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Chapter 04 - When it Rains it Pours By walkingbyself -- Report

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Just when Markus starts to bond with his daughter and getting her used to the people who he interacts with frequently. It turns out that in fact you cannot just ignore past debts. And that when it rains it pours.

As a bad situation goes from bad to worse. But luckily there are those around him to help keep him from going off the deep end. And surprisingly a developing friendship from a person he would not have expected.

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walkingbyself: Hi there! Thank you for your interest in either the artwork I commission or the stories I write!

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shadow9774

Posted by shadow9774 3 years ago Report

This is so well written and well paced it feels like it was written and produced professionally. Sufficed to say, very well done. This series is looking to be a keeper.

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walkingbyself

Posted by walkingbyself 3 years ago Report

Thank you, I am glad you think so. I try to put a little more effort into this series. Than I otherwise would for my more lewd stories.

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deg21

Posted by deg21 3 years ago Report

bit late of a comment, but it's a good read
also i think you swapped someone's name partway through, at like page 10. Joshua turned into Jason for the rest of it

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walkingbyself

Posted by walkingbyself 3 years ago Report

Ah It would seem so, thank you for catching that. I'll fix that. Glad you have enjoyed it.

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