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The full version of the story, which goes a different direction instead of the initial death Aiden experiences in the short version.
A young man gets more than he bargained for when he survives a voracious game with some monstrous creatures. Will he escape his kidnappers indigested, or will the call of the belly draw him in?
(Content warning: contains a nonconsensual act of intercourse)
(Length warning: this usually takes me at least a few hours to read; attempt at your own risk)
I honestly feel iffy on this one. I debated whether to put it up here or not. Partly because of how utterly long it is, partly because it feels like it's not very good in parts (seriously, what was I thinking with the characterization?! it's all over the place!), and partly because I thought I'd get around to making it better than it presently is. Part of me was also hesitant because this story was meant to be a more narratively interesting version of
Part of my hesitation was also (spoiler!)---------------
how I kind of dislike how the main character took a turn for losing his humanity and becoming a sort of monster himself.
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I also considered breaking this up into multiple parts before uploading, especially because that could help more people read it, but laziness and time constraints got in the way of that. You fellow authors also know how that is, ね?
I won't say this story is great, I won't say it's necessarily bad, but overall it's not the best thing that's come from my fingertips. Albeit, it's probably the best thing that came from my high school fingertips (yes, this story is that old). Enjoy it if you wish.
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Posted by Rentieros 2 years ago Report
How does this not have more interaction and views? Its absolutely fantastic. Hits all the right buttons with a horde of super powered girls eating people, the preys POV and the description of wanting to become one and lots of lewd stuff. Really great work dude.
Posted by NightRoller 2 years ago Report
Thank you for your kind words! I love this one (most of it) as well, though it's kind of niche in the overall community. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope some of my future stories will hit similar such buttons for you (when I actually have them finished ^-^").