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[Writing] Isabellas Addiction tribute: Turtle By soline -- Report

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(Okay, micro-edit. Eka's seems to ignore all paragraph breaks and collapse it into an unreadable block. I'm writing in Libraoffice eported as a Docx. Any idea how to include paragraphings?)
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An idea I've had in mind for awhile, and finally had the motivation to write up today at long last. More a stream of consciousness than my usual stories (which are almost entirely first-draft anyway, so...fare thee warned!) and also the first thing I've written in like a year so...sorry if it's trash! XD


That said, this is absolutely inspired by the utterly incredible writing and ideas of  AlisaBlueBird. If you haven't read her work before and enjoy anal vore even remotely, I strongly recommend basically everything she's ever written; it's almost all anal-centric and they have this incredible knack for concise and evocative erotica.
There are a few authors kicking around here I admire and thoroughly enjoy, but I think AlisaBlueBird might genuinely be the only one whose every single upload I've categorically adored.

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This is very much a 'tribute', in that I've attempted to imitate both the theme and general 'vibe' of her work, as well as her writing style. It's undoubtedly a pale imitation; even if I wasn't gushing over the quality of their work, it turns out my style-less style of writing is surprisingly difficult to step out of.

Story-details: This is an attempted entry into her 'Isabella's Addiction' series, about a girl with a powerful hunger for anything and everyone she can fit in her spacious trunk.

(Also AlisaBlueBird, ifyou see this. Apologies for taking such liberties with your IP and whatnot, if you don't approve please don't hesitate to let me know and I'll re-write it to exclude Isabella, or straight up delete it if needed. I had a sudden burst of motivation and didn't want to let it fade while asking permission!)


Isabella is owned by  AlisaBlueBird

Thumbnail is by Cutesexyrobutts and can be found at https://www.deviantart.com/cutesexyrobutts/art/my-OC-o-shannon-uragaan-773309724

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Incidentally and for anyone who reads this far; what are your opinions on the thumbnail? I've always been very split over the concept. On the one hand it's a quirk I've always adored about ABB's uploads, the thumbnails are always excellently chosen and cover a great story. However I'm often 'tricked' by an appealing picture into opening a story; often of sub-par quality and effort. So maybe I'm just biased because I recognize the name and know the content will be quality? But at the same time I'm very much aware I tend to skip past stories unless the tags or author catches my attention; but I'll regularly check out an artist I know I don't like and have never liked just because the thumbnail is enticing. Although ABB's (and this one) have the exemption of including in the title.

Maybe it's an issue to a small minority like me? I've never glommed on to watches and tags and still just check in every now and then to run through the entire 'Latest-Updates' until I catch up so I don't just get to check latest watched submissions and know it'll be good, story or art, because I'm already watching them.

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Slimshod

Posted by Slimshod 1 year ago Report

Use the .doc format (Word 97-03) to keep paragraphs and most formatting. It also centers your text so mobile users don't have to push the text side to side to read.

soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Humm, sadly nothing has worked. Perhaps because it was already uploaded 'wrong', re-upping new versions doesn't fix anything. But thank you! I'll bear it in mind next time and hopefully get a formatted story out!

Slimshod

Posted by Slimshod 1 year ago Report

Ya you'd have to delete it completely to fix it bc the database doesn't recognize dupe files as different for reasons. Hope it fixes things in the future.

ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 1 year ago Report

If it doesn't look like it fixed anything, you should clear your cache, or do ctrl+F5 to refresh while clearing the cache for the specific page. Then the fixed version should show up.

Slimshod

Posted by Slimshod 1 year ago Report

As for the thumbnail, I think if you do as you did and label it or it works.

Alovion

Posted by Alovion 1 year ago Report

Personally I think the thumbnail works fine! And its a great story anyhow, so it fits the quality~

And nice to see that you're still about too!

soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Huzzah! And thank you!!

I am, well whenever I get the time outside of Life™ at least -_-. It's nice to see your name popping up too!

Alovion

Posted by Alovion 1 year ago Report

Ah damn, I guess things have been super hectic lately ^^

zaneofbane

Posted by zaneofbane 1 year ago Report

Gotta double space to get Eka's to space.

soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Humm, didn't work here; maybe because it's not a new upload and just 'replacing' the file? Ahh well, thanks for the advice! Hopefully it works next time!

Runek

Posted by Runek 1 year ago Report

I hate when a gorgeous thumbnail preludes a terrible story... Doubly so when you cant get the FEKKING image to enjoy it at full size. You know the ones. But as a whole yeah sadly most stories on here get a hard pass and I just look for writers I know are quality myself :/

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 1 year ago Report

What's wrong with you?

No-One

Posted by No-One 1 year ago Report

I find that I have to double-space between paragraphs in order to get Eka's to separate them properly. Annoying, but not hard to deal with once you get used to doing it.

Malton

Posted by Malton 1 year ago Report

Excellent stuff, I love this kind of story

soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Thank you kindly! You should definitely go check out Alisa's work! (Oh and coincidentally alvinrow directly below this comment has written a few stories in the same Alisa-style!

delet256h296

Posted by delet256h296 1 year ago Report

I LOVE IT. You did the character justice and I loved this scenario. Alisa would be proud!

soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Haha thank you! I'm delighted to hear it! It's nice to see your name pop up again too, your stories were always excellent and felt in the same sort of vein as Alisa's work.

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 1 year ago Report

Awesome! From the title and picture I hoped for a new Alisa story, but was surprised its not her. Very good job, I think she might approve. A good tribute, you make me jelly.

soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Hah thank you! Yeah I wondered if it might be a bit much completely stealing the title format and picturing, but if it adds to the aesthetic then seems worth it.

Glad you approved!

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 1 year ago Report

Great work Soline - a fantastic homage to another great author. You got the style spot on, and certainly scratched that creative itch.

soline

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I'm delighted you think it worked! And I'm glad to see you're still around, it's no secret I think you're pretty darn great too! (So if 'scratching that creative itch' means it might have tickled a little Hawkeye inspiration then it was already well worth the effort ^^.

Jones

Posted by Jones 1 year ago Report

I second the motion to inspire Hawkeye :D

Excellent work Soline. A great tribute, and just thoroughly great work in of itself. Loved it! ^_^

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the kind words - sadly im so snowed in with other activities ive not been able to turn my mind to this creative work. Maybe one day i will return with more stories ... until then i love to read everyone else's - yours included!

FaultyVault

Posted by FaultyVault 1 year ago Report

While I agree with your sentiment of writing it before asking permission (because it's your time and effort, and at that point still private), I do think you should get permission before posting it publicly. I'm sure it would only take, at most, a week or so get approval, and it seems like the respectful thing to do when handling someone else's characters.