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Here's something else I'm working on between commissions instead of the main series. I'll get back to this one over time, but for now, it's a standalone story. Also in present tense and first person, as I'm trying to branch out.

A normal day in the life of a lonely girl goes haywire when she finds herself under attack from someone who knows her a little too well. Will Brooke be able to escape, or is she destined to live on the hips of another woman?

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TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 13 days ago Report

Seems like our mystery abducter has been busy making kids out of others. But given we dont know what she looks like, this is just speculation

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 12 days ago Report

Maybe. But Brooke might also never get another chance to see her either.

threk

Posted by threk 13 days ago Report

Loving it! The pred using a heating element to get their prey/pet to struggle properly is a really neat idea.

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 12 days ago Report

Thank you! I just remembered that you're not supposed to use that kind of stuff when you're pregnant as it could hurt the baby and thought it would be a fun little torture device for Brooke.

PhantomOfMars

Posted by PhantomOfMars 12 days ago Report

Does anyone know of any similar stories? Or how to search for them myself? I avoid written work generally because it's so hard to tell where it will end up going and how.

This was a very fun read.

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 12 days ago Report

One of my biggest inspirations for this was Threk's detention and some older stories of Personad's that I can't remember the names of. Depending on what you found fun about it, I'd just look under those tags.

PhantomOfMars

Posted by PhantomOfMars 10 days ago Report

Thanks! I'll try work out how to find those. I appreciate the reply.

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 12 days ago Report

WHOOOO!!! GOLD STARS FOR THIS ONE!!!"
I want more!
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(NEW IDEA from reading this!!!)

NEW AS IN Something I have never seen or heard of in all my years on this sight!!!

What if she unbirths another girl for being nosey and the new addition is a closet UB fanatic who can't preform UB but is beyond turned on by the concept!

So In short, the new girl drives Brooke nuts with her sexual needy urges because she LOVES what has happened to her!

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 12 days ago Report

That's not a bad idea... I was debating giving Brooke a wombmate. Given what her long term plan is, more might not be a bad idea...

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 12 days ago Report

I'm really hoping to see a good ending much later on. Brooke stays herself and becomes part of the woman's family through a series of odd, perverse, and simi-upsetting events. Oh and I defiantly wanna see more tries at escape!
Something else I never get to see in stories is the predator struggling or having a problem after unbirthing someone. Like, their own body doesn't do as they want it to.
Perhaps something like an unknown time limit they can keep someone locked away. Or they have an accident that triggers their passengers birth.
I've wanted to see this kind of thing for some time now.

A woman unbirths someone unwilling, then sets about her normal everyday life all pregers. Everything is seemingly fine for a day or week until she suddenly feels her unhappy occupant coming out while she is some place public! ^^

LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 4 days ago Report

I'm going to guess on a scale. In theory; it's akin to "long/lifeterm sex toy", internally. At least, before if going long term clausticphobia nightmare wise, Brooke might eventually, 'give out' in despair, until she stops thinking... And then, likely at best, hoped to be 'compressed/absorbed'?

Alternatively, ended up addicted to sex. "First name" basis as a luxery... And becomes maddened/brainwashed into being her exact, willing sex toy? Possibly, to the point of willingly pushing/helping her uterus absorb others?

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 days ago Report

I'm not 100% sure at the moment, but at least for a bit, Brooke is going to be trying to figure out the secret identity of her captor while slowly being drip fed information through the walls that seem to contract and expand at will.

LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 4 days ago Report

I'm going to guess before odds of the captors children, being possibly past victims. One lens...

If a sequel comes out. On top of likely/possible 'cervix play' in her only 'escape' being completely sealed tight/shut 'eternally'. Wonder if you'd write a sequel, where Brooke steadily becomes more insane/mad in being trapped inside an unknown 'sack'/prison for eternity. Solidary Confinement wise? And what she'd react, if stuck with another 'surprise' womb mate, trapped forever?

Whatisaname

Posted by Whatisaname 4 days ago Report

I will say this though, her other children are not prior victims. They are biologically hers and her ex's kids.

Her Awakening is a bit different. More akin to Iz's unbirthing subvariant, but she has far more control over it.