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Rey becomes Prey By Vir -- Report

Uploaded: 3 years ago

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Star Wars (Crossover) story featuring http://profile.aryion.com/profile/Denis.

Rey travels to a distant planet with an ancient Jedi temple, where she comes upon her greatest... and possibly final trial.

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Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 3 years ago Report

Awesome, more Denis!!!!

Vir

Posted by Vir 3 years ago Report

Thank you~ ^^

Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 3 years ago Report

Thank you for sharing the great writing

nervousvampire

Posted by nervousvampire 3 years ago Report

I like the cock egotistical rey you did, gives her more personality than she had in the movies

Vir

Posted by Vir 3 years ago Report

Was worried I missed the mark on what minuscule personality she had, but glad you liked the result. ^^

nervousvampire

Posted by nervousvampire 3 years ago Report

ya she's such a Mary sue she doesn't have much of one but the cock angle of thinking she's the best at everything ever is well done, honestly might have made the movies interesting if she had that kind of personality and then kept failing because she wasn't trying hard enough.
but I digress, well done

PhantomWolf

Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report

Good to see you writing again. Always good to see M/F material from you! Even if Rey isn't my cup of tea. Well done!

Vir

Posted by Vir 3 years ago Report

Thank you very much. I don't like Rey either, which was all the more reason to have her eaten.

Nugget1138

Posted by Nugget1138 3 years ago Report

Nice to see more Rey as prey! lol I'm more dissapointed in Rey than outright hate her, characters don't fail writing but writing sure does fail characters. But it is none the less cathartic to see her as prey for such a great pred like Denis. Great work as always!

ReptileKing23

Posted by ReptileKing23 3 years ago Report

Lovely m8 well written as always. Bah Rey is boring as prey.

Bloodhawk757

Posted by Bloodhawk757 3 years ago Report

I love your stories, but waiting 3-4 months for each one kinda sucks....

ReptileKing23

Posted by ReptileKing23 3 years ago Report

I mean I'm sure Vir has a LIFE outside of Eka's mate!