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part two of this comic. ( https://aryion.com/g4/view/390051 )

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Kismet

Posted by Kismet 4 years ago Report

Their innocence is what makes all of this cute.

Tai223236

Posted by Tai223236 4 years ago Report

Am I ready? Yes, yes I am!

Keiganib

Posted by Keiganib 4 years ago Report

I can't wait for this. I loved the first one and I'm probably going to love this one.

Corona29

Posted by Corona29 4 years ago Report

I loved the series. Can't wait to see what part 2 brings

Gazmaz

Posted by Gazmaz 4 years ago Report

Does the blonde one have a huge ass to anyone else?

mmmooo55

Posted by mmmooo55 4 years ago Report

it... might be a diaper, but in my experience diapers don't appear behind the legs :/

unless the blond is trying to hide something embarrassing about the pink one... hmmm.

NeoXtreme

Posted by NeoXtreme 4 years ago Report

Hiding the pink ones stomach because she ate 3 same sized girls.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

yes, exactly

CarlyVT

Posted by CarlyVT 4 years ago Report

Its the other ones stomach

CarlyVT

Posted by CarlyVT 4 years ago Report

I saw this on Pornhub lol

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

wait, what?

CarlyVT

Posted by CarlyVT 4 years ago Report

Its on there.like the 4th thing if you search vore

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

what even... thats unsettling

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 2 years ago Report

And dishonest. It’s not even porn.

porky11

Posted by porky11 1 year ago Report

It's not?!?
At least some of the situations appeal to sexual fetishes.
But I guess, you're right.

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 1 year ago Report

I mean, it's called PornHub, not
AppealingArtVaguelyRelatedToSexualFantasyHub.
Something like this simply doesn't belong.

porky11

Posted by porky11 1 year ago Report

Does PornHub only allow porn? I thought most porn sites are just like video sites which don't forbid porn. I don't think, they forbid non-porn instead.

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 1 year ago Report

Maybe, but it's just not worth all the gross sex ad traffic.

CandygirlSerena

Posted by CandygirlSerena 2 years ago Report

Is it still there?

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 4 years ago Report

Yay! More! Cant wait to see it~

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 4 years ago Report

HELL YEAH!

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 4 years ago Report

owo Ooo, there's gonna be a part two? X3 I'm excited.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 2 years ago Report

there's a part 3 too

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 4 years ago Report

Oh HELL YES!

RediQ

Posted by RediQ 4 years ago Report

ooh, looking forward to this :3

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 4 years ago Report

Pff...the Oh Noes are making me laugh way more than they should be XD

Drakira

Posted by Drakira 4 years ago Report

I agree! I can't help but smile seeing it

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

those cheap knockoff cereals will do any gimmick to sell it

Flatheaddog

Posted by Flatheaddog 3 years ago Report

did you guys notice the milk too?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 2 years ago Report

at this point, i think you're the only one that's pointed it out xD

Flatheaddog

Posted by Flatheaddog 2 years ago Report

I'm just cool like that

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 4 years ago Report

Yay! Page one! Also so much cute in this, and madison lil chubby belly bulge~ :3

MidNightOwlArt

Posted by MidNightOwlArt 4 years ago Report

Not really? Girl you just eat three bullies a few days ago!

Looking great so far! Always looking forward to the next page! ^__^

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 4 years ago Report

Same here

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

thanks! these are always appreciated

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 4 years ago Report

Daww, that round lil cute stuffed belly~ so cute! ❤

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 4 years ago Report

It’s kawaii

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 4 years ago Report

Kawaii belly

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 4 years ago Report

I'm wondering who the 'snack' is gonna be :3

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

it's anyone's guess >_>

thelastsoul

Posted by thelastsoul 4 years ago Report

Joseph looking through the keyhole: N I I I I I I I I C E

QuakeImperial

Posted by QuakeImperial 4 years ago Report

There a way for me to get the whole comic early?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

if you do, let me know. cause i havent finished it yet xD

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

...Is Rachel going to be a snack this time?

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 4 years ago Report

Yeeeeessss~

dodoman_1er

Posted by dodoman_1er 4 years ago Report

They are so cute~

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 4 years ago Report

Adorable! Also, glad to see you continue the story with them, as well as you posting the comic on here, rather than patreon! <3

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 2 years ago Report

my stuff isn't behind paywalls xD the most artists can do with it is early release on patreon

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report

Eeehhhh... I see a lot of patreon-exclusive stuff posted on here, so seeing this not be there is really nice. Thank you a lot for making sure this was brought to the public, rather than just being patreon-exclusive! ^^

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

Is it bad for me to hope that Rachel gets eaten this time?

dekabreak

Posted by dekabreak 4 years ago Report

Not really?

She is pratically a psychopath way too much into her sister who encourages her to eat people and, if you want to kinkshame her, really damn into scatplay, i mean there is an unfinished story all about her torturing a nun if you look hard enough so...yeah.

I don't really mind because in a lot of cases, i expect mass preds to have someone who is a huge jerk around them.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

yeah its super released out of order, i feel bad about that lol

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 4 years ago Report

That was Rachel? THIS Rachel?! Damn, I saw that!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol yes that was the same rachel xD

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 3 years ago Report

...Damn...

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

yup, spoilers i know xD

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 3 years ago Report

Eh... I've been spoiled so much for so many things I've started to become numb...

I guess it just goes to show what can happen if you leave vorarephilia, in a world where VORE IS POSSIBLE, unchecked.

Geemer

Posted by Geemer 2 years ago Report

Hey, since I can't find that, and this was a year ago I'm not expecting much of anything, but is that story still kicking around and where, because I am interested in reading it.

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 4 years ago Report

Daww~ ❤

shadow9774

Posted by shadow9774 4 years ago Report

My spidey senses are tingling.

EdgySpiderman

Posted by EdgySpiderman 4 years ago Report

Mine too

Tai223236

Posted by Tai223236 4 years ago Report

Same here.

Your avatar is very fitting with your post btw, lol.

CarlyVT

Posted by CarlyVT 4 years ago Report

I dont have a spidey sense but somethings tingling

Dest

Posted by Dest 4 years ago Report

Man this mom is a real bitch, I hope she becomes food.

Keiganib

Posted by Keiganib 4 years ago Report

This looks great so far! Keep up the great work!

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 4 years ago Report

I'm guessing they'll be needing new neighbors soon...

Mizuna

Posted by Mizuna 4 years ago Report

I’m still wondering how they got home

Mizuna

Posted by Mizuna 4 years ago Report

GOD HATES WINERS?!? LMFAO!!!

157and493

Posted by 157and493 4 years ago Report

“Nobody likes a gross girl.”

This mother has obviously never met me or half the people on this site.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 4 years ago Report

My thoughts exactly

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

i think if she ever visited eka's, her brain would melt

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 4 years ago Report

God she's such a karen

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

? what does that mean?

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 4 years ago Report

Like one of those moms who think that what they say goes even in public or in the eyes of the law, and thinks she can do as she pleases.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

lmfao, oh. yup. that's their mom in a nutshell

origamimaster4

Posted by origamimaster4 4 years ago Report

nice call back with the girl on the cup

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 4 years ago Report

Bitch, "I" like "gross" girls.

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 4 years ago Report

Hmmm, I wonder what that meeting is about...

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

Something about four students going missing, perhaps?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

my guess is its over the lousy quality of the school lunches

QuakeImperial

Posted by QuakeImperial 4 years ago Report

Will I be able to see future pages if I pay or is this just being posted normally here

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 4 years ago Report

no not of this one since its a commission.

Keiganib

Posted by Keiganib 4 years ago Report

This is looking really good so far. Keep up the great work!

CarlyVT

Posted by CarlyVT 4 years ago Report

dun dun dun

dodoman_1er

Posted by dodoman_1er 4 years ago Report

Oops magical colour changing pants
I love the poster

Zaneisweird

Posted by Zaneisweird 4 years ago Report

They were a one time buy! Get them while they last! XD

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 4 years ago Report

You are the only reason i noticed that

Mizuna

Posted by Mizuna 4 years ago Report

I see something phallic here, but I’m not gonna say what it is, because HA HA they’re underage

Zaneisweird

Posted by Zaneisweird 4 years ago Report

I see it lol

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 4 years ago Report

I actually enver noticed ha when I drew it ha!

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 4 years ago Report

I didnt see that at first

ripleysonic

Posted by ripleysonic 4 years ago Report

LOL the misspelled title made me chuckle

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 4 years ago Report

lol wow, I had plenty of time to change it too

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

If you're hungry, Madison, you can always eat your sister. She might last you longer than those chips.

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 4 years ago Report

Nice so a world with other preds, a backpack that looks like a penis if held a certain way

Anesthetic

Posted by Anesthetic 4 years ago Report

Is the backpack supposed to look like a Dick, or have I finally crossed the Porn Event Horizon and nothing will ever be the same again?

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 4 years ago Report

it was 100 percent unintetional

Anesthetic

Posted by Anesthetic 4 years ago Report

I really hope that was sarcasm otherwise I'm going to have to do some serious self inflection.

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 4 years ago Report

its not, I seriously did not notice while drawing it.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

That be a surprising plot twists as she grows a dick

RediQ

Posted by RediQ 4 years ago Report

Ate three girls at once, now she's a lil bit tubby and hungry all the time. Adorable~

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

im sure it's unrelated

Flara

Posted by Flara 4 years ago Report

Cuteee

Flara

Posted by Flara 4 years ago Report

Part 2 electric boogoloo

rabidPsionic

Posted by rabidPsionic 4 years ago Report

I cannot believe she's littering right next to a sign that tells her not to do just that.
I am offended and appalled.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

but not that fact she's eaten and digested at least 4 girls?

rabidPsionic

Posted by rabidPsionic 4 years ago Report

Some crimes are far worse than others.

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 4 years ago Report

BAD! Don't just throw trash on the ground! >;c

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

she's a rebel. she rebels

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 4 years ago Report

naughty girl. littering next to a sign is wrong

CarlyVT

Posted by CarlyVT 4 years ago Report

Yes its bad unless its flordia

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

Oh no

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 4 years ago Report

-w- Cute lil loli tum...hee~

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 4 years ago Report

Neat uwu

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

I get a hint of magic

Bright

Posted by Bright 4 years ago Report

Nice mug.

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 4 years ago Report

Perhaps some people have entered and never returned?

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 4 years ago Report

I recognize "rustling your jimmies", that's an OLD meme!
Also, Madison's face in the 3rd panel is TOO CUTE!

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 4 years ago Report

Is someone peering at them through the window?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

maybe, maybe not :3

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

Hahah

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

That ass tho

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 4 years ago Report

Kinda looks like she’s showing off her belly in the first panel and her friend is mesmerized by it XD

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

sister xD

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 4 years ago Report

=w= Ehehe, I like that first panel out of context. >w> Like she's warming her sister up to her belly~

DragonqueenShyvana

Posted by DragonqueenShyvana 4 years ago Report

Oh god is this teacher hot and have big tits i hope she is a pred.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report

Same, hopefully a non fatal teacher too

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

maybe, maybe not. gotta stay tuned to find out :P

DragonqueenShyvana

Posted by DragonqueenShyvana 4 years ago Report

I wait and i hope its surprice my

threk

Posted by threk 4 years ago Report

Students gotta serve detention somehow

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 4 years ago Report

That stomach got flat real quick :eyes:

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

i mean, Madison eats like a garbage disposal. she has to digest stuff eventually

NotMax

Posted by NotMax 4 years ago Report

...So is something gonna happen soon, or...?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

no, never. there is no anything happening in this comic ever

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 4 years ago Report

Eat the entire class while the teacher is asleep

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

goddamit now i want to do that as a non-canon pic

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 4 years ago Report

Good good

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

I feel like someone's gonna say something To the wrong person today

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 4 years ago Report

Damn those boobies :3

MadKing

Posted by MadKing 4 years ago Report

I get the feeling that teacher is next on the girls menu.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

What are you hiding under the desk's?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

totally not a vibrator

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

By the shape of the hearts in her eyes I don't think so

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report

Let me guess. Voreaphile who will wal around wearing a skintight digestive suit soon.

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 4 years ago Report

Loli PREY tag?

