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On Day 6 of the Survival of the Fittest Tournament, Roxanne's team has an unusual encounter with another contestant. What will come of this fateful meeting?
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Posted by BlueMarvel611 3 years ago Report
Hey NB, this is so unexpected to see. A new chapter for this story. Honestly this helps to make my day, man. Seriously it helped me out. That said, time for the review.
From what I'm seeing of this chapter, it seems to me that our group or heroines are finally on the verge of meeting up this story's main antagonist. Honestly Black Frances is a character that I looked forward to seeing more of. I honestly look forwards to seeing how she and her group deal with Roxanne and her own. All I could say is that I get the chills waiting to see what would result from it. But I get the feeling that ONE of Roxanne's group won't be coming back.
Now onto the rest of the story, the character interactions are rather amazing. Especially with Lizzy, the ever active and ditzy girl, has started to prod Wendy, the new member into talking and interacting. Wendy needless to say is not impressed. Though it would seem that she and Roxanne were able to get along in that regard. The game of "I Spy" is one of both joy and yet madness. Though that breaks for when the new girl, Carol, appears before them.
From what I see, Carol looks to be rather scared and cautious when meeting our main group. Especially even when Lizzy, who suddenly became awkward, who was trying to calm Carol only for the girl to run away. Not to mention having to resort to kidnapping Tina in order to throw Roxanne and the group off. Though it could be my imagination but I believe that Lizzy's sudden slow pace is caused by Carol's own power but that could be just me.
Anyways I like the interaction with Tina and Carol despite how brief it was. Mostly note from Tina as I could see how determined she's become to want to REACH out and reason to Carol. Trying to get her to open up despite Carol's near lame attempts to threaten our tiny hero. It for me was honestly a good way to set up for what's to come as well as give me some insight to the characters in this sight.
So all in all, NB, you really DID a very good job with the set up here. Mostly as it would build up for what's to come. I am excited to see where it leads from here...mostly when it involves Black Frances. So I look forward to the next chapter that you would write up. Keep up the good work, man. Laters!
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel