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Prudence and Spencer get closer than they've ever been while Sybil slips further and further away.
So, here it is, the short, but sweet conclusion. Hopefully the Christmas special comes out on time.
Also, this is my first straight up sex scene. Normally I would not write this, as I have no frame of reference and the act of sex is significant turn off, but it was neccessary for the plot. Please let me know what you think.
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
And just like that Sybil has been written out of the story. Beats being dead though so thats a plus. Who knows maybe Prudence will go on a manhunt to find her, Or better yet, hire the PI who managed to sleuth out Stella. Turn this into a noir cop drama lol
Posted by Whatisaname 3 years ago Report
You never know, crazier things have happened. Though she might not be the same person by the time they find her.
Posted by Whatisaname 3 years ago Report
Where are all the random tag additions and removals coming from? None of them are even accurate.
Posted by Squiddicus 2 years ago Report
And so another lust-filled act of passion results in someone unbirthed. Hopefully Spencer's fine. I think he's kicking in there. I hope he's still got legs to kick with.
Sybil's situation really scares me because I don't think she's the first one to be fed to the snake. It still amazes me how nobody noticed something was unusual unless she shrank really quick. But this should be a lesson to everyone else: NEVER be alone.
They're all okay! I had to go back and reread the first time (when I was skimming through since I only really cared about Iz's story at the time) to realize that was Blossom. How'd Iz and Blossom eat, though? Maybe they went the whole way down to Juniper and were fed through an umbilical like she was, presumably. What happened to the bullies, I wonder. Either they were coughed up elsewhere, they were coughed up as rats, ir they were digested. If the last one, nothing of value was lost.
On a pass/fail scale, the sex scene gets a pass from me.
Posted by Whatisaname 2 years ago Report
It's less how quickly Sybil shrank and more that her devourer was sitting at a table, managing the comings and goings of patrons to make sure they each only got one of the product she and a couple others were watching over. To help curb scalpers and other assholes. But yes, she is not the first to meet the snake, but she is the first to see inside the boot.
I think I meant to explain that later, but forgot to. Essentially, the rat didn't develop right due to Juniper's unique position. Basically, it has no stomach cause Juniper was supposed to provide it when she transformed. So when it eats, things travel down to Juniper's open maw, where she ingests it and digests it. The bullies are still around, hanging out on Juniper's belly and thighs. As for Blossom and Iz, they were spared Juniper's stomach and instead, she'd leave fresher bits of food in the womb for them to snack on.
Thank you! I think I'm bad at it, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Squiddicus 2 years ago Report
Here's hoping Sybil doesn't get stuck in the boot as an in-sole, as Tinies frequently end up. My guess is that if Sybil were to be killed by another Awoken (God forbid), since she was shrunken into a Tiny, an artificial Tiny, in other words, her killer would just get the X-ray vision. I wonder if it causes cancer...
Okay, so everything the rat ate went the rest of the way down to be eaten by Juniper, who I assume used a reverse-umbillical to keep the rat going. So when she was digging in the trash, she herself was actually eating... eww...
Still makes me wonder why she swallowed Blossom in the first place, since she had a reason to swallow Iz. At least Blossom's got two less problems to deal with. Not sure I want to see the fallout of her being missing for about month, though.
Posted by Whatisaname 2 years ago Report
Yep, they'd only get the vision. I could imagine with prolonged exposure it would.
That's why she hung around dumpsters near restuarants. More likely to find something properly edible in there.
I think Juniper felt like she needed to protect Blossom in the moment, which manifested in her eating her. Nowhere safer than putting a foot of flesh between you and the cold, uncaring world.
Posted by Squiddicus 2 years ago Report
But now that Sybil's a Tiny, that's a fair bit less radiation, so that might not help her escape. At best, it'll take a while for the tumors to kick in, but then that leaves her as unclaimed property, which is its own can of worms. Even if she did make it out of that mess, she's still stuck in Oregon. I hope Prue's parents are nice to her, they're her only hope of getting home.