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Commission for Spectrume and sequel to:https://aryion.com/g4/view/605594
A/N: I know you guys liked this story's predecessor but tbh writing it was torturous for me. PURELY because of the ANAL VORE. I was trying to be open-minded to appease more kinks that go beyond my personal tastes. But unfortunately, Anal Vore is one I can stomach no longer. So the Tl:Dr is this is the LAST story I accepted with Anal vore and I will not write about it anymore!
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Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 3 years ago Report
Love it, even though I too am not a fan of AV
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Matteo42 3 years ago Report
Real good stuff, dude!
Don't force yourself into writing AV if you don't like it/hate it, no matter what others may say. Write what you like, cuz that's more then half of the fun of this "art"!
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
Thank you!!! I'd say it was more me trying to expand my horizons than "forcing" myself. I've been a firm believer in "Don't knock it til you try it" Well I tried it... and didn't enjoy it lol!
Posted by antoinou62185 3 years ago Report
I must say that is really much more than part 1
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
Hopefully, that's a good thing!
Posted by antoinou62185 3 years ago Report
it's a good thing to say continue
Posted by MugenNoSaga 3 years ago Report
I'm mega impressed with this part 2, way bigger and with lots of unexpected stuff in it. As for the two who were inside of Smith, not surprise at all, kinda expected.
As for Miia to become a prey addict, that sure is the biggest surprise of this story imo. Too bad about Mero having such small role in the later orgy and I really was expecting for Suu to make her way inside Smith and stay in there after those two had so much time together.
Overall, pretty awesome.
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
You'll be seeing another Monster Musume fic from me soon :). But its not be like these commissioned ones
Posted by MugenNoSaga 3 years ago Report
I'll be looking forward to your next jobs and see what kind of spiciness you bring us. Have a great day.
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
Thank you, You as well!
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 3 years ago Report
Honestly, I'd love to see some M/F stuff for this series from you. Kimihito needs to be fed, god dammit
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
LMAO LBS, You know what they say about great minds ^-^. I halfway agree with you. There DOES need to be more M/F material with Monster Musume (and some other fandoms). My recent post on the forum gave me some insight into why Male Preds get put on the "back burner" so to speak and I definitely have more juicy M/F material in the works. Unfortunately, I disagree with Kimihito being the pred, don't get me wrong he's a very likable character and has all the positive traits of the solo male LI in a harem based anime. But he doesn't strike me as the "pred" type you know? He's too nice and accommodating, still suffers from the "getting flustered by hot girls throwing themselves at him" that we also see in harem animes, I just can't see Kimihito as a vore pred.
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 3 years ago Report
Personally, I think that's what makes him such great pred material - being willing to swallow his partners if that's what they crave, or the contrast between how he normally is and the gluttonous hedonist he could be corrupted into becoming or that he's been hiding all this time.
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 3 years ago Report
Also, if it's any consolation, I found this fact about horse biology:
https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/001/355/757/745.png
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
Could have done without that tbh -_- But don't you worry you'll be seeing more M/F material soon!
Posted by Xabab 3 years ago Report
If AV ain't your cup of tea, don't force yourself. That's a bummer for av fans, but well... I personally loved every part of this story
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
Apologies for the delayed reply! I didn't .. force myself per se. I was trying to overcome some boundaries. Getting outside your comfort zone is where you grow. well I've grown! But still I've never going back!
Posted by Znonymous 3 years ago Report
Quite suprised there not digesting any one or teasesing it. Tho really didnt need the nasty details in the first part. Bit much. Would have been nice for some details on how massive our spider would have been with everyone in her.
Posted by PhantomWolf 3 years ago Report
Thanks for commenting!