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A man and his pregnant wife have gone to Africa for a tour. They don't realize they've caught the attention of a very hungry anaconda!
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Posted by DR Mabuse 3 years ago Report
Nice that the snake was allowed to eat a pregnant prey.
Posted by scag2807 3 years ago Report
I loved it!
Posted by AnnoyedNaturalist 1 year ago Report
This is 0.5/10 because you didn't put in Monty's pregnant mate suddenly coming in to eat Leon at the end, for dramatic irony. Anacondas and other boas are one of the many snake species that give live birth.
When I was looking in the anaconda tag, and saw a glimpse of the word 'pregnancy', I was excited to possibly see a pregnant anaconda pred, but was disappointed.
The fact that you included a hemipenis in the story is evidence you do know a little about snakes, which makes the omission even more disappointing.
And anacondas don't even live in Africa, boas and anacondas are native to the Americas.
Again, 0.5/10, almost completely zoologically inaccurate and full of missed opportunities.
Posted by saintheartwing 1 year ago Report
Ah, well, sorry you weren't happy with it.
Posted by MisterBad 1 year ago Report
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