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HNTBL 26: Don't Make the Same Mistake Twice By TheDragonBoy -- Report

Okay, well that wasn't the smoothest introduction, but at least it didn't end with Jack being swallowed- well... nevermind. At least now it's behind him! And now he's under Mrs. Lupella's watchful gaze in the safety of her own home, he should be safe now right? …Actually, can anyone else remember what happened last time he assumed he was safe just cause he was at Fiona's house?

Oh my goodness, titles are just the worst. Would you believe we literally wasted a week trying to come up with a title for this story? Like, the whole thing was ready to upload, except we couldn't think of a good name. We can write a whole series with plots and character arcs and everything, but we can't come up with a few words to use as a title? An old vore writer once wrote "God is a trickster; irony is his weapon". Well this is cosmic irony if I've ever seen it.

Anyway, here's the second part of Jack's weekend trip to Fiona's house. Cuteness, suspense, world-building, friendship, more handholding- oh and vore of course. Granny Bea continues her appearance (named after  tyrion13's werewolf character, but no relation). Let's see what she gets up to, huh?

As always, this instalment of HNTBL was written in collaboration with  x9comega. And you can find the rest of our series right here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/569713

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CakePisces

Posted by CakePisces 3 years ago Report

Holy moly now that was intense lol XD

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report

Yeah, I think that might be the closest Jack's ever come to getting gurgled.

CakePisces

Posted by CakePisces 3 years ago Report

And maybe not the last one too XD. Can't wait for more!

cloud8745

Posted by cloud8745 3 years ago Report

Two more very good chapters! Thank you for putting them out, and I look forward to seeing even more from this series! In particular, I'd love to see Sissy go on a hunt for a meal like she almost did in chapter 25.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report

Now that you've said that, I really like the idea of Sissy catching something that squirms in her belly, and Jack watching morbidly as she's relaxing, thinking "I was in there before... that could be me..."

cloud8745

Posted by cloud8745 3 years ago Report

Yeah, that'd be great!

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 3 years ago Report

Oh man that’s really good XD

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 3 years ago Report

Thirded :)

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 3 years ago Report

Not even admitting that she already tasted him and liked it... *sigh* Fiona bottling things up isn't healthy he already knows, besides it only makes spitting him out that much more meaningful.

As for Granny I think 'Anna needs to have a talk with her >.<

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report

I can never get enough of Sissy.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report

Also, just when I was wishing for another chapter featuring Jack taking another trip inside Sissy, you not only deliver just that, but the close call I also have been hoping to see. You are really spoiling me, dude :D

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report

When I saw your comment on the last one "I do wonder if Jack will ever take another trip into Sissy", I had to try *so hard* not to reply! XD Because *anything* I said would have given it away- I already had the whole thing ready to upload.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report

I do apreciate that :D
I really like chapters like this, so I hope this isnt't the last.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 3 years ago Report

We have big plans >:)

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report

Nice to hear that.

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

I heard rumors that Sissy WILL successfully devour and digest Jack soon.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

One can only hope :D

Nomad3628

Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report

I really would like to know more about the relationship between Winowa and Jack's parents.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Guess we'll have to see if/when that comes up in later stories.