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 4 years ago Report

She... Looks like a completely different art style. XD

MidNightOwlArt

Posted by MidNightOwlArt 4 years ago Report

Eeeewwwwwwww! /)^3^(\

shadow9774

Posted by shadow9774 4 years ago Report

Last two panels are so wholesome I might just cry. The art style further reinforces it imo. :)

Zaneisweird

Posted by Zaneisweird 4 years ago Report

How cute!

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 4 years ago Report

Plz dont let teach be big ded by the end of this, shes too wholsome

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

*holesome

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 4 years ago Report

*wholesome

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

*some holes

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 4 years ago Report

Oh

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 4 years ago Report

I hope the teach eats someones

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

maybe, maybe not. who knows? certainly not me. not like i wrote it >_>

cloudrunnerteeny

Posted by cloudrunnerteeny 4 years ago Report

das so cute~

CrimsonShadow

Posted by CrimsonShadow 4 years ago Report

Everyone’s calling this wholesome, but I’m getting some Wataten vibes.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

i literally have no idea what that is xD

CrimsonShadow

Posted by CrimsonShadow 4 years ago Report

Recent anime about an adult woman who fell in love with a loli.

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

Quick, Maddy, eat both the teacher and Rachel at once!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

im like 98% sure if Madison tried to eat Ms Devereux, she'd die xD

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report

Bet she swallows it whole to foreshadow ara ara noms

JoshthefreindlyNaga

Posted by JoshthefreindlyNaga 4 years ago Report

Why do I have the feeling the teacher is gonna nom her >->

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

perhaps because their interaction is drawn by a vore artist

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

I got to think of one where did her shoes go Into it looks like there's a panel missing It's just a dialog it seems like there's something missing

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 4 years ago Report

Why do I have the feeling that the teacher will eat Rachel?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

is that a challenge

marilove567

Posted by marilove567 4 years ago Report

So is something gonna even happen in this comic????

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

nope

Moonlightshadow

Posted by Moonlightshadow 4 years ago Report

Yeeeee...
That teacher is predator.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

or maybe she's just a really good stuffing prey

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 4 years ago Report

Shotas must love that teacher

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i plead the 5th

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 4 years ago Report

Teach starting to seem less wholesome all of a sudden

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 4 years ago Report

Foreshadowing owo~

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 4 years ago Report

or is it... voreshadowing

harpylove

Posted by harpylove 4 years ago Report

Gasp...

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 4 years ago Report

Ooh nice

Keiganib

Posted by Keiganib 4 years ago Report

Damn, that teacher can eat that apple in just one bite.

Bellyl0ver

Posted by Bellyl0ver 4 years ago Report

The teacher’s gonna train them in vore, isn’t she...

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i mean, would it really be so bad if she did?

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report

Ara ara ~

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 4 years ago Report

But seriously in the last Panel her shoes disappeared Did you walk to school without shoes

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report

This would be a perfect way to counter intruder lockdowns, have the predator teachers store all their students inside themselves safely, and then let the substitutes aids or office staff loose to hunt down the intruders

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i wont even lie, that'd be sweet comic

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 4 years ago Report

Ooh I can't wait

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 4 years ago Report

some bullys gonan get eaten by that awsome teatcher i knw it

Tafillia

Posted by Tafillia 4 years ago Report

what a lucky apple~<3

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 4 years ago Report

sisters?

Thagrahn

Posted by Thagrahn 4 years ago Report

Rachel likes Madison and the Teacher, and both Madison and Teacher are preds...

Teacher is also thicc and curvy with an impressive size difference compared to Rachel.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

it's almost like she has a type

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 4 years ago Report

I look forward for more! <3

Okzero

Posted by Okzero 4 years ago Report

:o

veryhappyboi

Posted by veryhappyboi 4 years ago Report

Oh my, there appears to be another

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 4 years ago Report

That's a neat party trick right there.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

yeah but after showing the trick, there won't be much of an audience left :P

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 3 years ago Report

True enough.

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

Hopefully some delicious students will become meals soon.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Sorry about what

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

I'm missing some contacts here

cycloneshadow

Posted by cycloneshadow 3 years ago Report

aw that's sweet.

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Oooh! Nice to see more! I keep looking forward everytime i log on the site for more! :)

Simplespectator

Posted by Simplespectator 3 years ago Report

Hmmmmm. Target acquired.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

The aggressive one or The innocent one

DarkPinkie

Posted by DarkPinkie 3 years ago Report

Totally the aggressive one. Clearly this pair is like schoolyard vigilantes, totally nomming the bullies.

Thagrahn

Posted by Thagrahn 3 years ago Report

Next meal, and a possible friend sighted.

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Oh nice! A new page! And i was thinking about this comic too. :)

Keiganib

Posted by Keiganib 3 years ago Report

How often are you going to post these?

dobyvatel

Posted by dobyvatel 3 years ago Report

Love where this is going rachel is such a good pred

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

15 pages without any vore. That may be a record for a vore comic.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

if you're reading only for the vore, you will be disappointed. my comics do have vore but its not always the focus

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

did you see her skirt? she'd trip for sure

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Potential prey within reach, preparing digestive measures

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

Oh dear. I have a feeling this is gonna end with her eating more than the burrito.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Looks like it's lunch time

KOR

Posted by KOR 3 years ago Report

Looks good so far

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

oh

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

There's jealousy somewhere here

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

nah, nope. rachel isnt the jealous type

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Rachel is going to eat someone XD

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 3 years ago Report

-w- The lore deepens!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

#VoreLore

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 3 years ago Report

Obscure fan theory verified: They're demon childs!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

wait, there are theories on this?

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 3 years ago Report

*Throws cover over corkboard* ...N-no...?

something1337

Posted by something1337 3 years ago Report

I think I prefer infernal twins better.

Flara

Posted by Flara 3 years ago Report

What happened to page 17?-

necidime

Posted by necidime 3 years ago Report

It is actually in another folder: https://aryion.com/g4/view/602956

Flara

Posted by Flara 3 years ago Report

Oof, didnt notice XD

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

there was a mistaken on the page and it was reuploaded after. for some odd reason it wasnt added to the folder, though

EdgySpiderman

Posted by EdgySpiderman 3 years ago Report

Gokai it appears you forgot the 17th panel lmao

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

This is gonna be a meeting about a student digesting students isn’t it?

Keiganib

Posted by Keiganib 3 years ago Report

Or possibly about those kids going "missing"

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

either that or the principal is pissed that ppl keep taking the faculty parking spaces

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

Knew it

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 3 years ago Report

Uhoh this is gonna get messy before it gets better

SaoYuuki

Posted by SaoYuuki 3 years ago Report

Karen.

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 years ago Report

I'm very confused

abud13

Posted by abud13 3 years ago Report

Pretty sure tge parents are worried about the "missing" (dramatic irony) children.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Oof, its the fuzz

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Bad girl what you going dooooo

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

what you gonna do when they cum in you

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

haha i see what you did there

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Everyone is so cute! Even the policewoman~ ❤

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

did you just assume her gender

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Lol. Very funny. Now that i got your attention. Cant wait to see madison vore again but also that teacher~ And the police lady has a cute look so cannot tell when a surprise pred might happen in the comic. :)

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

while i cant comment on the teacher thing, don't worry madison will be voring again. I promise xD just if it were only her eating ppl, it would get boring lol

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Haha i completely understand and do not worry! Im glad to hear you plan some variety in the comic preds too! Indeed it would get a tad boring even if the story is their perspectives. :)

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 3 years ago Report

here comes the vore cops

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Always there when peoples go missing :p

Moonlightshadow

Posted by Moonlightshadow 3 years ago Report

'^ '
I kinda like the look of that police lady~

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Same here, i also like the pred teacher~ I wonder if we might get a surprise pred. :)

Moxx

Posted by Moxx 3 years ago Report

This seems to be in the wrong folder.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Something about missing people I guess

MakCin

Posted by MakCin 3 years ago Report

We all know where this is going

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

I got a feeling this page was quicker to draw so we will be seeing the next one soon. :3

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

we tried to get a few built up before she took a break for June

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Oooh okay very nice! Hopefully she have a nice break! :)

Rixx

Posted by Rixx 3 years ago Report

What does the NH part stand for?

I'm loving this series so far!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

it's the name of the city they live in, it's called New Haven

Rixx

Posted by Rixx 3 years ago Report

Thanks! I figured it was the city name, but couldn't remember if it had been mentioned in non-acronym form.

kibroman

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

How cute the police girl is.
is to make an oc with it

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Five missing students?

dodoman_1er

Posted by dodoman_1er 3 years ago Report

Five? I guess Beatrix was a student there too then.

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Five? Werent they four? Unless the teacher has to do about one missing... ;)

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

Meanwhile the bones are swirling in the septic tank.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

who said there were even bones left to find? >_>

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

5?!

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Maybe another story in the works?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

yes, yes there is

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Ha I knew it

Jaxed

Posted by Jaxed 3 years ago Report

That cop is gonna get ate.

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 3 years ago Report

ahh they will find them easily, just check the girls toilets

deltn259h62

Posted by deltn259h62 3 years ago Report

Wonder if the mother of those two has a hunch?

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

Considering that there are multiple preds this world must know of vore also yay temporary realistic reactions to people who go missing

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

thanks, that's what i was going for

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

When people try to portray semi realistic they forget about cops, parents, families, cameras, witnesses who saw them last with certain people, phones, repeated events around that person leading to them being watched especially if its mass missing people. Also read their adult profiles of the 2 and looks like they both could vire but one would only do it if told its protecting the environment

TableManners

Posted by TableManners 3 years ago Report

I love those faces! "Reality Ensues"

Keiganib

Posted by Keiganib 3 years ago Report

I knew it.

thas

Posted by thas 3 years ago Report

wait who is the fifth

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Hmm- perhaps the teacher eats the police officer :3

Moonlightshadow

Posted by Moonlightshadow 3 years ago Report

And that was the moment...
They realized that they screwed up.

Mizuna

Posted by Mizuna 3 years ago Report

Who TF is the fifth???

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 3 years ago Report

Oh god karen

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 3 years ago Report

karen alert

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i think it's more like karen ate karen

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 3 years ago Report

karen-ception

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 1 year ago Report

I'm actually mad i missed this comment until now xD

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 1 year ago Report

lol its ok bud

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

I hope Rachel can also vore too

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 years ago Report

That is one effective belly owo

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

she's like a bottomless pit... gotta fill your pockets with the free food

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Bet the Karen ate someone too, maybe we can deflect the blame from the loli

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

but wouldnt that just be too easy xD

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Does eating humans count

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Awesome to see a new panel! Also madison is so cute ❤

I also see the parents likely from each of the earlier comic ones. Just need to think who might be who. :)

Oh and i dont get the karen comments. Is this about the fat blonde lady?

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

It's a meme about women that want to speak to the manager or are otherwise very vocal with complaints, usually about things that don't matter as much as they make it out to.

Somehow the term 'Karen' stuck and is now the go to term- to the point that some morons have tried to say it's a sexist term to call a woman it.

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Oooh. Must be a american thing but i understand now lol! Yea so basicaly they are nasty peoples just like the sjw seeing racism everywhere while themselves worse.

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Pretty much yeah

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 3 years ago Report

Gettin a lot of Karen energy from this lady.

IvISenpai

Posted by IvISenpai 3 years ago Report

Gettin' a lot of Karen energy from this lady as well.

deltn259h62

Posted by deltn259h62 3 years ago Report

I agree with the entitled Karen energy being there, ick.

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 3 years ago Report

She should be vored too

Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 3 years ago Report

That'd be a hefty meal

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 3 years ago Report

One could hibernate afterwards

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Hibernate for how long? Months? Years? That's a huge bitch

JustaLurkingPony

Posted by JustaLurkingPony 3 years ago Report

Karen energy is most definitely picked up

JennyWakeman1903exe

Posted by JennyWakeman1903exe 3 years ago Report

The Karen Readings are off the charts

derpsquid42

Posted by derpsquid42 3 years ago Report

Karen energy detected. Starting Manager location sequence.

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

how shall we proceed with this captain?

derpsquid42

Posted by derpsquid42 3 years ago Report

Attempt "I am the manager" bluff stat!

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

ay captain!

penitent2k

Posted by penitent2k 3 years ago Report

I mean her daughter is missing, its not like she got the wrong order at mcdonalds lol

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 3 years ago Report

So you would say this is warranted? I would be inclined to agree.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Ooooooohhhhhhh

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 3 years ago Report

karen goin get the vore police treatment

JennyWakeman1903exe

Posted by JennyWakeman1903exe 3 years ago Report

Yeeeeesssss

chaotic123

Posted by chaotic123 3 years ago Report

how many pages to this version of comic?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

It isn't fully completed yet so we aren't sure at this moment

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

Stacy is a floater now. They all float down there!

