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Against the Wall [Short story] By BunnyWrites -- Report

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Fey's night out takes an unexpected turn as she discovers why there's so many missing-girl posters plastered outside her favourite nightclub.

This is a mini-story based on  Ragnar's amazing drawing that you can view here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/635016

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ragnar

Posted by ragnar 3 years ago Report

Good girl.

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report

I just hope my squirming in your belly doesn't cause too much of a distraction from your next hunt <3

ragnar

Posted by ragnar 3 years ago Report

Distraction?
I'm going to sit back in my lair and dedicate the evening just to enjoy your gurgling, my tasty thing.
And I *will* enjoy it thoroughly.

shortprey20

Posted by shortprey20 3 years ago Report

Wooo! Always good to see a new story from you Bunny! If only i had the same drive at this point :p

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report

Thanks <3 And yeah I've been terrible with stalling with stories. My last full story was over half a year ago @_@

I've got a bunch of these mini-stories to go up along with some new ragnar art. I thought it'd be quicker to deal with a mini-story, although I find a shorter story just results in more editing rewrites and takes just as long lol.

Anyway, nice to hear from you, feel free to PM me if you want to chat~

Ghostdragon

Posted by Ghostdragon 3 years ago Report

Quite the play and rising action to the anticipation of consuming a lovely female. Plays right up to my likes, hehe ♥

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report

Thanks, it's always a pleasure to know I've pleased a predator. Maybe keeps me off the menu for a few hours <3

Ghostdragon

Posted by Ghostdragon 3 years ago Report

It might! Though I'd have to say that is a difficult feat to convince most predators at holding back a little~

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report

Hmm indeed, a nice cum filled prey just seems to entice them even more <3

TheDarkTraveler

Posted by TheDarkTraveler 3 years ago Report

I bet he can't wait to find out what her name is from a poster so he can add her to his top 10 list. I bet he volunteers to hang missing person's posters up just so he can make sure all of his are on the wall.

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report

Oh half the time he only finds out one of his prior snacks names when he sees the missing girl poster go up of her a few days later. It's a nice way to attract more possible prey to the alley, a sister, an aunt, a friend putting up missing posters for those they cared about, only to meet the same fate the one they cared about met. <3

TheDarkTraveler

Posted by TheDarkTraveler 3 years ago Report

at least they end up together in the end

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report

Indeed, and then another friend/relative of the latest meal needs to put up posters and the cycle repeats. A renewable food supply <3

Fischie

Posted by Fischie 3 years ago Report

I really liked all of this, but my favourite was him remembering past meals and the outro. Such a nice symbiosis.

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report

Thank you! It was a lot of fun coming up with the various past meals he had as I talked it over with Ragnar.

Fischie

Posted by Fischie 3 years ago Report

I love using such memories as fluff for preds in my own stories. Creates a good image of their appetite.

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report

Yeah absolutely, you can hint at so much backstory and fire up the imagination with just a few lines of text. It makes everything feel more grounded.