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My first story for Eka's Portal ! Quite short, but I hope you'll like it all the same ^^
A big thanks to Zevourius https://aryion.com/g4/user/Zevourius
who helped me get started, with his advices and corrections. The best goblin in town !
Every kind of help or opinion is welcomed, so do not hesitate ! If you think something's missing, go ahead and tell me.
It's only my debut, but I hope to keep writing good stories you'll enjoy ^^
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Posted by Zevourius 3 years ago Report
It was a pleasure to help ^^
Posted by ThatRaptor 3 years ago Report
was a fun read! maybe you could edit it a little bit better, have paragraphs where there's a time skip or something, but the reading itself is nice! a little bit tame, but thats just personal opinion at that point ^^ you can be proud!
Posted by BunnyLily 3 years ago Report
Thanks ! Yeah, I'll need to edit the next ones better, but I didn't know how it would like when uploaded, so I didn't bother too much with it ^^' Tame as in ? (I've just joined the community, so I might not understand everything right away :p)
Posted by ThatRaptor 3 years ago Report
don't worry about that one too much, really ^^ tame as in, not explicit. not alot of description of bodies or body parts, no real naughty fun except for very lightly hinted at enjoying the backdoor carrot etc.in fotography, you'd say 'tasteful nudity' instead of 'porn' if that helps :P then again, maybe I'm just so depraved by now that I don't really have a say in that matter <.<
Posted by BunnyLily 3 years ago Report
Oh, I get it now :D yeah it's very mild, because I wanted to focus on the build-up more than the depiction, since it would be the first work I'm uploading :p I'll probably be writing various kinds of stuff, so something bolder is definitely gonna happen !
Posted by grunt_killa 3 years ago Report
Lovely story! I've always though that meat who enjoys itself would taste the best :)
Posted by BunnyLily 3 years ago Report
Thanks ^^ I'm mostly about willing meat, so more can be expected :p
Posted by ThatRaptor 3 years ago Report
thats great! there's not enough willing meat around in my opinion ^^
Posted by BunnyLily 3 years ago Report
I think so too, and I'm planning on solving that issue :p
Posted by NonBinaryFuta 3 years ago Report
This was great, love how happy she is with it all.
Posted by BunnyLily 3 years ago Report
Thanks !
Posted by NonBinaryFuta 3 years ago Report
:D
Posted by iitadakimasu 3 years ago Report
this is soooo good and sweet i would love to be cooked like this lol
Posted by BunnyLily 3 years ago Report
Glad you like !