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A Detective's Delectable Dish By Kiritaba -- Report

In collaboration with  EmblemMan comes a story focusing on everyone's (well, certainly my) favorite detective; Naoto Shirogane, during the events of Persona 5. Being tasked to help the SIU with the investigation into the Phantom Thieves, her involvement in the case gets dialed to 11 when she accidentally finds herself in Mementos.

I'll be real - this is definitely an excuse for me to start writing more Naoto-centric stuff in the future if I so choose to. Now that I've gotten some of the rust off, it might be fun to give her another shot in the future. It had been a while since I wrote about my favorite member of P4's cast, so hopefully there's enjoyment to be found in this story we wrote up together - because we certainly had fun doing it.

If you want the down-and-dirty...if that's the saying, I'm not entirely sure to be honest - of the matter, this is a RP log of a story we wrote together over the past...week or so? Just cleaned up with some minor tweaks here and there to make sure it's up to snuff.

As for my writing partner with all this, once again, the great  EmblemMan - I totally recommend checking him out, he's awesome, and we have a bunch in common. He likes Fire Emblem, Persona, Ace Attorney, I mean, covering a lot of my bases right there! Though to be honest, it's almost a little weird how much we have in common. We're talking same food preferences kind of weird. Regardless, I'd say he knocked it out of the park with Ann and Rise, to the point where I did feel a little bad JUST handling Naoto.

As for me, I'm still working on a few things at the moment, and while I won't say exactly what they are, I can say that...it's going alright. Progress has been a little slower than I would have liked, but that's been due to issues with medical providers that I've been sort of powerless to do anything about. But, now that it's all been settled, hopefully I can get right back into the swing of things!

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Gillsley

Posted by Gillsley 3 years ago Report

Daaaaang this story was long, and honestly a great read. Definitely worth the wait.

Kiritaba

Posted by Kiritaba 3 years ago Report

We're so glad you liked it!

EmblemMan

Posted by EmblemMan 3 years ago Report

Yeah, really appreciate it!

lukesk11135

Posted by lukesk11135 3 years ago Report

Truly nothing more romantic than helping your significant other digest someone.

EmblemMan

Posted by EmblemMan 3 years ago Report

It's true. Lovers' duties, ya know?

lukesk11135

Posted by lukesk11135 3 years ago Report

But seriously though this was really good and cute. I like Naorise and vore and this combines both of them which is amazing.

Kiritaba

Posted by Kiritaba 3 years ago Report

Naorise's one of my favorite pairings in the series, honestly. I've just always seemed a lot of potential for the two of them as a couple, feel like their personalities really bounce well off one another.

lukesk11135

Posted by lukesk11135 3 years ago Report

Its probably in my top 3. Also probably an odd thing to point out but the bellybutton proposal part was really cute and also kind of hot.

Kiritaba

Posted by Kiritaba 3 years ago Report

Well, considering it was one of the ideas we really loved when thinking up the conclusion, I wouldn't say that's an odd thing to point out! It's adorable, dorky...adorkable, if you will, but still heartfelt and genuine!