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Doing Well By Cruich -- Report

Sophie Murray is not doing well in school, and she's about to find out that her mother has agreed to the school's drastic solution with the aid of her teacher.

I've had this one in the drawer for so long, I've had to update it to match our modern day.

5442 words.

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Uri

Posted by Uri 3 years ago Report

I'm sorry, but the timing of you posting this and the fact that I nearly started a fire because I forgot those stupid chines box containers had metal handles is just hilarious to me.

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 3 years ago Report

Synchronicity!

Genericcook

Posted by Genericcook 3 years ago Report

Love it! Casual can be so much fun!

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 3 years ago Report

Thanks! The feedback is much appreciated.

KaiserDunk

Posted by KaiserDunk 3 years ago Report

That final pun is an old one, but much appreciated.

BardicLasher

Posted by BardicLasher 3 years ago Report

Good to see more work from you! I loved your old stuff and then... 9 years of nothing!?!

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 3 years ago Report

Indeed, I'm working on finishing up another one that I've been sitting on since 2012.

kitzlig

Posted by kitzlig 3 years ago Report

Amazing story! I loved it!

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 3 years ago Report

Thanks! I hope you like my next one as well!

bronzelara

Posted by bronzelara 2 years ago Report

A rule more high schools should have. They should also sell dumb students like her and me at fundraiser auctions to help with the money problem.

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 2 years ago Report

I think that would be a good (and delicious) idea! ;)

theteen73

Posted by theteen73 2 years ago Report

I like casual but I also like the idea of factory cooking or resistance, I’m just imagining her trying to escape and them forcing her to be good, maybe bringing her to to a factory, the thought is so sexy to me.

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 2 years ago Report

You've got some good ideas, and I'm glad you enjoy this one on re-reads. The idea of girls helping with their own cooking or preparation in some way, with or without their knowledge, is a theme I come back to from time to time. :)

theteen73

Posted by theteen73 2 years ago Report

I keep re-reading this story, the idea of a normal high school girl preparing her one cooking tray without knowing and being cooked on it later is so amazing

SleepyIsland48

Posted by SleepyIsland48 2 years ago Report

I’ve never been interested in cooking before, but I decided to give this story a chance.

Well damn, I think I discovered a new kink. Nicely written!