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and old story i wrote years ago that people seemed to like

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Posted by no one 7 days ago Report

Very well done!


Posted by thequietmanno1 7 days ago Report

yeah, this was a fun read the first time around, glad to see you've finally got a gallery for it- do you have pictures showing what brooke, Romaneko and such look like? and will we see more of them down the line?


Posted by unf0cused 6 days ago Report

they might crop up later i guess, but i consider this one a one-off, more or less


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Posted by Gutlover 7 days ago Report

This is actually really well done. I like the mad scientist thing. I'd love a sequel were she unbirths a boy/man next.


Posted by PhantomOfMars 6 days ago Report

That was pretty incredible. Does anyone know any other stories that handle unbirth like this?


Posted by acrylic 6 days ago Report

Are they dissolving or turning into babies?


Posted by unf0cused 6 days ago Report

i'll be honest: i never really thought it through back when i wrote this, so i guess both are valid interpretations


Posted by acrylic 5 days ago Report

Thank you for the answer unf0cused.
Then can I ask this?
Did you have anything in your mind that has to do with the preys dissolved in whatever method, and in the end sent to the ovaries for DNA storage?
I thought this after seeing how well you depicted the ovaries in Zara's portrait.