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Voremance By Rat_Guy -- Report

So this story is a lot of things: it’s a prequel, it’s a sequel, it’s a remake, it’s a remix, it’s a continuation, it’s a conclusion, it’s a reimagining, it’s a reinterpretation, and it's a spinoff.

Two years ago I wrote some chapters for the Vore High interactive story here on Eka’s Portal. I wanted to create a vore oriented Tsundere romance story where the girl pred was very domineering and aloof, but the couple would eventually reach the point that they could trade the dominant and submissive rolls of pred and prey back and forth between each other and be equals.

I got about half way through writing that story two years ago and said to myself “I’ll get back to it eventually”. Cut to two years later, A.K.A. a couple weeks ago and I gave those old chapters I wrote a read and I thought it was actually some of the better writing I’ve done and I really wanted to finish it.

I decided I wanted to have the full story live as one document on my gallery, and after seeking some advice from people who read my blog I endeavored to both re-write the chapters that had lead up to my portion of the interactive story, and finally write the conclusion that I told myself I’d get back to. The project ballooned and became my longest story yet at just under nineteen-thousand words, and it will probably remain my longest story for a long long time.

Now I don’t want to give anyone the impression that I stole other people’s stories and am claiming them as my own, so let me clear: I did not copy any words from those chapters which proceeded mine, I reinterpreted and re-wrote them, they served only as a framework for the events depicted in this story you see here. But I do want to give credit to the original authors who inspired this story, and thank the people who rescued their content from Writing.com:

Thank you to hungrykitten
Thank you to NagaFood
Thank you to mrapple
Thank you to miesta
Thank you to nagabait
Thank you to subjectivity
Thank you to dragonman219
Thank you to Journeyman

And separate from that: I'd also like to thank temporos, and Justsomeone for their feedback.

If you liked this story you might enjoy the mini-sequel: Voremance: Snack Break
Or you can read the full sequel: Voremance 2

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thewatcherwhowatches

Posted by thewatcherwhowatches 7 months ago Report

Sorry if this comments not very good, I mostly lurk on this site but seeing this go without any comments on the day of posting is a shame.

Such a unique story with great use of many popular tropes, I found the pacing to be spot on.

Thank you for writing and posting it.

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 7 months ago Report

Thank you! I kept waiting and waiting all of yesterday for someone to comment!

I'm glad you thought the pacing was good, I wrote it out of sequence (which is a first for me) and I wasn't entirely sure each part would align with each other.

thewatcherwhowatches

Posted by thewatcherwhowatches 7 months ago Report

Well considering you wrote it in a style you've never done before the effort you put into this is on display.

Hopefully the tags bring in more commenters who can appreciate it.

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 7 months ago Report

Thank you! That is my hope as well.

BirchW

Posted by BirchW 7 months ago Report

I don't tend to leave comments but this story is just too good not to. Loved it heaps!

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 7 months ago Report

I'm really glad to hear that!

seeker39

Posted by seeker39 7 months ago Report

WOW!!
Great story!!
I can't believe a vore story could be so lovely.
Nice job !!

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 7 months ago Report

Thanks so much!

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 7 months ago Report

I still do not read this story but I will put it in my favorites to read later

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 7 months ago Report

Well, let me know what you think if you do read it.

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 7 months ago Report

I haven't finished the story yet, but I like what I've read. I like when pred play with prey

iwantuser

Posted by iwantuser 7 months ago Report

The first post I added to my favorites... I personally dislike digestion and death and all that, but this story is soo good. hope you make more stories like this

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 7 months ago Report

I'm honored to be your first.

Are you saying you didn't enjoy the threats about digestion in this story?

iwantuser

Posted by iwantuser 7 months ago Report

i enjoyed the threats, i dont enjoy when there is actual digestion.

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 7 months ago Report

Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but I released a continuation, and it's got digestion in it (; ̄ー ̄川 sorry...

HungryAL

Posted by HungryAL 7 months ago Report

Oh I loved reading this on the original Vore High. I don't remember there being this much though, so this was a lovely surprise.

Do you intend to write more at any point? I'd love for them to explore some other orifices, like reader wanting to see what her womb feels like or Amy being curious about relaxing in reader's balls~

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 7 months ago Report

I did really enjoy writing these two characters, and the other day I wrote down ten different sequel ideas. Each idea could potentially be a short vignette on it's own, or several of them could fit into a larger narrative.

I can promise that unbirth is on the table for future stories, but I'm not personally interested in cock vore so it's super unlikely I'd write that, sorry.

JackSpicer

Posted by JackSpicer 4 months ago Report

Holly shit this was amazing! Thank you so much for the work you do man. I just found this series today and I'm mindblown by the quality and passion. I'm in my mid 20s right now, but 8-9 years ago interactive stories on writing.com like this one in particular, and even your portions at the time, were some of my formative experiences. Crazy to see this. Fight the good fight, and I hope you get paid for some of your other writing.

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 4 months ago Report

Thanks a lot. Your comment made me feel better after the day I just had. Especially because you registered today and chose to leave your first comment here, that especially made me feel warm and fuzzy inside.

Though I don't think you read my submissions 8 years ago on writing.com, since I only added to the resurrected story that exists here on Eka's just 2-3 years ago.

And welcome to the Portal.

Matteo42

Posted by Matteo42 3 months ago Report

Okay I'm a bit late to the party and all that, but this gives me HUUGE vibes of something I read a while back (way before I made this account). I think it was some interactive story on this site, and the MC had to select between different "houses" in a school (like those in harry potter), and the ritual of acceptance was something like that

Regardless of my thoughts, I really enjoyed that! I'm not all that into M/F, but the way you build up to it and make it really feel like two people talking about those things just amazes me! Seriously, a round of applause!


okay now where is the favorite button again...

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 3 months ago Report

Thank you so much! And welcome to the party, the fun has only just begun. If you're less into M/F than I can recommend the sequels where there is still some, but there's significantly more F/F and F/M

Your instincts are spot on, this whole series spun out of the Vore High interactive story that original existed on writing.com, and then migrated to Eka's Portal. The full story of how it spun off, and a link to the Eka's Portal version, is in this story's description.

Matteo42

Posted by Matteo42 3 months ago Report

Oh, I hadn't checked the description, haha

Yeah so I binged the entire series, as you might have noticed by the comments I left here and there... "The fun has only just begun", meaning there's more to come? :D
oh god I'm already shivering at the thought of that XD

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 3 months ago Report

Yes, there's definitely more coming. I already have two more story ideas for Kiki. I don't know when I'll get around to writing them but they will be a thing at some point.

ImmortalPrey

Posted by ImmortalPrey 2 weeks ago Report

This story is amazing~ Not enough stories give you the first person perspective of predator, let alone a switch. The relationship in this story develops very naturally and turns out incredibly sweet. It's funny, it's clever and of course it's really hot. I love it~

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 2 weeks ago Report

Ah! Thank you so much! I hope you like the rest of the series too.