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Previous Chapter (Teaser): https://aryion.com/g4/view/628695
The first actual chapter of what is likely to become an ongoing serialization. Several people gave me helpful feedback on the teaser chapter, so thanks for all the encouragement! Hope everyone enjoys.
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Posted by DreamyGalaxy 3 years ago Report
Please please please continuuueee!!! <w< Its so good <3
Posted by TheKawaiiCommie 3 years ago Report
Thank you! I most certainly will.
Posted by rotta287 3 years ago Report
Welp that is some spooky stuff. Only criticism is thati n this part and the prior one there were words that had been bisected by an early space.
Posted by TheKawaiiCommie 3 years ago Report
Thanks for your comment! The random broken words are an unfortunate side effect of my word processor when exporting. I'm definitely looking for a workaround before I upload the next chapter. Stay posted.
Posted by THEholySnail 1 year ago Report
Whoa what an epic monster design.
The first appearance was already terrifying enough but that second one was truly a dreadfull one.