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Jake goes on a fantasy date with a snake and the inevitable happens.

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Yet another side effect of my chats with Toonvasion. He drew a toon snake that I couldn't get out of my head, so I threw her into the fantasy date setting.

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Drakeral

Posted by Drakeral 10 months ago Report

This is great and very well written! Very cute as well. I'd recommend fleshing out the tags, of course, since it's a bit short on them, but otherwise this was fantastic!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 months ago Report

Thanks!

KlinKitty

Posted by KlinKitty 10 months ago Report

Well, that was a fun li'l story!

Morphy

Posted by Morphy 10 months ago Report

Heeeey, I kinda recognize that snake. She reminds me so vividly of the one in the comic "Anaconda Davida". Although it was a bunny as her date, whom she absentmindedly swallowed-- the bunny still had her cel phone so she called the cops, they issue syrup of ipecac and the bunny gets horked up while the snake goes to jail. (Preditating without the proper paperwork?)

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 months ago Report

Interesting. "absentmindedly swallowing someone" is a thing that I dig.

Morphy

Posted by Morphy 10 months ago Report

If you like snake preds or just silly ideas about that, I highly recommend Anaconda Davida. There were two issues.

threk

Posted by threk 10 months ago Report

"No predation on the first date"
That changed pretty easily didn't it :P

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 months ago Report

That's what happens when you write a story and then think, "Eh, let me add some vore so I can post it on Eka's with a clear conscience."

threk

Posted by threk 10 months ago Report

Ahaha, you spoil us.
Do you post other, non-vore stories elsewhere?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 months ago Report

Very rarely. There's a few on DA, I think, and maybe one or two on FA. Mostly I either post them here regardless of vore content or I tack on a gulp.

threk

Posted by threk 10 months ago Report

Fair enough. Was wondering if I'd only managed to see the tip of the iceberg or something.

Morphy

Posted by Morphy 10 months ago Report

It doesn't count as predation if you don't digest them, right?

This is just, er, bondage... with an internal organ...

Pokeman

Posted by Pokeman 10 months ago Report

sexy as always

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 months ago Report

Thanks!

Nakteo

Posted by Nakteo 10 months ago Report

This was adorable! I loved the way it portrayed a reptile as being very "What? You produce this much heat all the time??? And it doesn't tire you out??? NANI?!?!?!!?" Very cool and fun to read. 10/10.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 months ago Report

Thanks!

MelonFelon

Posted by MelonFelon 10 months ago Report

Amazing story! But now i wonder what the date with the feline girl was like

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 months ago Report

It had been my intention to do one with her next but I forgot what my plan was.

Ev0nix

Posted by Ev0nix 10 months ago Report

This was inspired by that Oglaf comic wasn't it?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 months ago Report

I honestly can't remember if I read that comic before or after, but as it happens it was specifically inspired by an adorable snake lady Toonvasion drew.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 10 months ago Report

I was kind of hoping that it would go the other way, her finding a way to slip inside of him to get closer to the source of all that heat. Though it wouldn't take much more research to find out that any part of a mammalian digestive system is too quick to be hospitable for long, so maybe not. Then again, since her main concern is common to the whole species, she could decide to try a female human next time? Might even be her new partner that suggests that course, seeing as how snakes are a bit phallic.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 months ago Report

It was a tossup if she would go in him or he would go in her. There exists a version where neither happened and she just cuddles in his shirt the whole time. I for sure envisioned doing a second one where she comes to visit him during the winter and gets too cold and just slithers up into a lady and asks to be delivered to him, leading to a thruple.

Tassie

Posted by Tassie 10 months ago Report

This was so fun and tactile, it was like if Kaa from the Jungle Book was going on a civilized date instead of just hunting.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 months ago Report

I like tactile characters.

willowshat

Posted by willowshat 5 months ago Report

I need an entire spinoff about what that catgirl did with a glass of venom