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Cryptic Replacement By PoserT -- Report

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Just a one-shot, I had the idea when recalling a few users talking about what appears in these sort of stories.

I gave it a shot and would like some feedback on it, if any of you can.

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thevideogamer99

Posted by thevideogamer99 3 years ago Report

this is pretty great, if you do continue it, maybe show how she fits into society or hides from it. another is a boyfriend of sorts could bring a twist as the girl's memories/emotions could affect the alien especially if its someone important. one more idea is maybe have something chase her? a bounty hunter maybe, or a MIB type agency.