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My first commission for an anonymous commissioner! Thanks for them for the commission!
Three girls go for a trip with their dogs, when one of them forgets to bring proper food for the dogs... You may guess what will happen next.
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Posted by Bigtimmy 3 years ago Report
Very good story
Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by anyonarex 3 years ago Report
Very nice stuff. Good dialogue, and hard vore is such a fun thing to aee in stories. X3 good job.
Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)
Posted by darkmoon64 3 years ago Report
Very Good history as always
Pd. thanks to you I started writing history of cooking
Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 3 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad to hear my work is inspiring others too :)
Posted by Johnfire117 3 years ago Report
Great story always enjoy your work
Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 3 years ago Report
"Yes, but not for you. The dogs are hungry, and you are just much tastier type with your slight curves. Bare muscle is not as good as you think." Aurora noted casually as she pushed her friend off the boulder and towards the dogs."
"Long live the king" (do best Scar impression)
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 3 years ago Report
also should have just stayed on her rock
Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 3 years ago Report
Lol :D Yeah, she should have. But she was too good sport to break the rules the three agreed to :P
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 3 years ago Report
This isn't really my thing sexually, but this a solid story in its own right, and it kinda reminds me of how a twist horror story ends. Not bad at all, I think I'll favorite this...
Posted by DarkSideOfTheSun 3 years ago Report
Thanks! It is great to hear that it works as a proper story too, even if it isn't necessarily intended so. I'm writing a "normal" book too, so "normal" story writing is important for me too :)
Posted by Werewolf-Hero 3 years ago Report
I forgot to comment.
I think it would have been better with a survivor, as long as it wasn't the vegan.
Posted by Kingofblades 2 years ago Report
Yeah agreed
For me it was both cool yet way too cruel to end with the current one
Just really threw me off
Posted by kitzlig 3 years ago Report
Somehow I missed this earlier. It is amazing and I loved the end.