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Dawn defeats May and claims victory in the Wallace Cup. The next day, May challenges Dawn to a battle to prove she is the better trainer… but how well will that go for her?
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Word Count (this part) — 6,179
Word Count (overall) — 28,534
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Part 1 of a commission for Anon based on episode 79 of the Diamond and Pearl anime.
I had fun writing some Pokémon vore smut based on MidnightOwlArt’s outline. The story ended up being longer than I expected, so it’s broken into four parts.
As always, I hope it’s enjoyable : D
PART 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/636092
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MOBILE: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JWdW65suys6x4jgqs1VCF269Fyd0M980fne4pbAk7-k/edit?usp=sharing
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Visual aid for the characters
Dawn (coordinating costume): https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/9/91/Dawn_DP077_contest.png
Dawn (normal outfit): https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/b/b2/Dawn_BW2.png
May (coordinating costume): https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/e/eb/May_Wallace_Cup.png
May (normal outfit): https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/b/b1/May_AG_3.png
Ash: https://www.pngitem.com/pimgs/m/485-4858552_pokemon-diamond-and-pearl-ash-hd-png-download.png
Zoey: https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/thumb/f/fc/Zoey_anime.png/512px-Zoey_anime.png
Kyle: https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/6/60/Kyle_Sinnoh.png
Wallace: https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/5/51/Wallace_anime.png
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Posted by Artist-san 3 years ago Report
Oh a pokemon story. Guess I'll fave this in advance for later.
Posted by MidNightOwlArt 3 years ago Report
Don’t worry it a really good story, very detailed and some great post digesting part that everyone will enjoy.
Love your art btw! Love the Serena and Jessie comic!
Posted by Artist-san 3 years ago Report
Oh thank you. I read the story btw. lllll1337 does a fantastic job as usual. It's just a shame that I have to wait 2 weeks for the second part. I wanted to read it immediately. So far my only questions about it would be "why is the contest judge that only gives praise saying "remarkable" not in the story?", "why is Togekiss fairy/flying when it was normal/flying back in that time?" and "why is Brock not in the story at all?" I wonder what happened to Brock especially. Though the togekiss typing doesn't matter for me. I just wanted to point it out.
Posted by lllll1337 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback!
"Why is the contest judge that only gives praise saying "remarkable" not in the story?"
Honestly, if that was a thing in the Wallace Cup arc from the anime, I totally forgot about it xD Probably would've snuck it in somewhere if I'd remembered.
"Why is Togekiss fairy/flying when it was normal/flying back in that time?"
I'm basically thinking of the story as an alternative universe, so I threw in modern typing just for fun.
"Why is Brock not in the story at all?"
MidNightOwlArt specifically asked for interactions between Dawn and Ash, so I just left Brock out because I felt there were already enough characters.
Posted by Artist-san 3 years ago Report
Well at least Brock isn't dead. Just hitting on girls outside I suppose.
The teasing is really good here. You're one of the few writers I can put confidence in to hit the nail on it each time.
I'm really hyped to commission you sometime. As soon as possible even. Your writing is so good, it makes the pandemic a breeze to deal with.
Posted by MidNightOwlArt 3 years ago Report
Those are some good points actually
To be honest when i did this project i think I forgot about Brock lol.
When i seen the episode on YouTube i guess i never seen him and that it only Ash at the time, oops.
IF he was there i’m pretty sure he be pointing out the “rules of Vore” to everyone and either just watch the action or look away like Ash.
The togekiss though idk i guess I didn’t see it i’d would of change it back to flying/normal if I seen it, oh well just a minor flaw.
And i wasn’t going to mention this at first but you can go to my gallery and see the whole story there.
It called “Friendly Rivalry (Dawn’s Victory Meal)” on my writings.
Just be sure to favorite all the story parts from lllll1337 when they come out lllll1337 deserved it all!
Posted by Tsavo 3 years ago Report
Oh my, I love the set-up for this so far.
Posted by lllll1337 3 years ago Report
Glad you're liking it~ :3
Posted by FreedomPug 3 years ago Report
all my fave writers are returning from slumber, from sarus to progressive, now you, life is good
Posted by lllll1337 3 years ago Report
\o/