JennyWakeman1903exe

Posted by JennyWakeman1903exe 3 years ago Report

Karen Detected, Vore Police must be called

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

My word she seems to be natural born killer if she is ok and making jokes about the people killed unless theres some secret reviving mechanisms in the world that takes a few years to work

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Well i mean she IS just joking about Stacy. The cunt that bullied them to the point they were hiding before going to school

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

True although I was thinking from a realistic perspective that if accidentally killing someone they would not be making jokes or purposely going out of their way to kill 3 others who they know where nothing more than dumb lackys who technically did not deserve to die. Also still enjoy the comic its cute whish they had animal_ears and tails though *biased to kemonomimi girls* and i want to see the other sister eat once be kinda amazing if she could do it with her butt instead like its a accidental discovery

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

Also i assume that there is a secret reviving mechanisms to the world then

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Ooof the burn last page! x3

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

so can someone give me a full definition of what a karen is?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Basically a loud, annoying, entitled, middle aged woman who thinks she knows it all. The "i want to speak to your manager" for any small inconvenience type

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

i know the very line from r/slash

JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 3 years ago Report

Kids have gone from cute to psychopaths, definitely not liking the shift. I hope those kids are alive in there, just shrunken down or waiting for reformation.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Is Madison a psychopath though? I mean, this is stacy we're talking about. She bullied them endlessly until Madison accidently ate her.

JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 3 years ago Report

Which is bad and she should've been punished, but one count of manslaughter (Stacy) and three counts of 1st degree murder (Stacy's friends) are on a whole different level.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

bruh, it's a vore comic xD

JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 3 years ago Report

A person's fantasies tend to reveal a person's world view, bruh.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Disagree. Just because someone writes about something doesn't mean they have to agree with it or even that it reflects them. That's why it's called fiction.

JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 3 years ago Report

First off, I said tend.

Second, depends on the context of the subject. How it's presented.

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 3 years ago Report

you got any sources to back that up?

I enjoy very sadistic porn because Im a bit of masochist, but in real life I hate seeing people get hurt. I can't even watch live porn because its bothers me not knowing what the level of consent between people in the porn film are. (there a lot of fucked up stuff that happens on porn sets) Yet I love rape play and I love reading comics and stories about rape. I'd never wish it on anyone, or even myself even though my fantasies often place in that position.

A person fantasies probably reflects past trauma, but to say it reflects their world view is not true at all.

JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 3 years ago Report

1. Said tend.
2. Depends on the context and how it's presented. For example, someone who hates the police will often portray them poorly and deserving of what they get in their fantasy.

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

There is no reform or revive. This is perma death vore not endo like vore. Its normal for a pred in vore to act like this mostly especially willing preds.

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

I also want to add this is very tame with no gross things like gore yet or very disturbing stuff. If you cant stomach it this isnt for you.

JennyWakeman1903exe

Posted by JennyWakeman1903exe 3 years ago Report

WARNING! WARNING! Angry Karen Detected!

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Officer shes disturbing tbe peace eat her... err arrest her

Ento

Posted by Ento 3 years ago Report

I mean, her reaction isn't unreasonable, to the whole situation.

psvorefan1520

Posted by psvorefan1520 3 years ago Report

This.

NeoXtreme

Posted by NeoXtreme 3 years ago Report

She looks like human Miss Piggy

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

great... now i cant unsee that

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Haha

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

I wanna see her get eaten (And that sexy teacher lady as well)

Topazert

Posted by Topazert 3 years ago Report

Whoops! Better hope she dosen't find out you ate her daughter or things will go very poorly for you.

Drakira

Posted by Drakira 3 years ago Report

Aww strawberry girl! At least she liked her 'disappearance'

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

hah. strawberry girl. i like that

vitoris

Posted by vitoris 3 years ago Report

Aww, I wonder if seeing a less obnoxious mom will make them feel bad about what they've done.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

The balls in your park girls

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Belly pudge detected~ :3

MidNightOwlArt

Posted by MidNightOwlArt 3 years ago Report

That would explain why she was sad on the previous pages.
Good details!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

appreciate it! i do try xD

Raiza

Posted by Raiza 3 years ago Report

Stop making us think of the coinquences! Dx lol

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

but the comic is literally called "aftermath" lol. it's supposed to xD

Raiza

Posted by Raiza 3 years ago Report

Shhhhh >.> xD

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

DUN DUN DUNNNN

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Looks just as tasty in the picture- Mom looks like a treat as well

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

I guess the only choice now is to eat the entire local population.

Okzero

Posted by Okzero 3 years ago Report

Wasn't that the girl who enjoyed being eaten?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

yes she is lol

Mordecai777

Posted by Mordecai777 3 years ago Report

I really hope this teacher ate a kid hence the belly pudge.

Bright

Posted by Bright 3 years ago Report

Pretty teacher.

Bright

Posted by Bright 3 years ago Report

Infernal twins, hah.

TheMystique

Posted by TheMystique 3 years ago Report

Oof, casually laughing at your murder. This won't bode well for the population of the city.

Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 3 years ago Report

Guilt

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

I knew school food sucked but damn

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

never trust a school cafeteria to cater any events. even if it's a school one :x

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 3 years ago Report

Ooh it’s getting interesting can’t wait to see more

Sergit

Posted by Sergit 3 years ago Report

I have the feeling it's too late to get cold feet, Maddie.

Eurodex

Posted by Eurodex 3 years ago Report

dun-dun-dun

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

Looks like that burrito did not settle to well and conveniently time to make her look like she feels guilty

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

white girls cannot handle the burrito

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

Understandable when that burrito was monstrous in size it practically was half a person

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Teacher can eat Student eat daughter Yes she is fuck

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Teacher can eat Student eat daughter Yes she is fuck

bmo13254

Posted by bmo13254 3 years ago Report

Is this the begining of reformation?

antoinou62185

Posted by antoinou62185 3 years ago Report

I am more for the reformation

KasoTheArtist

Posted by KasoTheArtist 3 years ago Report

Bam! Guilt bomb, i can hear the glass break effect now.

ShyMaster

Posted by ShyMaster 3 years ago Report

I wonder when the next part is out

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

Well... I guess the only thing to do now is volunteer to be the teacher's meal as an apology. ;)

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 3 years ago Report

Honestly, I'm pretty curious about where this is going.

IvISenpai

Posted by IvISenpai 3 years ago Report

Apparently to the bathroom.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

you're not wrong xD

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

She's just so lenient your one kid ran off in a panic and you just shoot the other 1 away that's bad parenting

deathknight

Posted by deathknight 3 years ago Report

Wel she did digest her....

nnickerson100

Posted by nnickerson100 3 years ago Report

she seems quite miffed.

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

“The clap of my vore-fed asscheeks alerted the milfs.”

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i was able to picture that a little too clearly

TheMystique

Posted by TheMystique 3 years ago Report

"I murdered people and laughed." lol

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

you're not wrong though >_>

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Plot twist- she's just got real bad stomachache and doesn't feel any remorse

harpylove

Posted by harpylove 3 years ago Report

Ohhh.... The guilt.

Krad13

Posted by Krad13 3 years ago Report

I think that is not a good place to talk about it.

Gold_King

Posted by Gold_King 3 years ago Report

These are the feels.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Why did she get chubby again she didnt eat that much did she?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

was there anywhere she was skinny?

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Page 10 she look kind of skinny when she walks into the classroom

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

And page 22

TW

Posted by TW 3 years ago Report

Hmmm, what a conundrum? Still wonder where all those calories go...

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

it's a mystery

Dest

Posted by Dest 3 years ago Report

Man, Yellow is a bad influence

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

she has a name xD

JustSomePrey

Posted by JustSomePrey 3 years ago Report

Okay, so Rachel is the sociopath. Clearly doesn't care that she got her sister to murder people, nor cares about her sister's feelings. I can only hope that doesn't transfer to Madison.

dekabreak

Posted by dekabreak 3 years ago Report

Not suprising, in the other comics she is the one that arranges prey for Madison, there is one whole unfinished comic about her torturing a nun while preparing her for Madison, honestly suprised she doesn't just eat people herself, but i guess she prefers to watch her sister do it.

Madison also seems to have lost some of the remorse from what i recall.

deltn259h62

Posted by deltn259h62 3 years ago Report

Oh?
Where is that comic at?

Aradigm

Posted by Aradigm 3 years ago Report

"The Saint Inside The Sinner" by Sukiik and Raigekink

dekabreak

Posted by dekabreak 3 years ago Report

Yep, that's the one, it also makes it really clear she has a scat fetish.

dekabreak

Posted by dekabreak 3 years ago Report

And if i recall, adult Madison casually eats people offered by Rachel, so i assume she loses her regrets over time, and Rachel being a sadistic sociopath apparently, just tortures even nuns and indulges in her fetishes.

Let's just say the unfinished nun comic has scat, a lot of it, well, if the victim is going to die anyways and the proof dissapears, i can see why a sadistic sociopath would feel safe going that far.

She is one heck of a bad influence and it's probably a really good thing she apparently can't vore people herself.

Badviper

Posted by Badviper 3 years ago Report

Not into underage, but I have to say, the idea of pred remorse is something that isn't explored enough in vore. :thinking:

Kid055

Posted by Kid055 3 years ago Report

And I wish it was!

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Man Rachel really isnt a good person huh? At least Madison feels sorry

VFF217

Posted by VFF217 3 years ago Report

Hope no one else is in another stall who just heard them confess that out loud.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

pfft. nope. totally not gonna happen

harpylove

Posted by harpylove 3 years ago Report

There is an easy fix for this.
Madison just needs to eat her meal's parents then they'll all be together on her hips.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Ms Devereux? Madison would almost definitely die if she tried to eat her xD

harpylove

Posted by harpylove 3 years ago Report

Life is all about pushing your limits.

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

Kinda hoping Rachel gets eaten next even if she ends up surviving it would be nice to see her get a look at what it's like on the"other side of the fence"

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

O O F

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

I think it might actually be better for everyone if Rachel gets eaten next. That girl's a bad influence on her sister.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

You really exaggerate that she's fat now
It is good attention to detail

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 3 years ago Report

I don’t think I’ve seen as evil a bitch as Madison on this website

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Madison is the one with the pink hair xD

blackovanossar

Posted by blackovanossar 3 years ago Report

so you clearly didn't here from long XD their relationship reminds me of gaby and emily from the artist katu. gaby is a passiv pred, and emily pushes to sin with no consideration for human live. she's a real sociopath ^^ rachel isn't even close to the level of emily.

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 3 years ago Report

I can only imagine Emily from livinlovindude, which is fitting as she is literally death.

Dragonknight007

Posted by Dragonknight007 3 years ago Report

Uh oh should have checked that they were alone

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

how much forethought can you expect from 8 year olds

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Add one more body to the body toll

harpylove

Posted by harpylove 3 years ago Report

B U S T E D Busted!

Bobrocks

Posted by Bobrocks 3 years ago Report

Ill get the bidy bag...

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

I assume you meant "body bag" ?

Bobrocks

Posted by Bobrocks 3 years ago Report

Yes i just miss typed.

Raiza

Posted by Raiza 3 years ago Report

Rachel is scarier than the one that actually eats people ._. Likely a sociopath.

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

And that case she should be the one to clean up this particular mess. I wonder if she true stretch big enough to handle what it's likely an adult.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

technically sociopaths are not diagnosed officially until age 18. and while teens can display tendencies, it still won't. Usually ones younger to this would be called a psychopath or have a prelude condition called a conduct disorder

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Law doesn’t apply to fiction. If she’s a sociopath, she’s a sociopath.

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 3 years ago Report

Oh no.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

oh yes :D

Vorelover23

Posted by Vorelover23 3 years ago Report

Rachel... did you make sure you were not followed? I swear, if you unknowingly rat out your friend to the teacher...

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

they're twin sisters not friends

KasoTheArtist

Posted by KasoTheArtist 3 years ago Report

D'oh!!!

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Man that person got some ugly a** feet

Krad13

Posted by Krad13 3 years ago Report

D=
Burrito's girl... its you?

