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It's the future! Liv, a beautiful but stressed-out escort, uses a high-tech transformation booth to shrink and consume her clients before returning them back to their original state.
Will everything go according to plan?
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Posted by Altimos 3 years ago Report
It was a little long and drawn out in spots but well worth the read...
But it was needed to give a sense of the length of time that needed to pass.
A mighty fine read, everything about it was on point in regards to hitting specific niches <3 <3 <3
Posted by supernova 3 years ago Report
Thank you so much Altimos!
Posted by Lupe 3 years ago Report
Amazing seeing you do transformation vore! You handled it really well considering it was your first writing it. Definitely would like to see more of it from you in the future.
Posted by supernova 3 years ago Report
LUPE!!!!! YOU ARE AMAZING! I remember you from years ago! And THANK YOU FOR THE KIND WORDS!
Posted by Lupe 3 years ago Report
You're the amazing one to be writing all the years! I read a lot more than I comment, but always look forward to when you put out a new story.
Posted by nerdelation8 3 years ago Report
Wow, this was incredible! And the end gave me chills.
Posted by supernova 2 years ago Report
Thank you! I appreciate it!
Posted by oishi1 3 years ago Report
The characters were well written. The way you depicted Liv as able to fake interest for the job was exactly how escorts and exotic dancers act.
The first client's predicament is his own fault.
It was a long read, but I found myself wanting to hear more about the character.
Posted by supernova 2 years ago Report
She may be back soon! Thank you for your interest!