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Lyra’s lost out in the dense forest of New Bark Town’s woods, this would be fine except she didn’t have any food! But a girl’s gotta do what a girl’s gotta do, and with a hungry stare, she pulled out the pokeball that housed her own Chikorita.

Hey guys, this is my first story here! A bit of a short one but I did what I could, but I always accept feedback so if you have any, don’t hesitate to tell me (of course, if you enjoyed it, you could tell me that too...)
Got re uploaded cause I'm a doofus at uploading things.

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Brinbo25

Posted by Brinbo25 1 year ago Report

I think this turned out really good honestly, very descriptive and love the casual cruelty. also just a fan of the trainer eating their own small pokemon dymanic in general

SecretLadybug

Posted by SecretLadybug 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the feedback! I was a bit worried that it was too short to make something truly descriptive but hopefully in the future I’ll write a longer story around the human/Pokémon premise

Tyslan03

Posted by Tyslan03 1 year ago Report

Awesome story! Keep up the great work!

SecretLadybug

Posted by SecretLadybug 1 year ago Report

Thank you so much for the feedback!

Flunkifer

Posted by Flunkifer 1 year ago Report

I love trainer preds with Pokémon prey~

Great story btw!

SecretLadybug

Posted by SecretLadybug 1 year ago Report

Honestly it’s really underappreciated. Right now I’m brainstorming for the next human x pokemon one so that should be out maybe soon!

Flunkifer

Posted by Flunkifer 1 year ago Report

Oh, really? I'm excited~ :3

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 1 year ago Report

Really like it and I hope to see more stuff that's similar to it! <3

SecretLadybug

Posted by SecretLadybug 1 year ago Report

Thanks so much! If you don’t mind the question, what did you like about it the most?

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 1 year ago Report

Well.. The concept, really. The idea of feeling little to no grief? Maybe that's a bit too much.. But at the same time, not regretting it much at all is good too! Only error I see here is that, at least what I'm assuming.. She no longer has any pokemon, which sits weird with me, especially since she went and did it without, supposedly, ever getting another pokemon. Not that that can't work, of course!
I liked the story in general, and the enjoyment of it was quite satisfactory. The struggling dying down, the poor little thing also sat very well with me. :)