Mightyrapter

Posted by Mightyrapter 3 years ago Report

Not the same person different skin tone

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

correct, not the same girl

Shimakaze

Posted by Shimakaze 3 years ago Report

I smell a meal incoming~

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 3 years ago Report

Huh, all I smell is a bathroom and someone’s feet.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

at least it's not the same one Madison destroyed in the last issue

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

my comics are not behind a paywall xD they're always free (i also don't have a Patreon)

Eurodex

Posted by Eurodex 3 years ago Report

dun-dun-dun

Sharktooth

Posted by Sharktooth 3 years ago Report

Ooohhhh

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Busted! Oh noes! Also... typo with the last rachel bubble. You forgot the "get". :p

Moonlightshadow

Posted by Moonlightshadow 3 years ago Report

Raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaachel!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i've specifically tried to avoid that line for this reason

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 3 years ago Report

MOAR.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

wish granted

Gershwin

Posted by Gershwin 3 years ago Report

It’s an odd one, goes against my personal tastes (the off hand murder of people cos it’s fun, oh they were mean so it’s ok to kill them etc).... and yet, I also can’t stop reading each new page. A sort of morbid interest in seeing where it goes I suppose!

Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 3 years ago Report

Oh shit

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 3 years ago Report

*Doom theme begins playing*

VFF217

Posted by VFF217 3 years ago Report

Looks like Maddie may spoil her dinner after all.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

exactly

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 3 years ago Report

Oh shit...

Flara

Posted by Flara 3 years ago Report

Hostage obtained, moving to extraction zone

GinRyuKaza

Posted by GinRyuKaza 3 years ago Report

Clean Vore 47

NeoXtreme

Posted by NeoXtreme 3 years ago Report

Guess someone ain't leaving that bathroom

golly88

Posted by golly88 3 years ago Report

The feels.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Oh no, not another cutie

Ento

Posted by Ento 3 years ago Report

Oh no, she's really cute, no

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 3 years ago Report

Woop woop! All aboard the vore train!

JohnnyF102

Posted by JohnnyF102 3 years ago Report

Eat her eat her lol

LVFrost

Posted by LVFrost 3 years ago Report

Please no, she's cute, she didn't deserve it. I hope these two get eaten by the voracious teacher.

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

same or i at least hope this girl isnt eaten

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

I really want to see if Rachel can do it also

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

That way not one but two people name Maddie and Rachel that will eat the whole school

Krad13

Posted by Krad13 3 years ago Report

No spoiler please...
xD joke.

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

i really hope she doesn't get eaten shes so cute and innocent and clearly didn't do anything wrong and she looks scared ;-; although knowing the comic the tags and the fact that shes a lose end i feel like she will be ;-;

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

at this point, it's anyone's guess

TheMystique

Posted by TheMystique 3 years ago Report

Idk if the tag 'sfw' applies anymore. This is monstrous at this point, poor girl. Hope these two get what's comin' to 'em.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Madison could just want to do a tickle party with the girl. You dont know!

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

i hope they just threaten her and she doesnt peep i dont want to see her eaten

Krad13

Posted by Krad13 3 years ago Report

D=
Oh no...
If release her trouble and eat her... catched...

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

OMNOMNOM

Hazeyoyo123

Posted by Hazeyoyo123 3 years ago Report

FINISH HER

Dragai

Posted by Dragai 3 years ago Report

And *Smack* did you get her?

sadlyknight

Posted by sadlyknight 3 years ago Report

Looks like a yummy snack.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

What does she look like mint chocolate?

Mightyrapter

Posted by Mightyrapter 3 years ago Report

Rachel got smacked in the face with the door lol

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

yeah lol. i love the way gokai drew it xD

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

Quick, Maddie, eat Rachel while she's distracted from having been hit by the door!

Oh, and let the poor cute kid go, for goodness sake.

Shimakaze

Posted by Shimakaze 3 years ago Report

In the great words of Alucard OMM. NOM NOM NOM!!!!

Shimakaze

Posted by Shimakaze 3 years ago Report

In the great words of Alucard OMM. NOM NOM NOM!!!!

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

Im guessing vore is a known and common occurrence. because they could let the girl go and no one would believe her or find evidence if it was a rare event that is not know

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

Oof poor girl

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 3 years ago Report

Uh oh, she's a snacc now.

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

Oh no

Vorelover23

Posted by Vorelover23 3 years ago Report

I am only seeing three possibilities, with one only being random chance: 1: Girl gets eaten, leaving no witnesses. 2:They swear girl under secrecy of what she heard, possibly getting her to indulge later to secure said secrecy. 3(R) teacher walks in on this sitaution, Realises who the culprits are, possibly devouring all three (I only bring this up since I seen swallowing scene with apple. there's no way that's coincidence. Checkov's gun anyone?).

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

nice theories im hoping they just let her go but thats a big stretch >~>

Vorelover23

Posted by Vorelover23 3 years ago Report

What do you think would happen if they just let the girl go with what she heard?

something1337

Posted by something1337 3 years ago Report

She woulda been better off if she just stayed put in the stall.

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

Maddie should feed her to Rachel. No point in Rachel missing out right

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 3 years ago Report

Time for another girl to “go missing”

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Are they truly missing if the audience knows where they are?

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

I hope Rachel can try to vore that girl

deltn259h62

Posted by deltn259h62 3 years ago Report

Poor girl's freckles make her remind me of watermelons.

NeoXtreme

Posted by NeoXtreme 3 years ago Report

Makes me think of Choc chips

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Lol hah. You're both wrong xD

Tygerion

Posted by Tygerion 3 years ago Report

Personally, my first impression was mint.
Admittedly, her hair color is closer to a lime-green or olive-green, though that's kinda splitting hairs. :V

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

i really hope she doesnt get eaten ;( she seems way too cute and innocent and she did nothing wrong

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

I think she'll taste fishy. Like a red herring

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Acceptable casualties

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

That's a funny way of saying "dinner"

DarkPinkie

Posted by DarkPinkie 3 years ago Report

Since it have not been mentioned yet: Panty Shot!
Hopefully greenette here is as tasty as the rest.

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

To be honest, I usually prefer there to be one single predator. It makes the girl's ability seem more unique and fascinating as opposed to everyone being able to do it and it just becomes a game of "who's gonna get who". Which is why I am kind of worried that Madison is not going to make it to the end of the comic ('member? The teacher eating an apple whole?)

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

Nooo! Let the poor cute kid go! Eat Rachel instead! The world will be better off!

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 3 years ago Report

Aww she's cute!
...I bet she tastes...

D E L I C I O U S ! ! !

VioletNom

Posted by VioletNom 3 years ago Report

Finally a new page :3

Cactaur98

Posted by Cactaur98 3 years ago Report

Yes! Finally the part I’ve been waiting for!

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 3 years ago Report

Ahh poor girl she looks so cute and friendly
And soon she'll be a pile of scat all because she was in the wrong place at the wrong time

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i don't know what you are insinuating >_>

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

Rachel is about to get on her last nerve I like that she is trying not to eat her if she doesn't have to while Rachel is trying to force it maybe this will cause a rift between the two as time goes on

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Even though she's evil she does got a point

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

that's the worst kind

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

Madison tell Rachel that she wants her eaten do it herself.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

LOL you were about 5 pages too early xD

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

Yeah sorry about that it's just my own personal opinion. In a world where you pred on your fellow beings like that you don't force someone to eat someone they don't want to eat. If you want them eaten you have to be willing to do the job yourself

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol! no need to apologize xD

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

awww poor girl im just desperately hoping she doesnt eat her but knowing this comic its bound to happen i just hope those two get what they deserve ;-;

neko1992

Posted by neko1992 3 years ago Report

Kinda want her to grab the girl from her sister and swallow the girl instead considering she has the ability to it would also give a excuse that she likes watching more than doing it

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

Wny do i feel like the omly way this ends is with an entire missing school

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

wishful thinking xD

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

I mean.... I dint consider that a good thing

MakCin

Posted by MakCin 3 years ago Report

They could make her into an accomplice

Persona59523

Posted by Persona59523 3 years ago Report

Oh, I wonder if she would be let go, and later join them on future hunts. But most likely, she just ends up feeding our purple haired girl here.

Persona59523

Posted by Persona59523 3 years ago Report

Oh, I wonder if she would be let go, and later join them on future hunts. But most likely, she just ends up feeding our purple haired girl here.

seducingangel

Posted by seducingangel 3 years ago Report

Personally I really like green-haired girl more than Rach. She seems like she could be realllllly fun.

Ento

Posted by Ento 3 years ago Report

Man, the Blond girl is just pure evil, I love it but also oh no.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Shes a victim of circumstance, shes innocent I tells yah

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

Dammit, Rach, shut up.

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

My theory is she joins them and becomes the "good" moral compass with Rachel being the bad moral compass kina like having a angel on one shoulder and a devel on the other which would be a interesting twist in the story

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 3 years ago Report

Maddie definitely isn't planning to gobble her up. We'll have to wait and see...

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

this bitch >:( she just wants to see her sister eat that poor girl i hope she gets what she deserves

bellylov3rs

Posted by bellylov3rs 3 years ago Report

Oh please let her join the group instead would be a fun dynamic having a third person

Zen_Coyote

Posted by Zen_Coyote 3 years ago Report

One of those cases in which I feel bad for the impending prey. I would hope they let her go and she keeps their secret but I can already predict that isn't going to be the case.

QuakeImperial

Posted by QuakeImperial 3 years ago Report

Lmao I'm glad others feel the same way I do I didn't want her to get eaten either, let her join the group!

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 3 years ago Report

Take responsibility for yer own vengeance! =w= Make blondie eat herrrr ohohoho.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Classic manipulation

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

I kinda wish for the green haired girl to get eaten.

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

Accomplice? Or tum fat?

Ezio45

Posted by Ezio45 3 years ago Report

damn thay kinda getting off on it. makeing light of murder! mother may be full of BS but thay are far worth for what thay did

Ezio45

Posted by Ezio45 3 years ago Report

T-T

Ezio45

Posted by Ezio45 3 years ago Report

T-T an now one of them may care about what thay did but get talked into it not being so bad. sheould of felt that way well befor knowing how thay ate

Ezio45

Posted by Ezio45 3 years ago Report

liked it kinda yeah. but not the dieing part an not seeing mom or friend. or grow up.

Ezio45

Posted by Ezio45 3 years ago Report

yeah go for it. blond girl trying to indulge it evin now. all well thair are parent talking about girl going missing yeah this will help.

Ezio45

Posted by Ezio45 3 years ago Report

now what would be a nice new turn of evin is she join them planing to reveal them. an thay get eating as a punishment. tho i would feel a bit sorry for the one that shows some morals but in the end she had many chances to stop. befor it got to death

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Man she's a bitch XD I'm very curious to see where this is going

Ento

Posted by Ento 3 years ago Report

Ok, I'm starting to suspect the Mint girl's gonna live after all this abuse.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Omg Rachel shes already on the floor, you didnt have to stomp the poor girl.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

she didnt have to, but she wanted to >_>

Wanderingspirit1333

Posted by Wanderingspirit1333 3 years ago Report

Getting interesting

Tsukistarr

Posted by Tsukistarr 3 years ago Report

I was hoping to see rachel doing vore too owo

Cactaur98

Posted by Cactaur98 3 years ago Report

Soooo close!

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 3 years ago Report

dam she is heartless

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 3 years ago Report

Rach is beimg very rude.

Zen_Coyote

Posted by Zen_Coyote 3 years ago Report

Jesus is she going to kill her to force her sister to dispose of the evidence??

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

ooooo i hate her so much just let the poor girl go

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

I'm guessing this ends up with Rachel force feeding her or rachel finally making madison snap

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Nothing good can come of this

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

only great things!

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

And Ladies and gentlemen if you're Sibling acts like this there Bad

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

you're not wrong

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

For crying out loud, Rachel, stop being a bitch!

Maddie, please eat your sister. There aren't enough words in the English language to tell you just how much of a favor you'll be doing the world by ridding it of her.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

Let's not, i love Rachel.
I wish to see this green-haired girl eaten.

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

red flag.

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

Bet Rachel is the ‘snack’

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

Madison you need to teach your younger sister that she wants to dispose of the evidence she has to stretch her jaw and do it herself

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

they're twins actually so... >_>

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

it's true that i don't know which one was born first even if the difference was only a few minutes. still Rachel's is acting like a spoiled brat

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

I wish to see this green-hair girl eaten ^_^
Maybe Rachel will eat her.

