird how others are more 'direct' about their character which often just makes it Weird and a mood-killer.
Though I could try a lot of it, Many thanks!
Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays btw!

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 11 months ago Report

Thank you, Happy Christmas/Holidays to you as well!

I think that dialog is the verbal version of show-not-tell, it's (almost) alway better to come up with dialog which reveals your characters' personalities rather than summarizing or generalizing in prose -- as in, I'd rather write dialog which shows someone as sweet and gentle rather than say "she was a sweet, gentle raccoon".

When possible, that is -- I'm actually bad at dialog, I get a lot of help from  markusfreeman320 haha.

MarkusFreeman320

Posted by MarkusFreeman320 11 months ago Report

He does, I studied smutty art at Nomshire University with a minor in smutty dialogue XD

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 11 months ago Report

I'm surprised you're still in one piece after studying there, you preyslut you.