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 3 years ago Report

I cant believe I'm saying this but... DON'T EAT HER!!!

JoshthefreindlyNaga

Posted by JoshthefreindlyNaga 3 years ago Report

Yes please spare the girl she doesn't deserve it!!!

Simplespectator

Posted by Simplespectator 3 years ago Report

How to become extremely unlikable, step 5 I think. Man, I hope this doesn’t end with her getting eaten, and that is a slightly weird feeling for here.

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 3 years ago Report

No witnesses, no matter how cute they may be

JennyWakeman1903exe

Posted by JennyWakeman1903exe 3 years ago Report

I'd rather see Rachel get eaten at this point

Cactaur98

Posted by Cactaur98 3 years ago Report

YES!

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

This is hard to watch, poor green haired girl

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

dont look, taste

Kismet

Posted by Kismet 3 years ago Report

Wrong place, wrong time... a lingering curse

Raiza

Posted by Raiza 3 years ago Report

Don't worry, out smut instincts will kick in soon and we will just enjoy the belly and swallowing... I hope... Rachel is the cruelest pred to never actually eat anyone herself... yet Dx

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

that's unfortunate. i'm just trying to write stories. i didnt really think ppl were gonna get this passionate over it tbh

Frodis

Posted by Frodis 3 years ago Report

NOOO!!!, Kiwi girl hopefully she can get outta this situation or that somebody happens to over hear the commotion going on and comes to her rescue she doesn't deserve to meet a terrible fate

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

holy shit someone got the food correct xD

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

Oh my gosh , RACHEL IS SO EVIL!!!

TheEvilWithin

Posted by TheEvilWithin 3 years ago Report

Never before I wanted a loli to be beaten like this. And I normally don't dislike underage preys but fuck Rachel.

ssbbfanatic

Posted by ssbbfanatic 3 years ago Report

I hope Madison can regurgitate her if she does end up swallowing her, she doesn't deserve this.

Ento

Posted by Ento 3 years ago Report

Man.
This is doing a really nice job of making us want to see the blond girl die painfully.
Not even in the typical vore "Digested alive" way, like way more painful.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

Well, there is one non-canon comic about that.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/390109

But they're adult there, so it means Madyson has vored A LOT of people.

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

FUCKING FUCK! Dont eat the poor girl she didnt do anything!!! ;-; her sister better get what she deserves

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

I’m hoping someone walks in, maybe her teacher

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Heh, I'm heartless, gobble her up

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 3 years ago Report

I can't be the only one who thinks its so much better when the prey doesnt deserve it.

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

welp sadly this confirms kiwi isnt gonna make it ;-;

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 3 years ago Report

Heheheheheheh~
Keep going~<3

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

There's something about an innocent victim squirming all the way down :3

I guess we can take the overall reaction from the comments as proof that humanity hasn't lost all empathy yet XD there's hope for us yet maybe

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

My current theory: she pulls her head away causing rachel to slip and fall in instead

TheMystique

Posted by TheMystique 3 years ago Report

I mean judging by the creator's comment, I don't think the girl is going to make it out okay, and Rachel isn't going to get punished... The whole school's doomed.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

technically i'm the writer/creator. Gokai is the artist xD

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 3 years ago Report

Mmm.

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

So much for wholesome Content

KasoTheArtist

Posted by KasoTheArtist 3 years ago Report

What a "Firend"

QuakeImperial

Posted by QuakeImperial 3 years ago Report

Bruh dont eat her :/

VFF217

Posted by VFF217 3 years ago Report

Their mom will be so upset that Madison spoiled her dinner by eating too many snacks at the school meeting.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

true story

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

If rachel comes out of this story uneaten, I shall be very unhappy. She's very quickly managed to transform herself into the single most despicable character I've encountered on this site. And given that the whole concept of this place is appealing to a fetish about murdering other people, and the level of sociopathy required for characters to do that, that's really saying something.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 1 year ago Report

:( sorry

okutrooper24

Posted by okutrooper24 3 years ago Report

I will admit, when the pred is unwilling, that is when it hits weird. Crying and begging prey is normal but a resistant pred, huh....

AkiraTR

Posted by AkiraTR 3 years ago Report

NOOOOOO! RACHEL YOU ASSHEAD!
Don't get me wrong, I'm mad at Rach.

kimiltortu

Posted by kimiltortu 3 years ago Report

well, I don't digest it right away, I suppose it would be a couple of hours intact in madison's stomach, she could feel sorry for the kiwi girl enter the bathroom and vomit leaving her free

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

EAT HER! EAT HER! EAT HER!
I also love Rachel.

And... wow, this comment section. You seriously feel bad for the prey on a site that is filled with TONS of comics and stories with unwilling crying prey? What kind of double standarts you people have?

Either way, i can't wait to see this Kiwi girl ending up as a belly bulge.

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

This case feels worse.

Yan

Posted by Yan 3 years ago Report

Nooo mint hair girl would be a better pred than prey :( dont eat her

AlexiaFood

Posted by AlexiaFood 3 years ago Report

It's weird to me that everyone seems to be implying that the other girls *DID* deserve to be killed.

Vore isn't really meant to be realistic, but if you are going to try to apply morality then it's kind of messed up to think that moderate to light bullying (or just accessory to bullying, as was the case with most of them) warrants a death penalty in so many people's minds...

seducingangel

Posted by seducingangel 3 years ago Report

Ooof... well this just got immensely disappointing. I was excited for Rachel to get what she deserves but it seems I shouldn't have gotten my hopes up. :/

Galarn

Posted by Galarn 3 years ago Report

Cruelty, forced pred, crying prey, wow this is very arousing <3 Good work!

SerenaBlaze

Posted by SerenaBlaze 3 years ago Report

Creepy rachel. The last panel really show her sociopathic side oof.

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Well Rachel sure wants to take charge and force Madison to do things she don’t want to do.

Great stuff Gokai keep it up!

seducingangel

Posted by seducingangel 3 years ago Report

Well this is pretty disappointing. I was hoping Rachel would get eaten instead cause reversals are awesome. This is just sad and brings up bad memories of being bullied and abused. :/ At leadt Gokai is a good artist.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i'm not entirely sure how the 2 correlate? but you should probably see someone about that

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

I do wonder if there will be any lasting consequences from this, as if Rachel continues to drive a wedge between them with this, it would turn sour very easily.

However, for now I'll just enjoy the Loli vore :3

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i initially read that as "wedgie"

was like... whut

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Notice me some pie

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

this truly saddens me I hope Rachel gets what she deserves. great work though keep it up

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Not much left to do now but to end it

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

That skirt is defined gravity and physics

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

That or this is a really weird angle

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Ooooooh, the squishiness she's feeling right now around her head... <3 <3 <3
Cannot wait until all of her is wrapped up in the pink little heaven :3

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

insides? or hair?

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Ooof, not sure where the hair part came in, her head is already inside... But I guess since her hair is pink, can be confusing.
So... inside...

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

nothing like committing assisted homicide and making your sister commit manslaughter because it makes you horny.

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Vore is just cannibalistic homicide.

TCC

Posted by TCC 3 years ago Report

Down she goes~

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

Kinda ironic this all started with punishing bullies... Now Rachel is a much bigger bully

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

precisely xD

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Shows the beauty of Raigekink's story telling. Good twists.

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

Okay, so we're mushing the girl into paste. Aight. As long as it is just with the pink haired predator instead of the teacher. Like I said before, too many preds in the kitchen isn't fun.

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

Nooo

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

I'm guessing Madison is going to gurgle the girl all up. I wonder what is going to happen in the next comic. I hope nothing bad happens to Madison (again, the teacher is STILL A THREAT!).

TheMystique

Posted by TheMystique 3 years ago Report

What do you mean the teacher is a threat? The girl killing people is the threat lmaooo

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

you saw what she did to that apple. every fruit is in grave danger

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

I consider the teacher a threat to Madison. If she finds out about how she ate her daughter alive, I don't see why the teacher would spare Madison. As much as I am enjoying Madison and Rachel's escapades, I liked it better when Madison was the only predator. Her ability to eat people was special because it was unique to her. At least the conflict is interesting.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

That girl needs to be thrown up and escape .she doesn’t deserve to die like this ....tbh none of the others except the first bully did either

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

Seriously, i love girls like Rachel.

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

...I still want Rachel to get eaten.

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

no don't let her get eaten! eat the mean sister!

ShyMaster

Posted by ShyMaster 3 years ago Report

You think she'll vore everyone in the school? Imagine how big her belly will get is she did that ????

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

Oh my god if Rachel wants to get rid of her then why don’t she her

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Hey raigekink, I like the story. It's a shame not many others do but I think you're taking this story in a good direction.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

appreciated xD

abud13

Posted by abud13 3 years ago Report

*gasp*
Big titty teacher saves the day?

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 3 years ago Report

Poor chocolate mint girl

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

She’s really getting into this even though she is being pretty evil to mint girl. Somebody save the mint girl!

Gokai another amazing page again nice work!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Kiwi!

But yes i agree. It is awesome art

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Like the story so far you did a great job dude.

Still feel bad for Kiwi though but all the same I like where this is going though.

Yan

Posted by Yan 3 years ago Report

stop mint girl bullyin! Lemons better tasting these days

Raiza

Posted by Raiza 3 years ago Report

She just likes seeing her sister with a full belly. Can't help but admire it a bit... Still, RIP Mint girl.

Drakira

Posted by Drakira 3 years ago Report

Hmm what if she wants to be eaten and that's why she loves watching her sister eat people?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

another one of life's great mysteries

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Oh boy, I love me some some good Raigekink and GokiaVore comics :3

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

Rachel sucks just saying .... she needs to go !!
Like dang why is she so cruel

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

It's a fetish and she wants to see it.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

She needs to die !!!

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

I think it's awesome to be honest, vore catalysts are important in any good story. The longer shes around the longer I get to fap.

JennyWakeman1903exe

Posted by JennyWakeman1903exe 3 years ago Report

Poor mint girl, Rachel is cruel

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Yeah... it's sad, cruel, and just down right mean...
However, DAMN THAT'S HOT!!!
I mean... come on, willing vore is just meh, unwilling prey forced into a pred, BADASS <3 <3 <3
I mean, I like willing preds better, for the taunting purposes, but you've got a 3rd party that can do the taunting now... so, YES!!! Get her in that BELLY!!!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol finally, someone approves of her cruelty and lack of remorse xD

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Are you kidding me, it's the BEST PART!!!
I'm totally an unwilling prey myself and I find it simply the best thing in the world where you're faced with a cruel pred or someone who is feeding you to a pred with such cruelty...
The struggle, the pleading, being taunted, and in the end the one feeding you to the pred or the pred themselves have a disregard for your life, and you're nothing more than food <3 <3 <3
So freaking HOT!!! <3 <3 <3

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Same

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

Oh well at least kiwi girl was sweet... Actually oh shiz this is gonna mess madison up the others were atleast bullies but this is the first innocent girl she has eaten someone who just as well could have been her friend I have a feeling we about to see some psychological havock played on madison

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

I bet she gets sucked in too

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

Poor girl

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Theory: Certain characters are candy themed and are they way because they are meant to be eaten. Evidence: The girl being eaten represents mint chocolate, the first represents uh... Idk the second one, idk but the third was Black Licorice and the fourth was strawberry and Rachel looks like a butterscotch.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i feel like i will need to address this at some point xD

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

*poggers face*

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Careful don't slip

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

Rachel looks like she is gonna want to feed herself to someone soon

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

I imagine this Kiwi girl getting churned... mmm...

LoserLass5

Posted by LoserLass5 3 years ago Report

I love complete and total bitches like Rachel.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 1 year ago Report

Thank you? XD

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 3 years ago Report

EVIL

ShyMaster

Posted by ShyMaster 3 years ago Report

She's enjoy this way to much

NekoYuki

Posted by NekoYuki 3 years ago Report

i really don't like her, i feel sorry for the girl. Maddie needs to put her foot down and control her sister.

QuakeImperial

Posted by QuakeImperial 3 years ago Report

I do enjoy vore but I feel sad..?

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 3 years ago Report

She is DEFINITELY getting sucked in as well~

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

I hope so, but that would make the story pretty short.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

It's a prequel to raigekink's characters, so i doubt it.

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 3 years ago Report

Its a continuation, not a prequel.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

It's a continuation of a prequel.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

evil little girl! madison should at least throw up the poor girl who didnt do anything

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Idea: if Madison swallows Rachel, then she has to spit both of then up. Worst case scenario, Madison becomes an only child

JennyWakeman1903exe

Posted by JennyWakeman1903exe 3 years ago Report

I hope Rachel gets sucked in there as well, that would be the best case of KARMA

TCC

Posted by TCC 3 years ago Report

Just give in Maddie, embrace your inner sadist! >:3

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

My thoughts exactly

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

she can't. Rachel is out of her stomach.

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

Wow

Wanderingspirit1333

Posted by Wanderingspirit1333 3 years ago Report

Can’t wait to see what’s next

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Seems like the poor girl is in too deep at this point, though if Madison gives in who’s to say that karma won’t be knocking on Rachels door.

Great work Gokai just keeps getting better.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

karma only knocks on the back door

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Either way this is great stuff so great work on the story raigekink.

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

This is amazing, I like it so much.

DarkPinkie

Posted by DarkPinkie 3 years ago Report

Man, I love whenever a new part of this series pop in. Always a treat to see the next step of the journey.

Odin1366

Posted by Odin1366 3 years ago Report

Wow what is with this kid?

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

well shit...guess its time to say goodbye to cute mint girl and maddie will end up begrudgingly letting her digest

Jaxed

Posted by Jaxed 3 years ago Report

EAT BOTH

Keiganib

Posted by Keiganib 3 years ago Report

I think I know who her next prey is...

kimiltortu

Posted by kimiltortu 3 years ago Report

all have to hope the digestion does not start

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

I Know that look Somebody takes good

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Yeah, you see those hearts in Maddie's eyes? Yeah, you KNOW she loves it.. she is def connected with her sister now, despite having someone forcefully shoved in her <3 <3 <3
Rachel needs to continue to shove cute girls into her sister, until the point Maddie becomes a willingly dangerous pred <3
Damn, the cruelty and disregard for the chocolate mint girl's life from Rachel, is freaking adorably HOT!!!
I wonder what she loves more... her sister or feeding cute girls TO her... meh, prob both :3

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Got to admit, it's pretty hot seeing how this story is turning out.

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Ngl, the way things have progressed, I'm reeeeeeeally looking forward to seeing more <3

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Same!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

gokai draws all the girls with hearts in their eyes xD

Lol, jeezus. Someone wants a body count >_>

Also, it's kiwi

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

You spelled food wrong...
I kid, I kid... kiwi is a cute name, and I only said chocolate mint because others went that route.

Body count...? Maaaaaaaaaybe, so as long as Maddie is getting fed and Rachel is feeding her X3

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

I feel like madison is going to give in to her hunger and much to Rachel's discomfort will swallow both of them

megatronusalpha993

Posted by megatronusalpha993 3 years ago Report

predictable outcome

megatronusalpha993

Posted by megatronusalpha993 3 years ago Report

Yeah I expect less from a crap writer like yourself.

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

Keep swallowing and take Rachel in too!

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

They are going to turn into tbe next Gabi and Emily at this rate

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

idk who that is xD but i keep seeing their names

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

They are the OCs 9f kattu long stort short thet are sisters where Gabi is a pred and her sister Emily is a sociopath who loves vore and will trick Gabi into eating people who dont deserve it... Though Gabi wants to be moral she enjoys it anyway and often has rather flimsy excuses for eating people in her own right

Madara

Posted by Madara 3 years ago Report

The sister be like:
she too dangerous to let alive

Destiny4life

Posted by Destiny4life 3 years ago Report

By the looks of it maddie mighy swallow her sister to but it really depends on GokaiVore or whoever commission it.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

hurtful

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

So is someone else going to come into this bathroom? Wait, ooh what happens if a parent walks in?!
That's going to FUN!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

that actually did happen in my original draft, but the comic was just too long Dx

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

i love the internal view. now lets watch her struggle and hopefully get spit out

kibroman

Posted by kibroman 3 years ago Report

the drawing of the inside of the stomach is incredible

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

Nice stomach view, I have to admit.

I am, however, very disappointed that she didn't make sure to take Rachels hands and proceed to swallow Rach as well.

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

When you get so good at designing cute characters that no one wants to see them digested

Wanderingspirit1333

Posted by Wanderingspirit1333 3 years ago Report

Agreed

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 3 years ago Report

the funny thing about that is raigekink is constantly complaining that everytime I design a character that he plans to kill off he doesn't want to kill them anymore because they are too cute.

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Too true and you design them so well at that.
Love the art and happy to see more of this as they come.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

^ 100% accurate

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

welp i guess this confirms that mint girl isnt gonna make it and Rachel likely wont be eaten ;-;

kimiltortu

Posted by kimiltortu 3 years ago Report

Well the digestion just started, she will have a couple of hours at most, if she gets up she can vomit kiwi with only some burns

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lies. even i don't know what im gonna be doing until i write it

SuperSlosh

Posted by SuperSlosh 3 years ago Report

No such thing.
The cuter the character the more I wanna see them melt >:3

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 3 years ago Report

2 kinds of people. Me, I see cuteness, and I could go either way! One half says "must protec!" while the other says "Lewd/Consume!"

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

the struggle is real

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

great internal although im sad that mint girls gonna die and rachel isnt >:(

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

Kiwi

Tygerion

Posted by Tygerion 3 years ago Report

Sorry about that, actually; I think I was the one who initially made the mint-chocolate guess, and people seem to have really liked that guess.
If I had known at the time that said guess would inspire such rampant incorrectness, I probably wouldn't have hit the 'submit' button.

Tunknownusert

Posted by Tunknownusert 3 years ago Report

I'm happy either way. Top tier story :)

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 3 years ago Report

Loving the weekly uploads! Glad you have a schedule.

VioletNom

Posted by VioletNom 3 years ago Report

Great an internal view

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Now the fun part starts... turning Kiwi into nutrients.
Well, at least Maddie is fed now, and Rachel is absolutely right... as cute as Kiwi is, Maddie just needs to enjoy that cute bulge.
Man, this is amazing, her sitting in acid filled stomach, who should be in despair but seems to be strangely aroused herself <3 <3 <3

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

damn i dont remember sniffling and tears ever being a sign of arousal

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

But that heavily blushed face does...
Maybe being in that hot, bubbly, slimy, soft organ is having an effect on her <3 <3 <3

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol, are you the narrator xD

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

In my mind, I narrate everything...
I write too, so I have a tendency to do that X3
I mean, I'm not wrong... am I? Look at that beautiful Gokai art, how that internal shot of the stomach just makes you want to trade places with Kiwi and lounge the same way, massaging the sides <3 <3 <3
*COUGH* Sorry, lost my composure there for a second... can't wait to see the next page :3

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Well she’s already in there there’s only one way this can go.

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

So now that she's packed away, I wonder what happens next. Does someone walk in the bathroom? If so... who?

Deadipool

Posted by Deadipool 3 years ago Report

We need a panel of Kiwi squirming and Racheal rubbing Madisons belly and says :"aww pipe down and digest like a good snack."

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

don't tempt me

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

If nothing else, I hope to god Madison has a talk with Kiwi while she’s in there, whether she regrets it or not.

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

I dunno why yall are upset. This isn’t the first time a pitiful prey has died in Gokai’s library, and it won’t be the last.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

1000% accurate

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Can their mother die next? Out of everyone in this comic universe, she deserves it the most.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol wait what? you think she deserves it more than Rachel? lol

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Oh, absolutely. Rachel might be a sadistic voyeurist who uses her sister to fulfill her desires, but at least she’s not an evangelical, totalitarian, heartless karen of a bitch who fear mongers her children into religion and obedience. She most definitely deserves to die far more than Rachel simply by virtue of being herself.

Persona59523

Posted by Persona59523 3 years ago Report

Nooooooooo!

wep, hopefully the next possible friend won't suffer the same fate.

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

I hope she goes to the teacher snd gets vore counsling so the teacher eatong the apple whole goes somewhere

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

There’s also that haunted house they established.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

depends on how bad the writer is

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

Well, that's up to you, isn't it? How bad IS the writer? :P

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

the worst

Madara

Posted by Madara 3 years ago Report

Show no mercy gokai

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

This is the best

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

even better than sandwich?

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

... maybe

thas

Posted by thas 3 years ago Report

why are people complaining rachel wont be eating. i mean we've seen them as adults

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i've done lots of one off or alternate reality versions of stuff with these characters

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

ew that just made me think of an opposite version of this. "Gulping grannies" came to mind for some reason.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

that sounds like something i will never want to google

UnknownGamer21

Posted by UnknownGamer21 3 years ago Report

Big mood right there

nowe333

Posted by nowe333 3 years ago Report

Pleas more :)

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

What happened to the schedule? the next one was supposed to come out at like 5 pm on Monday? its been almost 2 days now.

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 3 years ago Report

I was swamped with work this week and wasnt able to complete the next page should be back on schedule next tuesday

VioletNom

Posted by VioletNom 3 years ago Report

That is sad to read :'

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Awwww darn. Thanks for sharing though.

Deadipool

Posted by Deadipool 3 years ago Report

I almost want kiwis squirming to give madison a loud satisfying burp that could alert a passing someone whether or not the manage to hide in the stalls wont matter for the sandles thrown haphazardily shows something happened... it would suck for madison's snack struggling to be the cause of her getting a roommate

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

of course i read this after the pages are drawn lol

VioletNom

Posted by VioletNom 3 years ago Report

And the page of today?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

gokai fell behind due to the swamp of halloween comms

VioletNom

Posted by VioletNom 3 years ago Report

Ooh I see

GloriatheDevourer

Posted by GloriatheDevourer 3 years ago Report

Oh wow

Samtnt

Posted by Samtnt 3 years ago Report

Nice

Raiden556

Posted by Raiden556 3 years ago Report

Well... That escalated even more quickly than anticipated

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

YES!!! FINALLY !! A terrible person getting what they deserve !!!! Oh my gosh , she deserves sooo much more than just that one punch but this works. Now please spit up the poor girl

antoinou62185

Posted by antoinou62185 3 years ago Report

I completely agree with you

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

And how are you any different from her?
Same as Rachel saw pleasure in seeing a girl getting eaten, you see pleasure in seeing Rachel getting hit.

I don't understand why people do the same things at the people they hate.

Allard-Liao

Posted by Allard-Liao 3 years ago Report

The difference is that the girl who got eaten was innocent while Rachel is gleefully trying to make her sister (IIRC) a serial killer.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

But the result is the same, you desire a person to be punished.

Rachel saw pleasure in seeing Madyson eating a girl, and you see pleasure in Madyson punching Rachel.
Rachel couldn't eat the girl herself, and you couldn't punch Rachel.
The result - same.

A good person would simply mourn the poor girl and explain to Rachel to never do that and help her understand.
...That being said, it's in ideal world.

Obviously, most people wouldn't easily forgive Rachel, so i'm saying let's not pretend to be good, but rather accept that we egoistically feel bad for the innocent girl to make ourselves look good or simply because of sympathy toward her cute appearance.

Turbotowns

Posted by Turbotowns 3 years ago Report

Someone cruel is getting their just desserts, we aren't "taking pleasure" in Rachel's punishment, we're glad some justice has finally been delivered to her.

Pakos

Posted by Pakos 3 years ago Report

There is a difference between a desire for justice and a sadistic need to make people suffer xD

UnknownGamer21

Posted by UnknownGamer21 3 years ago Report

I'm pretty sure Rachel wouldn't care if someone tries explaining to her not to do this again, I'm certain she's gonna do it again some how, some way. And just pretend to be a good girl to get out of trouble.

I'm not pretending to be good when I say I feel sympathy for the girl. She is a child, who was forcefed to someone who may not even know if she can get her back out or not. In the worst case scenario, she is gonna be sentient through the entire painful process of digestion.

Let's look at your logic... "A good person would simply mourn the girl and explain to Rachel never to do that and help her understand"

Good person, yes. But not a very smart person... This is basically what a teacher does if a bully beats someone up in second grade. It doesn't do anything but tell the bully (in this situation, Rachel) what they already know. "You are hurting people" "please stop" only difference is that many bullies have terrible homes and grow up in a shitty situation, and Rachel is taking pleasure in watching another kid get eaten by her sister, without thinking of her sister or the kid's wants it needs. And she doesn't look like she is living in a shitty situation, in fact she sounds like a brat who believes things should always go her way if I'm being honest.

I'm not sure about you, but even in some of emotionless calculations. You should easily say "Rachel deserves that punch" and explain it with "because she forced her unwilling sister to swallow a terrified kid". Crime, punishment. It's the same thing an ideal good person would say. "Rachel deserves to be punched for force-feeding a kid to her sister"

Let's be honest here. Rachel is basically a manipulative murderer. She tried manipulating her sister to do it willingly, and when that didn't work she just forced her sister to do it. She knows that kid is gonna die inside her sister's belly.

Are you saying you wouldn't punch your sibling if you were in this situation as the person eating someone?

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

I would punch that sibling, yes.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

that the thing , the green haired girl was innocent and scared .even madison didnt want to eat her ,but rachel forced her too. i would never do that

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

So, if Madyson would be scared and get punched for, let's imagine, breaking a toiled, which she didn't commit, would it mean you would feel sympathy to Madyson, as she would be scared and innocent of the crime she didn't commit.

Sorry, ever since i was a kid i always think dozens of possible situations.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

ye , i would feel bad. especially if the person who broke the toilet . was willing to let madison get punished

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

Your logic is highly flawed good sir or madam its the same stupid logic a villain uses to say the hero is as bad as they are for also using violence
I assume you are playing devils advocate but the difference is clear, as a hero uses violence to stop a mad man from hurting innpcent people

Rachel here is the villain in tjis case and really you cannot say someone getting punched is the same as her getting people killed via digestion so its not even equal trade, i am sorry but i just do not see your logic

bloodwolfvamp

Posted by bloodwolfvamp 3 years ago Report

hear hear

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

Nope. I don't want to be an aduocate.
I simply don't like when people hide their egoism with "Justice", want everybody to be honest to themselves.

And hero is not bad for using violence. It's indifferent.
Just because hero does the same thing as villain, it means that thing is not bad nor good, it simply depends on situation.

I just prefer to shut down my emotions and opinions when i think about moral stuff and use pure computer calculation.

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 3 years ago Report

I study ethics, and though this entire discussion you've created is fascinating, you're on a site that literally revolves around people eating others, most of which ends in the eaten party no longer being alive, so if you have such a problem with this, why are you even here?

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

while you study ethics , you have seemed to have missed the point of what was said. i dont dislike digestion, i dont dislike cruel preds. however if i form an attachment to a character, i will be a bit irritated if they die. plus, i love watching evil people get the shit beat out of them. i would have much prefered a long beat down on rachel but unfortunately that is not in the cards

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 3 years ago Report

you got attached to a random background character who no one could get the name right for?

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

yup , and so did all the other people who liked her . soooooo...

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

blame gokai for designing her this way

Robotdocter

Posted by Robotdocter 3 years ago Report

yeah she definitely deserved that, what a horrible sister

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Nothing quite like a brawl in the girls bathroom

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Oh shit Madison you go girl!

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 3 years ago Report

K.O.

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

ding ding

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

FALCON PUNCH!!!

z3d

Posted by z3d 3 years ago Report

Given how she ends up being in the comic of them being adults. She deserves a punch as she is a sadist that hides behind innocence. Not sure if canon to this, but I get the feeling that gal can’t be trusted

TheCrystalDemon

Posted by TheCrystalDemon 3 years ago Report

There is another comic of them?

z3d

Posted by z3d 3 years ago Report

No, from another artist. It had more heavy themes and involved these two s adults. Basically the girl in yellow forces the other girl to eat girls taken by their will and torments the girl that eats them

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

I wasn't aware of this- know where I can find it?

z3d

Posted by z3d 3 years ago Report

Same girl as the young girl in these. Meaning she didn’t stop being a sadist

MetaKitsune

Posted by MetaKitsune 3 years ago Report

Even by vore standards thats kinda terrible

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Ohh that one, I never put two and two together, yeah I remember her being quite the sadist- guess it's just how she is

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i'm not even sure those are still canon-ized tbh. Since i did those super out of order

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

I suppose it's something that could be changed around canon wise fairly often. What's the fun in an OC if you just have one set end?

Wanderingspirit1333

Posted by Wanderingspirit1333 3 years ago Report

You sure? This seems to be in a real world while that’s fantasy

JennyWakeman1903exe

Posted by JennyWakeman1903exe 3 years ago Report

Karma

JoshthefreindlyNaga

Posted by JoshthefreindlyNaga 3 years ago Report

Can't say I didn't see that coming XD

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

Nice

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

But I wonder will Rachel learn how to eat people also

ayosensei

Posted by ayosensei 3 years ago Report

like in animé manga

TheMystique

Posted by TheMystique 3 years ago Report

Can't say she didn't deserve it.

Raiza

Posted by Raiza 3 years ago Report

Damn o_o

bellylov3rs

Posted by bellylov3rs 3 years ago Report

Hope she gets more then just that single punch she definitely deserves it for using her sister for her own pleasure not caring about her thoughts and feelings

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

Same as you want to punish Rachel for the sake of you justice without caring about her thoughts and feelings.

I'm just making observation. People make big talk about caring about thoughts and feelings, yet they never think about thoughts and feelings of people they hate. It means, it's a selective compassion.
How are you any different from the person you hate, then?

Kingkrispr

Posted by Kingkrispr 3 years ago Report

Dude, she is functionally a serial killer. Theres a HUGE difference between "being empathic to someone you dont like" and "punishing someone out on their actions".
After a certain point, your actions become so heinous that no amount of empathy can justify them, only explain them. Actions speak louder than words, and personal struggles or problems do not make you immune from punishment and retribution.
Would you keep a murderer out of prison if they had a bad home life but killed an innocent person for not justifiable reason?

Im different from the people i hate because i am not hurting innocent people. If someones ACTIONS (not words) intentionally cause people harm, then any justification is null.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

I would punish a murderer.

But i won't feel satisfaction from punishing the murderer, as it would make me the same as murderer. And i don't hate the murderer, i would simply punish the murderer while being indifferent.

Justice doesn't hate anybody. It simply punishes. Real justice lies in lacking emotions and simply punishing the person, but to the point that the criminal would be able to rehabilitate, so it's physical and mental capabilities would still be of use to the system.

Lewdghost

Posted by Lewdghost 3 years ago Report

Unless you're murdering the murderer, you feeling satisfaction in punishing said murder would NOT make you the same as said murderer, by your own logic.

If you're not killing them that's different, as then they're not dead, unlike their victims.

If you are killing them as punishment, that's not murder that's execution or justified homicide.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

That's what i'm saying.

Lewdghost

Posted by Lewdghost 3 years ago Report

No, you said feeling satisfaction as you kill them would make you the same, as its only a portion of the context and mostly unrelated to the rest. You feeling satisfaction or not doesn't impact that their death is deserved and thus execution or justified homicide, not murder, thus you are not the same as the murderer regardless of that you both felt satisfaction.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

I agree.

But i love to make mind puzzles in removing certain elements to see that some things are the same.

I prefer when justice is done without emotion. Like a robot who simply follows the justice program.
While doing Justice, emotions like "Satisfaction" might cloud the rational thinking, which would make the punishment a bit too much over the punishment that is needed.

The point of punishment is to reform the person who did something bad to make them learn their mistakes. If punishment leaves no room for reformation to the criminal and no room for the reformed person to apply their newfound knowledge of goodness, then such punishment is useless, as it's a waste of a human.

That being said, a punch in the face helps a faulty person to snap back, i agree.

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 3 years ago Report

You mean thought experiments?

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

*thot experiments

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

POW! Right in the kisser

Ekohime

Posted by Ekohime 3 years ago Report

Aww I wanted to say that =D so, seconded!

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Hit her harder she still standing

No-One

Posted by No-One 3 years ago Report

Hit her again! Then eat her too!

...Please spit up the poor green girl first, though.

dinoman514

Posted by dinoman514 3 years ago Report

Falcon PUNCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

i was expecting something else but that works XD

AaA2000

Posted by AaA2000 3 years ago Report

Yeees yeeees yeeeees

Ento

Posted by Ento 3 years ago Report

Alright, now THIS is the kind of Child abuse I can get behind!

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

Very ironical. People make big talk about certain stuff being inexusable, but when this inexusable stuff happens to their own pleasure, they are like "Eh, i can let that slide, it's an exception"

Just making observations. I have no opinion.

Kingkrispr

Posted by Kingkrispr 3 years ago Report

"Hm... i don't care personally about their personal quarrel as long as girl inside will get churned ^_^"

Youre describing yourself lol.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

I talked about others.

I personally am indifferent to the moral stuff, only pure logic matters. I personally want to satisfy my fetish by seeing a vore victim getting churned, which is segregated from what Rachel and Madyson are doing.

But if talking about morality, i would be fine if Rachel would not do this nasty thing ever again. That would be enough to forgive her.
But what's done is done, so let's enjoy the stomach soup.

bellylov3rs

Posted by bellylov3rs 3 years ago Report

Morality is impossible with pure logic as pure logic does not exist in humans as we are programmed for emotion . You just want to justify your murder boner and trying to guilt trip anyone who doesn't agree with you because you feel you have to justify yourself to everyone for your boner so you get mad at all of us and lecture us like a bunch of children.

Get out of here with your Year 1 Psych bullshit.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

? Guilt trip? I don't plan to make anybody feel guilty.
I am assuring people that they should not feel guilty about that. And i'm not justifying myself, as it's not justifiable, and i don't need any justification.

I don't understand what's the point of "Justification" concept. Sometimes people do things and want something Just Because.

Either way, i apologize for sounding... i don't even know how i sounded like. I just say anything that comes in my head, i'm not even trying to make a solid argument.

...Wait, did i just try to justify myself? It means i need to think about that more.
Then why am i stating that? Does that mean i want to prove myself not being bad in other's eyes? It means i'm egoist? Then why am i admitting it right now? Why am i questioning it? Why am i even writing it all down? I just love to seek answers.
I loooove to question stuff.

Thanks for the experience, you provided me with fine food for thought.

psvorefan1520

Posted by psvorefan1520 3 years ago Report

Am okay with this.

Megamorph1213

Posted by Megamorph1213 3 years ago Report

Ok that was the last way I expected this comic to go.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol what were you expecting then? xD

Megamorph1213

Posted by Megamorph1213 3 years ago Report

Not her punching her sister that's for sure.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

Hm... i don't care personally about their personal quarrel as long as girl inside will get churned ^_^

Kismet

Posted by Kismet 3 years ago Report

To quote Othello from Unreal Tournament 3:
“DAYYYYUUMM”

Yan

Posted by Yan 3 years ago Report

D A M N.
she had it comin

reliuskaiser

Posted by reliuskaiser 3 years ago Report

Nice. Well deserved. Someone's gonna have to start working on regurgitation.

OhSevenTen

Posted by OhSevenTen 3 years ago Report

Madison is PISSED

Junogray

Posted by Junogray 3 years ago Report

I've rarely seen a punch more deserved

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i think i should take that as a compliment

Junogray

Posted by Junogray 3 years ago Report

Indeed that was the intent

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 3 years ago Report

C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

unless Rachel enjoys being hit...

COUNTER BREAKER!

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

noice

crosswarrior24

Posted by crosswarrior24 3 years ago Report

for the memes
ahem...

GIORNO'S THEME INTENSIFIES!!!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

whut?

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 3 years ago Report

pow!

bloodwolfvamp

Posted by bloodwolfvamp 3 years ago Report

oh noes and oh mys

blackovanossar

Posted by blackovanossar 3 years ago Report

THANKS MADI! (rach definitly deseved it ^^)

Mizuna

Posted by Mizuna 3 years ago Report

Judging by the angle she’s going to fall in the next panel due to her gut

Negimalover

Posted by Negimalover 3 years ago Report

Inb4 she eats Rachael

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 3 years ago Report

Im on the edge of my seat

Grimlock

Posted by Grimlock 3 years ago Report

Well lets see if her secret is out on the next panel.
Mommy dearest might have to do a bit of a cover up to hide the fact that her daughter has eaten and digested 5 girls.

something1337

Posted by something1337 3 years ago Report

Eaten 5, only digested 4 so far.

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

their is still time to save the other girl XD

VioletNom

Posted by VioletNom 3 years ago Report

Oh no

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

oh, yes

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Whoa is that forshadowing that her sister will also try to eat someone?

Great stuff again Gokai

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

idk, is it?

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

The story is really good stuff man, great job on it by the way.

Stay safe and have great day.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

it's much appreciated lol ty

DragonPirate

Posted by DragonPirate 3 years ago Report

Well the cat's out of the bag And maybe that girl too

Yan

Posted by Yan 3 years ago Report

Maybe if she goes to get help mint girl will get out? is that her plan or is she simply storming out cuz shes angry? ahhh the wait is killin me

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Death flag for the mother. Cross your fingers, everyone.

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report

Well, I mean... that would be bad, because she still needs a guardian...
But, I'm not disagreeing with you either X3

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Eh, just let them get adopted. Anyone would be better than the evangelical totalitarian neanderthal they have right now.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

snerk

bellylov3rs

Posted by bellylov3rs 3 years ago Report

She puts all blame on her sis who gets jailed for years would be deliciously ironic karma but I know that's not how it'll end she'll probably escape due punishment outside that punch

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

please tell me green haired girl is gonna get realesd

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i shall do no such thing

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Oh boy whats going to happen? Great stuff so far!

Persona59523

Posted by Persona59523 3 years ago Report

Nooooo! Let the poor girl out!

Negimalover

Posted by Negimalover 3 years ago Report

Sooner or later Rachael is gonna get eaten herself due to her punishment

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

it's not impossible

Negimalover

Posted by Negimalover 3 years ago Report

What does that mean

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

yes, it could happen - Raigekink 2020

POPObro

Posted by POPObro 3 years ago Report

in before her mother revials she can also do that and manages to sneak her away

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

Oh no

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

oh, yes

KuyaFred

Posted by KuyaFred 3 years ago Report

love the experssion on maddie's face

Justarock

Posted by Justarock 3 years ago Report

Aw man, that green haired girl’s gonna die, I wanted her to live. This is pretty dark though, each of the three people involved in this is a little girl.

Justarock

Posted by Justarock 3 years ago Report

Adorable little girl.

FetishLover8881

Posted by FetishLover8881 3 years ago Report

Gluttony child finally snaps.

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

You done messed up girl

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

Great advice madison

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

*facepalm*

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i'm pretty sure that's not what caused the bruise

pokebreeder25

Posted by pokebreeder25 3 years ago Report

i know.

Robotdocter

Posted by Robotdocter 3 years ago Report

i really hope she doesnt get away with this -_-

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

But she will.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

excuse me, sir or madam. but are you the writer? no. am i the writer? yes. do i know if Rachel will get away with it? no. cause i haven't written it yet. so ha.

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

If I know my writers, I don’t think you’ll change your plot just to challenge little ol me.

Tunknownusert

Posted by Tunknownusert 3 years ago Report

Lol, never tempt someone. Never know how far they will be willing to go just to make someone eat their own words :P

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

We’ll see. All I really hope for is a little talk between Madison and Kiwi.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i promise nothing

Hereforvore

Posted by Hereforvore 3 years ago Report

Considering she's looking right at the predator with a big bulging belly and seems more concerned with the bruise than the bulge as big as her daughter I think she already knows at least partly

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Geez, getting angry at her daughter for having a bruise? Not cool.

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 3 years ago Report

I assume she thought she got into a fight

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 2 years ago Report

Even so, show some sympathy. It could've been one-sided.

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 3 years ago Report

Nice Cliffhanger pal.

P1an3tv0re

Posted by P1an3tv0re 3 years ago Report

STOP LEAVING US ON CLIFFHANGERS GOSH DARN IT!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

no

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

I want to beat her for letting Kiwi get eaten the mom better find out or i will riot!

Justarock

Posted by Justarock 3 years ago Report

Poor poor green haired girl.

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

nooooo ;_; let green hair live she doesnt have to die

AaA2000

Posted by AaA2000 3 years ago Report

I like how Rachel is trying to hide Maddie belly and never sell her out even after she punched her

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

That might just be so she can keep eating people.

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

Look at my tears and hear me cry. I am the distraction!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

basically, this

Wanderingspirit1333

Posted by Wanderingspirit1333 3 years ago Report

It’s hilarious how people getting philosophical in the comments of a vore post

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

Rachel is smart, she knows how to keep secrets.

daeway

Posted by daeway 3 years ago Report

HOW IS SHE HIDING THAT PAUNCH!? SHE IS A MAGICIAN!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol, well tbh the idea is that the mom is only really concerned about Rachel, Madison is just kinda... there. proverbially invisible

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report

Really looking forward to chapter 3 :D

something1337

Posted by something1337 3 years ago Report

If that soon to be ex-mother looks to the right she might have her answer.

anema_sesuna

Posted by anema_sesuna 3 years ago Report

Hopefully kiwi survives

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i promise nothing

Negimalover

Posted by Negimalover 3 years ago Report

Except the fact that Kiwi is dead.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i did? someone should have told me

Negimalover

Posted by Negimalover 3 years ago Report

Remember, she got digested iirc

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Not yet.

VioletNom

Posted by VioletNom 3 years ago Report

I cant Wait for part 3

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

Wait did kiwi have a abusive mother??? Ah man that makes what happened hit much harder;-;

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

On the plus side no one will miss her

Wanderingspirit1333

Posted by Wanderingspirit1333 3 years ago Report

Dang man

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

She’s also going to a better place. Whether that’s Heaven or Madison’s body/soul, it’s bound to be better for her.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

squishy pink heaven

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

so youre confirming kiwi is dead

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

All snug and warm, resting inside her fat cells.

Yan

Posted by Yan 3 years ago Report

maybe its her older sister

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

i say nothing

ToxicRoses

Posted by ToxicRoses 3 years ago Report

am i ment to feel bad for he girl that is trapped in a belly? i really hope she gets out

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

well i mean you're free to feel however you want to about it lol. stories are open to interpretation of the reader

TETRO

Posted by TETRO 3 years ago Report

Everything gets out of the belly eventually...

ToxicRoses

Posted by ToxicRoses 3 years ago Report

Lol, fair

Ayra42

Posted by Ayra42 3 years ago Report

welp had it coming for her

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Interesting... Madison seems to have a soft spot for Rachel somewhere in there. I suspect they’ll have a long talk about this next chapter.

Hopefully before Kiwi is packed away.

drmighty

Posted by drmighty 3 years ago Report

It's certainly possible she can survive as it takes madison some time to actually digest them

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

There’s also the fact that this is the first time we’ve gotten an internal shot. Three, in fact.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

what? no... you're... overthinking it?

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Maybe she’ll be released, either to run or to join them.
Or maybe she’ll be talked into just giving in like the kiwi that Kiwi is.
The choice is ultimately yours.

Amithsia

Posted by Amithsia 3 years ago Report

Interesting...

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol that doesn't give me much to go on xD

Yan

Posted by Yan 3 years ago Report

Hoping for Kiwi to somehow survive qwq

Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report

Nooooo Kiwi! Poor girl doesn’t deserve to be shat.

Plume7

Posted by Plume7 3 years ago Report

Joke’s on you. Gokai doesn’t do disposal, and thank god.

Tai223236

Posted by Tai223236 3 years ago Report

RIP, even a toilet scene would suffix lol.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

if i got that, it'd have to be from a different artist lol gokai has a pretty clear "nope" to that

NeoXtreme

Posted by NeoXtreme 3 years ago Report

One gets a black eye

One gets a yummy meal.

Everyone wins.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

well now... that's certainly one way of looking at it lol

NeoXtreme

Posted by NeoXtreme 3 years ago Report

Her kill count is 5.

She had it coming.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

so Madison gave her 5 across the face, hmm? I like where this is going lol

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 3 years ago Report

Damn this was really good Gokai can’t wait for chapter 3

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

agreed xD

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

noooooooo kiwi is dead !!!! ;n; i officially hate rachel . her sister shouldve broke her jaw

Tai223236

Posted by Tai223236 3 years ago Report

That belly smooth. Something tells me she's been gurgled up. : )

Great comic btw, definitely look forward to the next one!

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

yes, likewise. once gokai finishes up the holiday rush hopefully 3 will drop

e_voyager

Posted by e_voyager 3 years ago Report

Indeed it is one meal at a time.

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 years ago Report

I'm... Very confused. Does the mother know, or did she somehow, magically, not see Madison with a gut? It feels like some stuff was just skipped out on from this page and the last one

GokaiVore

Posted by GokaiVore 3 years ago Report

So the idea was that Rachel is the favorite so the mother is really only paying attention to her being hurt and not noticing madison at all.

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 years ago Report

Ah okay, interesting! xP

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

there's a lot of subtle things in the comics that hint that Rachel is the mom's favorite and Madison is just kinda there.

StealthTrooper

Posted by StealthTrooper 3 years ago Report

I love your art style and i love the story although i wish rachel would get what she deserves and as unlikely as it is to happen i want kiwi to survive

bellylov3rs

Posted by bellylov3rs 3 years ago Report

Just feels like the story is making us intentionally feel bad about kiwi and hate Rachel even more without satisfying payoff either way which I've noticed has already turned off many people and won't lie already on the fence myself with dropping the story and then skimming it when it's done which is a shame as I loved part one and part two has just felt like a punishment for liking part one.


Well it was drawn well at least and hope the story will develop in an interesting way from here.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

well firstly they're chapter installments so i can't just do everything in one go.

It wasn't so much meant as making ppl "feel bad" it was more for character development.

Since my stories have vore, sometimes it will be random characters, other times it will be more established or known ones. I do that so things won't get sterile like "main character walks into place with several rando's, eats them all"

I find it kinda interesting so many people are feeling bad about Kiwi and not so much Sophia or Ms Devereux. Or even Stacy's mom.

KeyteeChan

Posted by KeyteeChan 3 years ago Report

It's a simple "Feel bad for innocent cutie" instinct that people developed to make themselves feel like good people.

GregTheGrimm

Posted by GregTheGrimm 3 years ago Report

Well, considering the rate the city's youth is ending up digested it's not at all wrong to say "the town's going to crap"...

TETRO

Posted by TETRO 3 years ago Report

My thoughts exactly. The city is quite literally going to crap, often through the digestive system of a little girl.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

dammit that's brilliant. i mean... yes, that is exactly how i intended

Bright

Posted by Bright 3 years ago Report

Nice stomach view.

SeptyChan

Posted by SeptyChan 3 years ago Report

Personally it was too long of a comic. Really killed interest half way through.

Not your fault though

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

that's nice

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 3 years ago Report

love the comic, just got confused by the second page 8 x3

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 3 years ago Report

poor Maddie

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

she gonna need serious therapy for sure

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 3 years ago Report

A. for some reason this particular post is a treasure trove for myself as an ethics student, and B. there's quite some weight behind that punch

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

every time i revisit the site, i want to avoid the anxiety this page gives me lol

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 3 years ago Report

I get that entirely x3

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 3 years ago Report

can't wait for chapter 3 (finally a comic I'm invested in that hasn't been last uploaded 5 years ago)

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 3 years ago Report

lol awesome! i'm glad people are enjoying it xD

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 10 months ago Report

Well chapter 3 is finished and uploaded now xD

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 10 months ago Report

And it's been wonderful <3

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 10 months ago Report

Thank you! It means so much to me that people genuinely enjoy the content

Jackpot13666

Posted by Jackpot13666 10 months ago Report

Of course! I love the story and am more than curious to see where it goes next.

Predator2345

Posted by Predator2345 2 years ago Report

Okay I have been waiting for a very long time to finish this comic I know that everyone who has seen or heard of Maddie First Time Aftermath And Snack and lastly Rachel First time we want part 3 so can you please post it some time maybe in 2022 of next year that would be greatly appreciated

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 10 months ago Report

Part 3 is finished now though xD

Predator2345

Posted by Predator2345 2 years ago Report

I am so ready to see part 2

Predator2345

Posted by Predator2345 2 years ago Report

I am so ready for part 3

jonathan1501

Posted by jonathan1501 1 year ago Report

Welp, she spoiled her dinner.

jonathan1501

Posted by jonathan1501 1 year ago Report

Vore or not, this is amazing.

raigekink

Posted by raigekink 10 months ago Report

Thank you very much. These kinda comments really bolster my desire to keep writing

jonathan1501

Posted by jonathan1501 9 months ago Report

Your welcome

Tooka

Posted by Tooka 5 months ago Report

Five? what did I miss I thought I read everything :(

utub29682

Posted by utub29682 2 weeks ago Report

This was so good! Really loving the story so far!